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By : Kurokit
  • From ANON - animelover on May 17, 2008
    i'm glad sakura came to her senses ... better late than never, and i'm glad to see naru isn't rushing off to be with sasuke. i can't remember if this was a itanaru fic, so if it is YEA!!!!!!

    the "one baby sasuke and one baby itachi" is quite the twist ... luvin' every minute of it! hahaha!

    take car and see ya next time!
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  • From MissMayumi on May 17, 2008
    You said you needed a beta..right?

    I can help with grammar..and possibly ideas.

    Email me, if you like =]

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  • From spoon10488 on May 17, 2008
    'But that night meant different things for the two.

    One was desperately trying to erase the touch of a stranger.

    The other was simply saying goodbye.'


    Very Poetic.
    =)
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  • From ANON - Ookima on May 17, 2008
    you big meanie!
    I am so hooked to this story I check everyday!
    the angst, the plot, the Sakura bashing
    I love it!
    Continue soon onegai!
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  • From blueh on May 17, 2008
    Why did you stop?? NoOoOoOoOo~

    Haha. It's getting very interesting. Twins? Who would have thought?! :D I can't wait to read what's next.
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on May 17, 2008
    mmmmmm.... You won't write soon?:(
    Well thanks for the chapter then! I really can't wait to read the next one (but I will), and I really like the pairing!
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  • From Nikana on May 17, 2008
    Are you for real???? OY MY FUCKING GOD!!!! breathe in...breathe out....now am calmed!
    I know thats this is a fic but...double DNA codes are pretty imposible even in fanfics...heck! what am talking about??? You are great, how did you manage to fulfill halve of your readers requests its only my guess,but you did ^^ (pouts)but I wanted them all for Itachi chan(have you read chapter 400 of the manga? cause I dont wanna do spoilers, but Itachi its my idol even more now XP)
    And Sakura sulking? well am a sakura bashing fan so...might as well rot in the Uchiha mansion that I wouldnt bat an eyelash^^
    And the last thing: y-o-u a-r-e a-n EVIL CLIFFHANGER just so you know that we know that you are ¬¬
    ja ne!
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  • From coldXrainX1891 on May 17, 2008
    Now that was one hell of a twist, im not gonna lie.
    Excellent chapter and i can't wait til the next one!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 17, 2008
    Great chapter!
    update!
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  • From ANON - Ash on May 17, 2008
    I don't want Naruto to forgive Sakura. I think she has to live w/ her deception. Just like Sasuke has to live w/ his.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2008
    Aaaaaaaaah!
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  • From dino1 on May 17, 2008
    Thar's an evil cliffy!!! So Naruto is having Twins.
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  • From rerickson1983 on May 17, 2008
    Naruto is still cutting Sasuke and Sakura some slack for their deception. He's practically getting away with his betrayal. And having one of the babies be Sasuke's is only going to cement the Uchiha's determination to make the blond his.

    There is a way to have Itachi be re-instated as a Konoha shinobi, and cleared of all crimes:





    *MAJOR SPOILERS!!!*





    It is revealed in Chapter 400 of the Naruto Manga that Itachi was ordered by the Third Hokage to eliminate the Uchiha Clan.

    Full details here if you're interested:

    http://groups.msn.com/NarutoMangaReturns/chapter398.msnw
    http://groups.msn.com/NarutoMangaReturns/naruto399.msnw
    http://groups.msn.com/NarutoMangaReturns/chapter400.msnw

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  • From Kodos on May 17, 2008
    Aww, no sex for Naruto?? The Uchihas could always share him...rebuild their clan together as one big happy family... haha. Well, I enjoyed the update, and good for Itachi not standing for Naruto stepping out on him. When will Sasuke find out "the other man" is his hated enemy? Dun dun DUN! I look forward to another update.

    Oh! Also, since you got so cheesed you addressed it in this story, I'll have you know my comments on your other story were hardly a flame. Flames are just nasty name-calling and idiocy; your other story was really out of character and I called it like I saw it. Of course you can "basically make Sasuke dance in a pink frilly tutu" but don't think you're getting away with it. Most people, myself included, will just ignore a fic like that when they come across it. I chose to not ignore it because I was rubbed the wrong way with how humiliated, weak, and fatalistic Sasuke was in that other fic. I'm not dense; I picked up on the whole "maybe now that Naruto and Sasuke have met up, their future will be a little brighter!" vibe, but you clearly and repeatedly made the point that Sasuke was so weak compared to Itachi he could never escape, and even if he did, the rest of the world was dominated by equally crazy and powerful Akatsuki members, so basically Sasuke was figuratively and literally screwed for life. By his sadistic rapist brother. And Sasuke's pride would allow Itachi the pleasure of controlling him forever. Riiiiight. If that's what you think, that Sasuke would live like that rather than die with his pride intact, then okay, I guess we will just disagree. I just think it was an unnecessarily cruel and degrading fanfiction. At least if Sasuke "secretly" enjoyed being Itachi's pet or something then it could have been an enjoyable Uchiacest fic. As it was, it just seemed like distasteful rape. Hey, but as far as I know, maybe that's what you were going for! *shrugs* If it makes you feel any better, I like *this* story.

    ~Kang
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  • From ANON - dyessie on May 16, 2008
    holy shit. damn you sakura. ur baby will die. i just knew it. haha and naruto's baby should be itachi's since he had his way first so that would only mean the his seed reached kyuubi first before sasuke's did. am i making any sense? i believe i am haha. so its itachi's! weeee... hahaha its your stupid fault sasuke so deal with the consequences. itanaru is the best Ü itachi come back haha. if the baby is tachi's, i wonder how the couple's life would be since tachi is a missing nin. awww.
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