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Reviews for Hunter

By : Zelha
  • From Yzaklover on December 07, 2014
    What a wonderful story! So well written and well thought out! I was on the edge on my seat the entire time!!!!! The one criticism I can give you is when your story was published it had a lot of code in it,* style='mso-ansi-language:EN-US'>** I found that a little annoying because it was attached directly to the word following it. Other than that it was great! Don't worry about English not being your first language, it isn't mine either, you did wonderfully! I never had trouble understanding what you were writing nor did I find any errors! Rest assured I will be reading your other stories!
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  • From wolfpup on June 30, 2012
    I was greatly impressed with this story. I felt you kept Naruto's character perfectly and I never once felt the characters drift away from their published personalities. I hated the fact you killed some of my favorite characters, but I also felt that the story would not have been as great as it is without their deaths. I loved the ending. It was not an overly cheesy long ending nor was it rushed. Greatly impressed with your writing abilities and look forward to reading more of your stories.
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  • From ANON - layden on March 01, 2011
    I can't put into words how much I enjoyed this story. I can't believe English isn't your first language. By the first 3 chapter I had already concuded that your English is waaaay better than mine lol. I really love this story and your writing is spectacular. This is by far the best ItaSaku story that I've read ever. Its perfect and your actions scenes kick ass. I'm really glad I read this story.
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  • From ANON - Enigma on February 07, 2011
    All I really have to say is that this story was brilliantly written. I enjoyed it all thoroughly.
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on December 16, 2010
    Awesome story! Brought a few tears to my eyes...
    I love how different life turned out, due to one decision Itachi made or did not make... Amazing how some events still occurred while others did not. All because of Itachi.

    Sakura, I loved reading about her trails and tribulations! I love how she 'evolved'.
    I love your perspective and creativity!

    good luck,
    Cannot wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Ashwini on September 06, 2010
    Hey Zelha!
    Despite the fact that english isn't your first language, you've done a spectacular job with all your fanfics. I loved all of 'em :) A shoutout to your betas too (very few people appreciate the betas in the reviews). Can't wait for your next fic!!
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  • From daughterofvirgo on August 30, 2010
    Awesome story. I loved Sakura, and how super-strong she was. She was exactly how I would expect Tsunade's apprentice to be. I think you captured my ideal Sakura perfectly. Thank you. This is definitely one of my favorite stories on here and over on fanfiction.dot. Thanks again for this wonderful story. :)
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  • From tobiasrosetta on July 24, 2010
    I've become incredibly invested in this story! I'm REALLY loving the slow growing relationship between Itachi and Sakura, instead of the *Insta-Love* reflex that is so common. I'm looking forward to your next chapter
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on June 08, 2010
    thank goodness you updated. this fic is going great. keep up the great work and update soon
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  • From ANON - Imortality3 on May 09, 2010
    You're incredible, and your stories are wonderful sinfully indulgent reads. I am looking forward to your next chapters.
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  • From Bluedragon5544 on May 05, 2010
    Just got done reading all 11 chapters of this story and I love it. Update when you can great job so far.
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  • From theklvkid2 on April 23, 2010
    This cliffie isn't beautiful; it's gorgeous. Wonderful job! Looking forward to more!

    klv
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  • From Sheemashelin on April 19, 2010
    I randomly chose to read this and I am glad that i did. ^^ Aside from a few missing words I throughly enjoy this story. I hope to see the next chapter very soon. Glad to see another person that doesn't make Saukra a complete idiot that is usueless. I am not the hugest fan of hers but that has more to do with that fact that she doesn't get much play and when she is involved I feel like she doesn't do much. I always like to read fics that have her being the strong woman I suspect her to be. Sad that you got rid of Sai.... I love Sai... *sniff*

    Seriously though I want to see the next chapter soon. Until then!

    P.S. Yes very beautiful cliffy I very much aprove even as I went WTF!! NYU~~~ lol
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  • From ANON - Anemone on April 19, 2010
    >/ update soon?
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  • From perihawk on November 09, 2009
    You've certainly got my interest piqued. Kind of on the edge of my seat for more.
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