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Reviews for Why Does This Have To Happen To Me?

By : lenore123
  • From gaara89 on May 03, 2008
    My email is aangelangel189@aol.com, feel free to email me if you want help!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2008
    Lol, actually I thought the end of the chapter was pretty good but I hate cliff-hangers, they're so mean! Anyway, it's a pretty good story and I really enjoyed it, I wasn't too sure about Sasuke's reaction at the end, I mean he betrays Naruto and then has the nerve to get upset after - I'd have said they were even after that - so hitting him was like :-O Anyways, update soon ;)
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  • From sorryprpkitty on May 02, 2008
    I love the plot but you REALLLLLLLLLY need a beta. With the grammar and spelling mistakes it kind of distracts from the story and it's a good one.
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  • From taiintatsu88 on May 01, 2008
    wow what a story is good i cant wait for the next cahp please update soon if possible thanks :)
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  • From gaara89 on May 01, 2008
    Well this seems like it could be a very good story. But...I think you should get a beta. There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes, and you could definately use some more details. So, it's not bad, and this is in no way meant to be a flame. I just think that you should have someone read it over and fix all the mistakes before you post the next chapter, and definitely edit this first one. Over all, it could be very good, and I am interested. If you need help, don't hesitate to email me.
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