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Reviews for Revenge

By : Kurokit
  • From alleycat88 on May 13, 2008
    MORE please! That bitch sakura...as soon as she gives birth I hope she dies right afterward! I hope the baby is Itachi's! ^.^ Thanks for updating!
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  • From squirrelc on May 13, 2008
    great chapter and good luck with tests
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  • From Nikana on May 12, 2008
    ....eh!...you didnt answer the main question...or it was just me?...maybe it was me,but if kyuu-chan was blocking sperm(whao,better than a condom^^) but...i dont know,maybe that night was special and he didnt do it? after all naru-chan was saying "bye bye" d.butt head!...oh hell! Itachi for president!(throw confetti) and dont be troubled,you update when you darn well feel like it(girl u put 6 on a row)u rock
    ja ne!O/_O
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  • From ANON - Charlie on May 12, 2008
    Please NO Ita/Naru/Sasu.
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  • From ANON - Charlie on May 12, 2008
    Don't kill Sakura. I think that's the easiest way out for her. I really want her to suffer a long painful life.
    I feel really bad for Sasuke now. Although, I still want Naruto to end up w/ Itachi. I hope he does.
    Thanks for the quick update.
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  • From JessicaHayes02 on May 12, 2008
    aww Pinkie is getting what she deserves *snirk* will this end up Ita/Sasu/Naru?
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  • From ANON - Gina on May 12, 2008
    Ohh, Saukra, your going to get it so bad! Go to you doom!*mohahaha*

    The moment i been waiting for, the rage of Sasuke when he finds out her plan!
    Oh glory! And i'm loving it - call me sadistic, but i'm loving it.
    Hm, it's really interesting that Kyuubi know that Sasuke was cheating.(God, that word tics me of so bad.)
    How, come he didn't tell Naruto? Or...wait, maybe he did? *goes back and read the fic again*
    Wonder what will happen to Sasuke and Naruto, I still when them to devoice... And i really can't see Sasuke with Sakura...(oh the HORROR)
    But "Big bro" is going to want to take care of his child..IF it is his child. Hell, it maybe Sasuke kid, or both!

    ohh, i'm so loving the drama!

    I'm all in to this fic, loving it to bit's!
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  • From twistedsavage on May 12, 2008
    I really like this story a lot, it reminds me of a soap opera. While the story has an excellent plot there are a few things that are off. One being the few gramatical mistakes throughout the story; however that can be fixed with a beta reader or by just proof reading it a few exra times. The second being the character development. Yes I understand Sakura bashing is a popular sport in fanfiction; however, it is not nesscary. There are ways to play with Sakura's personality without making her out to be a useless bitch. Even if Sakura used a few dirty tricks to get Sasuke, I am sure she would feel some kind of guilt. The thing taht people forget is that she is friends with both Sasuke and Naruto. I personally think if you gave Sakura a guilty conscience you'll be slightly more truthful to the character. And not only that but you'll be giving her some actual character depth and not keeping her as a one dimensinal character. I hope you don't find my comment offensive in anyway; I'm just trying to be helpful and not rude :)
    p.s good luck with finals
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  • From morbidsockpuppet on May 12, 2008
    I love you!
    Great story!
    And CONSTANT updates!
    :)

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  • From gaara89 on May 12, 2008
    I really like this story, and I think you should just ignore flames like that. A lot of people don't seem to understand that even if the character was written as a prideful, cold bastard...they are still human. Human beings will always have emotions and have to make difficult decisions as long as they live. I didn't' read the story in question, but honestly people don't seem to understand that REAL people have multiple angles to their personalities. They are not two-dimensional. And furthermore...that person who wrote the flame has no idea what Sasuke would do in any situation. They did not create Sasuke and Kishimoto could come out with a chapter doing whatever you did and no one would question it for a second. So the point is basically ignore flames like that...well any flames, because if they're flames then they are not constructive criticism. Those things are two different things all together. I think you're doing a great job with this story, and I do think Sasuke dancing around in a pink tutu would be quite entertaining no matter how OOC it was. Who knows, that could be a secret fetish of his, it's always the quiet ones.
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  • From coldXrainX1891 on May 12, 2008
    That Bitch.
    seriously i hate sakura. whats going to happen between Naruto
    and Itachi? what about Sasuke?...questions questions....
    anywho this chap was excelent as usual! I hope you find time
    to update while studying. I know i try to study but i am
    EASILY distracted. especially by shiny objects...
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  • From rerickson1983 on May 12, 2008
    Please, update one more time before studying, I'm dying to know what's going to go down between Sasuke and Sakura. But it seems that Naruto is letting Sasuke off the hook now, and that's not right. I hope it's Itachi's baby.
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  • From ItaNarulover on May 12, 2008
    Ahh, what a cliffy!! A wanna read more!!! *whining* Keep up with the good work, as alwyas.. Take care. Hugs
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  • From Nikana on May 12, 2008
    Oh-my-god!(imagine Janice's voice from FRIENDS here) you are SO BRILLIANT,and so cruel,and i dont know what to say,i mean,theres nothing to say either that O_o three weeks pregnant!!! of whom? 'cause the night before he was with duck butt head and the next day with sex god all mighty weasel-san(aka itachi)and (muahahah am hysterical now)and the pink thing its too and....foxy? you know what? i love u girl^^
    and if these are the images in front of your eyes could you imagine a nice and chubby kyuubi...well then its yours *_^...am so sappy
    byeee!
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  • From ANON - Kang on May 12, 2008
    lololol Awww, I can't help but feel sorry for Sasuke in all this. Sakura lied to him about Naruto's man-uterus and started all this DRAMA, and now Naruto's leaving him for his psychotic brother and he's stuck with a pregant hooker. ... Mmmm, and just wondering, is there a particular reason Naruto--the Hokage--isn't more concerned about the fact that Itachi is a wanted criminal because he's a murderer and a sociopath? Not that he isn't charming and all, but one would think the safety of the village's general public might be an issue, what with Itachi's history of randomly snapping and going on a mass murdering rampage.... Anyway, I look forward to a new chapter.
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