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By : Kurokit
  • From ANON - viper mix8 on June 10, 2008
    That left me on the edge of my seat! Please update! You really did a wonderful job, but I wouldn't let Sasuke know about Itachi just yet (and make Sakura pay a little bit more XD). I just want to picture his face when he finds out the baby isn't his! The baby isn't his right?
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  • From HannaFO on June 10, 2008
    thanks for the update :D
    I like the whole idea with Itachi and Sasuke being the father of only one of the twins :D
    And the scrole?! I think i know what it says :D
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  • From ANON - animelover on June 09, 2008
    nah, don't rewrite this chapter, just move on forward honey chile! LOL! i wanna see what happens when sasuke finds out one of the kids belongs to itachi. yeah, baby, let the angst and the fur flyin' begin! WHEEEE!!!
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  • From coldXrainX1891 on June 09, 2008
    ok i just wanted to say to all the people that say that this fic
    is way OOC, this is a FANFICTION in the yaoi section....yeah i think
    the characters are going to be OOC.
    i just wanted to say that....and that this is one of the better
    ita/naru fics i've read so far. and i have read A LOT of them.
    I love it.
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  • From coldXrainX1891 on June 09, 2008
    I MISSED YOU AND YOUR STORY!.....yeah.*cough*

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  • From on May 26, 2008
    *wail of despair* I can't believe you stopped right there! You sadist!
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  • From ANON - Alie on May 24, 2008
    Please I'm begging you. Don't let her be w/ Sasuke.
    She still need to pay for her crimes.
    She should not have a happy ending.
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  • From ANON - Ish on May 22, 2008
    I love this.
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  • From ANON - Gina on May 18, 2008
    My my! I knew he was having twins! And That one would be from Itachi and one would be Sasuke's!
    Or else the DNA wouldn't be that similar!:D
    Myehaha, The drama - and it suets you right Saukra. To plot a evil plan against your friend is just wrong on so many levels. It was all selfish of her... and now she wants forgives...bah, the nerve.

    Nice chapter! Loving the drama!:D

    Hope to see more soon

    //Gina
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  • From ANON - dyessie on May 18, 2008
    btw, dont mind the 'opposition' telling craps. its your idea, its your fic. so if they dont like what youre doing, they can quit reading. youve got lots of fans, you dont need them.
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  • From ANON - dyessie on May 18, 2008
    so.. naruto has a twin. one for sasuke and one for itachi. what the heck haha. come on, how will itachi and sasuke deal with that knowing that they both dont like "sharing". as i remember, itachi told naruto about the uchiha possessiveness. gosh naruto, what shall you do now? haha. sasuke is the father and partner of two mothers. nyee.. its so.. complicated. and itachi is a missing nin.. how.. how.. i mean how the hell he could stay with naruto. and sasuke.. i think you should just go on with your life without bothering the most awesome pairing of all time.. haha oh i know, what about he'll just take his baby from naruto saying he cant stand his brother being near his child? and since naruto dont want him anymore, he'll leave him to his happiness and just take care of the only remembrance he has of naruto. Ü


    hey sakura! you haven't commited suicide?! go on! i know you can do that! cant you see im cheering for you?? we all do! please dont let us down.. T_T come on dude please! its for the sake of humanity! cant you do something selfless for a cause? ^_^ really?? its a yes?? good.
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  • From Elli on May 18, 2008
    I started reading this story with high hopes. Itachi/Naruto is never easy to write, but it can be done, and I had been hoping you’d show me a decent time. It pains me to say that honestly, all this fic managed to do was make me laugh at the sheer OOC-ness.

    Your writing in itself is respectable. You have a few tense problems and some punctuation that’s a bit off here and there, but over all, it’s easy and enjoyable to read. The real problem I have with your fic is the complete ridiculousness of the plot.

    You didn’t list it as a crack!fic so I’ll have to assume that you wrote this with the intention of providing serious reading material. But after nearly snorting and giving my nose an enema with orange soda after reading the first chapter, I can say with confidence that that is not how it came across AT ALL.

    The beginning was understandable. Sasuke cheated on Naruto for whatever reason and Naruto was fed up. Following you so far. Naruto goes to the training grounds to nurse his broken heart and shed a few tears. Yep, makes sense. Itachi comes out of nowhere and they start having sex. Yeah, yeah, I get it--- wait, WHAT?! Let me say that again just so I can get my incredulity at this across. WHAT?!

    I love how you tried to add some realistic interaction by having Naruto scream once and go, “No, you’re not going to get Kyuubi!” before sitting down and letting Itachi 1) have a lengthy discussion with him concerning his and Sasuke’s love life and 2) screw him into the ground. Maybe I’m just confused, but… are we talking about the same Itachi here? S-Class missing nin Itachi? Yeah-so-I’m-a-mass-murderer Itachi? If so, why is Naruto bending over and taking it, again?

    That was a rhetorical question, by the way. I know you probably have some sort of explanation for this, but the point of my little rant was that the author shouldn’t have to answer the reader’s complaints and questions. The story should do that for you. And this one… didn’t. Really, really didn’t.

    I hope you don’t take *too* much offense, because in all honesty, I AM just trying to help you out in your future endeavors. I know I poked (more than a bit of) fun at you and the story, but it’s all in good humor. I wouldn’t write this long and detailed of a review if I didn’t think you could improve and write something better – and I do. I really do think you’re capable of something much better than this.

    So keep writing and much love,

    Ella

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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 18, 2008
    Not related to the story, but I did want to comment. There is a difference between a flame and criticism, whether you want that criticism or not. I only comment because nobody seems to know what a real flame is anymore. A flame is not just anything negative or anything that you don't want to hear. A flame is something that has no real connection to the story and are just mindless insults with no point, or no real criticism involved. Just done for the sole purpose of putting the author down.
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  • From spoon10488 on May 18, 2008
    Ahhhh! DO you know how long I've been waiting for some to write a fic that had twins born from both Uchiha's?! This is like a dream come true! I love the plot line of this story. Sakura's a witch but it is nice that she seems to regret what she's done. Maybe Naruto can find it in his heart to forgive her or at least prevent Sasuke from killing her. I can't wait to read more.
    =)
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  • From Madamdragon on May 17, 2008
    Good point! I guess I would give Naruto a second chance...dont think I'd trust Itachi though! But Wow 2 fathers. Wonder how that'll work out! Update soon please!
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