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Reviews for Devil's Own

By : yasha1215
  • From on July 21, 2008
    This story is really intense and emotionally charged! You've done a brilliant job with your plot and you really keep the reader on the edge wondering whats going to happen next! I can't wait to read more! I hope Sasuke and Naruto work out their many problems and finally be together! I'll be looking forward to your next update!
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  • From pinklemonade5678 on July 14, 2008
    awwww that was sooooo great!!!! please review! i'm in tears right now, OMG what a wonderful story you have made! it's the kind of story i've been looking for!

    I'm m now one of your biggest fan!!!!

    PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOONNN!!!!!
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  • From Bookworm51485 on June 11, 2008
    I wouldn't have minded seeing this story for Gravitation, I could see it actually fitting really well with Shuichi and Eiri. Eiri's kind of gruff and mean but also you can see that he loves Shuichi. And Shuichi is also a bit too innocent (though not as bad as Ayase) and really forgiving. Now I kind of wish I could see it for Gravitation.

    For this story though, I like that you're not following the storyline of the manga exactly. A lot of people have done adaptations of other stories but aren't original enough in how they do it. But that's not a problem here. I have to say about the ending, if they had to have gotten caught running away, this is the perfect way for it to be done. They at least have a reason outside of, we're in love and we're running away, which I'm pretty sure I can say wouldn't fly with Sasuke at all and would probably bring about the most vicious of consequences. But Sakura is trying to kill me is a pretty good reason and hopefully neither Sai nor Naruto will be too hurt by Sasuke.
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  • From OrochiGreel on May 23, 2008
    THAT PINK-HAIRED BITCH NEEDS TO DIE!! SASUKE IS NARUTO'S NOT HERS! AND SASUKE BETTER HAVE A GOOD EXPLAINION FOR LEAVING NARUTO WITH THAT STUIPD SHE-DEVIL OR ELSE WE'LL RIP HIM A NEW ONE!
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  • From charmpit on May 18, 2008
    All right! Naruto stands up for himself! Good for him!

    Itachi is a weasel and Sasuke is just full of shit. Nothing new there.

    Naruto is going to have to teach both of them valuable lessons.
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  • From charmpit on May 12, 2008
    Let me just say that Okane ga Nai is one of my favorite yaoi anime EVER!

    Please keep the chapters coming!
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  • From dragon04 on May 03, 2008
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like how the story is goiung.
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  • From gaara89 on May 01, 2008
    Seems interesting so far, do continue.
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  • From OrochiGreel on May 01, 2008
    THAT WAS AS GREAT AS THE FIRST CHAPTER! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
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  • From OrochiGreel on April 30, 2008
    THAT WAS GREAT! DO MORE!
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  • From dragon04 on April 30, 2008
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next. I like the story.
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