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Reviews for Naruto's Popularity on the Rise

By : zigawits
  • From Maelstrom on May 18, 2008
    That was interesting how you youthicized Tsunade. I going to suggest Anko and Ayame for the harem.
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  • From Ravenian on May 18, 2008
    Great story! More dirty talking please! ;)

    You could add Anko and/or Kurenai to the harem as well. And maybe the Nibi Jinchuuriki (2-tailed cat) Nii Yugito too. Keep it up!
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  • From CryoBlaze on May 18, 2008
    An addition to my previous review. While some people have mentioned having Anko be with Naruto (and sometimes I don't have a problem with it), in the case of your story I think she'd be better with someone else. The reason is that Anko should be with someone who can be in a full relationship with her, not one where she can be cast aside (if Naruto was allowed to marry the other women this wouldn't be a problem). Instead I say maybe stick her with Iruka, since he has a chance to understand her both through his own lonliness and seeing Naruto grow up. While it is true Anko and Naruto have had harder lives, I ruka knows like them what it's like to not have anyone that can be there for you all the time (I don't count Sasuke due to the fact that he could have joined any family he wanted to and yet he refused).

    Also if Anko was with Iruka who is kinda like a big brother/father figure to Naruto, then she could tease him and help him with any questions/problems he might have with the women he's with (since some of the women he'd ask, he can't just go and ask them due to being in a relationship with them).
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  • From dr4gonia on May 18, 2008
    Pretty good so far, not to much or to little sex , even though I am still waiting for a moresome (which I am pretty sure will come any minute now ^_^.) I was a little turned off by naru/tsun but now that she practically has turned 25 I guess I can get used to it. I nominate ten-ten and temari.
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on May 18, 2008
    Awesome chapter update soon.

    1.Anko
    2.Shizune
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  • From Jien on May 18, 2008
    The harem's cool :3 In a yaoi lover's POV that'd be helpful for the Uchiha clan too :))
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  • From Schrodinger on May 18, 2008
    Good story can't wait for hawt Hana action XD
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  • From JyubiRyu on May 18, 2008
    I would like to suggest these 3 girls:
    Tenten(She just needs more love cause Neji SURE as HELL ain't doin it.)
    Temari(I know she's not a Konoha-nin but Naruto's dad and her dad could have had an agreement that 1 of their kids would marry each other and I know it's an over-used cliche(SP?) for this pair)
    Shizune(Adds a bit of Taboo to it.)
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  • From DragonMan220 on May 18, 2008
    Well beyond the harem I'm kind of out of ideas... aside from princess Yuki from the first Naruto movie, that would strengthen the bonds between Konoha and Spring country by having Naruto give her a kid. I'd like to see Hinata and Hana dominate Sakura and Ino, the domination scene was great and I want to see some more light bondage!
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  • From KaelHyun on May 18, 2008
    TENTEN!!!
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  • From CryoBlaze on May 18, 2008
    Well I like how you explained Tsunade was young again. And as for no female Kyuubi that's understandable (since in your story Kyuubi is a part of Naruto now). As for other traits though of Naruto's bloodline I think would be increased healing, stamina, chakra reserves and senses (also due to the Kyuubi's merger with him). As for other women to add to the harem for Naruto, I have two picks (in order of importance), they are: Nii Yugito (please let Nibi's jincuuriki live) and Uzuki Yugao (having an ANBU around to help protect the children would be nice).

    As for the Council another reason they wouldn't be upset with Naruto and Tsunade's little romp is the fact that the Hokage is now in her prime again with all of her knowledge. That would make her a much more powerful and effective Hokage (since she would be able to retain the position for a longer time before she had to choose a successor, or chose to resign to let someone else become Hokage).

    Anyways let's see what happens next.
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  • From canath on May 18, 2008
    What about Tsunami that way Inari can join the clan also and they whould actually have more than Naruto the women and the babys in his clan
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  • From on May 18, 2008
    Best. Story. Ever.

    you plot is great, the Naruto and Hinata here are very cute [and hot] and the InoSaku, just brilliant, surprising and hot.
    Your lemons are too great! i can't read this without relieving myself shortly after!

    Hope you update again soon, but i can wait :)
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  • From candycrys on May 17, 2008
    found the story and loving it. please, please for the love of god please, put Anko in this. I just love her and Naruto together ^_^
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  • From Coldstone on May 17, 2008
    Hmm.

    Nice turnabout. I like your idea.

    As for suggestions: Well, I think that Hana, Sakura and Ino are set.

    So as for suggestions: No 1: Anko Mitarashi
    I think she had a similar past as Naruto. As Orochimarus Apprentice and she got abandoned by him, she may have faced a similar treatment, so it would be nice to make something good to her, if you know what I mean.

    No 2: Hanabi Hyuga eventually? Well I know that she might be somewhat underage, but she is one of my fave characters. ^^ Ten ten is out of the question imo, since she is with Neji as a matter of fact.

    If Hanabi is too young for your taste, maybe Temari instead? But I think she should be with Shikamaru.

    So I think if not Hanabi, it should be Shion.

    I do not know if you saw the shipuuden movie allready allthough, but these are my suggestions:


    1. Hanabi (Yes, I would want her above Anko)
    2. Shion, if Hanabi is too young
    3. Anko
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