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By : pencilcupcake
  • From ANON - ... on November 09, 2008
    Okay you know what? Just stop it. I was willing to give this a chance but your chapters have no flow, its another pathetic cliche everyone and their mother is doing, and then you suddenly want to change it to make it fucking bats and wolves? Just stop it! if I could, I would erase the fact that I wasted my time reading this shit. Practice how to REALLY WRITE and maybe, jsut fucking maybe you'll have a decent story. but the chances of that happening is when Hell opens its gates for world ice skating rings and heaven opens its gates as a free whore house.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 09, 2008
    Very interesting. I'm glad that you're back writing this. I had really enjoyed it.
    I loved the prank war between Sasuke and Itachi. I supposed Pein is in charge of Akatsuki. A united Uchiha and Naruto gang would be freaking awesome.
    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2008
    I think you should go back to the original plot. It was so exciting and had tons of promise. I feel pretty ambivalent about this restart.
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  • From ANON - SpacePirateDol on July 08, 2008
    Oh, and btw, I think you gave me the COOLEST idea for a crossover fic.

    I'm not gonna say of what, I don't want to jinx it.
    But yeah... omg I'm gonna go crazy over this.
    I guess I should thank you in a way? xD

    So, erm--thanks? :hugs:
    =3
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  • From ANON - SpacePirateDoll on July 08, 2008
    Hmm...

    Well, I remember reading this when there was only the character profiles.
    Annnnd, yeah.
    It fairly interested me, but now it being NaruNeji... yeah, no.

    Plus I don't think I can sit through your typos and errors, I highly suggest you get a beta reader.

    And even then, I don't really know, this idea feels like it has potential, but somehow it seems like you're not portraying it right.

    Sorry if I'm coming off as rude or bitchy, but that's just my 2 cents.
    I don't mean to offend; only for you to hopefully grow from it.

    SasuNaru(Sasu) is SO not overrated ]=
    Over-written, yes, but its the only reason I even aknowledge this series anymore.

    lol Nevertheless, have fun on your vacation~
    And I wish you the best of luck~
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  • From ANON - blur on July 08, 2008
    Wow! a NaruNeji! but i would prefer NejiNaru. ^_^ Naruto is so cute as an Uke. But whoever is the Seme is ok as long as the two are in it.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 08, 2008
    I'm curious to see how NaruNeji will work out since Sasuke clearly has a claim on Neji.
    NaruSasu is NOT overrated!! It's one of the best pairings out there *sniffs*
    But NaruNeji is still pretty hott... *waggles eyebrows* I love Neji...
    Have fun in Trinidad!




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  • From ANON - Devils-Advocate3 on July 07, 2008
    Damn, that sucks. Sigh. & was really starting to love this story. I couldn't wait to see what was going to happen next....O well. Say La ve. ^-^
    Just so you know, I'm really not a Seme Naruto Fan. & I'm very limited & picky on my _xNaru Stories. I read most SasuxNaru, half GaarxNaru & few others for Uke Naruto... But what ever I read Naruto is almost always the Uke. Sorry. But like I said, I'm picky. ~_~" (Giggle)
    Anyway, Guess that's it for me. Wish you luck on your story. Later.
    Kisses ^-~
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  • From Sabriel20 on May 23, 2008
    I like that idea. I mean the chapters as is are really good.
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  • From ninjagirl on May 23, 2008
    NOooooooo! please keep it like you had it please? There are so many vampire/werewolf stories and your original mafia one had a really good hook! But *sigh* if you must change it I will of course support you and read/review your new story even though I think your original is kick ass!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on May 22, 2008
    Interesting shift...kinda like Underworld ^_^ But I'm sure yours will have much more steamy smut ;-) Can't wait to see where you go with it!
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  • From ANON - anti on May 22, 2008
    NO PLEASE.

    NO VAMPIRES, OR LYCANS, OR WEREWOLVES, PLEASE.

    ;__; That'd just make this trite and cliche and it was already good, the way it was!

    Now you're just gonna add a useless plot twist, that's going to be like every other Vampire/Werewolf novel out there.

    Please?

    For your fans, please no?
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  • From ANON - Devils-Advocate3 on May 22, 2008
    Huh. I get it. Your going to make it kind of like the movie underworld. Huh...cool. I love that movie. I have both of them. Can't wait to see what you write. Also, I know your probably not going to do this, but is doesn't hurt to ask right?...You see when ever people write a Naruto fiction involving vampires & werewolves they always make Sasuke a vampire & Naruto a werewolf. & although I completely understand why they do that, Trust me I do, I still can't help but think that Naruto would make a chillingly, beautiful vampire. Sigh. Wouldn't you? I mean think about it. Wearing those dark skin tight clothing, with a bit of black eye liner under his eyes, you know, to bring out those beautiful blue eyes I love so much. Lol ^-^ I get chills just thinking about it. Sigh. Plus it would be something king of different, you know. A little twist go give people a little whiplash. Lol ^-~. But again that’s just me. I completely understand if you don't, it was just a little suggestion. Anyway, Thanks for listening. & I can't wait to see/read what you write (Giggle) May your story or chapter be realest soon. Can't wait. Later.
    Kisses. ^-~
    P.S. Good luck. ^-^
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  • From ANON - blur on May 06, 2008
    wow!!!!! But this chpt is really too short!!!! Maybe more converstaion between Naruto and Sasuke will be better.
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  • From blugirlami21 on May 05, 2008
    I wish you had wrote more but if you update quickly then it's ok. I laughed out loud when I read that Iruka was in the Uzumaki gang and I thought that you would put Kakashi on the Uchiha gang, that would have been a great balance. I loved reading about they were wanted for and just who you picked to be in which gang, I wonder who Ino's husband is? It will be interesting how you utilize some of the other characters in the Narutoverse, maybe some of them can be cops or even lawyers, there are quite a few things that you can play around with. Loved that cliffie, I wonder who shot who. I love gang stories, there should definitely be more and I think I will like yours very much.
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