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Reviews for Death of the Sun

By : Eloradanin
  • From tenohikari on November 02, 2008
    Love where the story is going, kind of reminds me of that yaoi game: Enzai, and can't wait to read more (really hope Naruto finds the bastard who set him up).
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  • From serenagold on November 01, 2008
    Gah.. what the fuck is the ice and water supposed to do?? ç_ç
    Eeewwww....

    This story is mesmerizingly dark. Keep up the good work! (I'm waiting for the beautiful irony where Hinata comes out of her comma and reveals Naruto didn't rape her at all! Man, he'll be so fucked up by then. My god. Twisted. ^^)

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  • From JadedNightLover on November 01, 2008
    Oh it's so depressing! I can't wait for his hero to come! I think it should be Gaara, just because he's the Kazekage, and I love him. I feel so bad for Naruto. I can't wait for Hinata to wake up. I can't wait to 1.) see Hinata's reactions when she wakes up and figures out what happened to Naruto. 2.) See what happens when they realize they broke an innocent boy, and 3.) Have his hero come along.

    I can't wait for more of your story...Just one thing I had a problem with. The font goes so long that it's hard to read because you have to continuously scroll right and then left to read the whole thing.
    The spacing is a little wonky. Otherwise it's all good.
    Jades
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 01, 2008
    oh my word!! i would really like to know when hinata will wake up. this is so hard to read. this is so sad. poor naruto. i'll be sure to continue reading. can't wait for the day he is proven innocent.
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  • From Mija on November 01, 2008
    ok forget Sasuke and or Gaara to come SAVE poor Naruto, let freakin Kyuubi come out and kill them ALL and then destroy the village for what they allowed to happen, but really I am still stumped here, Iruka let this happen without protest?? Tsunade? Kakashi? Sakura? I mean COME ON? I still cant believe Neji and Kiba and Shino believed but will the others?? can Shika be THAT stupid?? hes a genious he HAS to be thinking something is soooo wrong with all of this dont you think??? and again I have always voted for Sasuke to come help him, because one, no matter what kind of ass he is I still like him for Naru, but like others pointed out Gaara cant risk war with Suna and Konoha to save Naru, not if he is a good Kage and he is, no matter how much he would and I believe with all my heart he would be there in a FLASH the moment he finds out, but again screw them both and just let Naru beat the living snot out of everyone, escape and just LEAVE or take revenge upon those that did him wrong, of find the real bastard who raped Hinata, Oh I hope when they find out who really did it, Neji and the others who raped him kill them selves for what can never be forgiven, and if Naru forgives them, Im sooooooooo gonna pull my hair out lol, ok rant over, another wonderful chapter, been a long time but loving it anyhow, although it killed me to read how they hurt my poor Naru, sniffles, huggles and smiles Mija
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  • From Luma on August 12, 2008
    o_O Wow.
    Anyways.
    I vote Sasuke.
    I'm not really a fan of Gaara/Naruto relationships. -Shrugs- I've just never been able to read them, and if a story develops that way I'll end up skipping any intimate scenes. I mean I know they're similar because Gaara was a demon vessel like Naruto, but I just can't see them in a relationship together. Ever. Sasuke and Naruto I can totally see in either role of them being together. The pairing is just amusing because when I think about it they just kind of fit together.
    Well anyways. There's my vote.
    Waiting patiently for the next update.
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  • From bigbluebaba on August 10, 2008
    OMG its gotta be Gaara I think. Yup!

    Update soooooon! *drools at naruto and gaara scenes* XD
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  • From serenagold on August 09, 2008
    Oh my god... that hidden dickwad was Danzo, wasn't it? Gonna make him an Root or ANBU sex toy for re-leaving tension? Sonovabitch. Gaara needs to flood that place with sand and sink Konoha into oblivion!!
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  • From deedeesan32 on August 09, 2008
    please make his savior be gaara XDDDD god that would be so hot ur story is so hot keep writing dnt take to long or i will waste away in agony at not getting another chapter i hope u pick gaara and make him the dominant one XDDDD god there so ho together newho i await ur next chappie
    -deedeesan X3

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  • From Mija on August 09, 2008
    aaaackkkk how could they do this to Naruto! so unfair, will hinata wake up and tell them it wasnt Naruto?? and when she does I sooo want to see the faces of all his so called FRIENDS who doubted him and abused him, doesnt ANYONE in the village believe him? Iruka? Kakashi? Sakura? Anyone??? and if your taking votes I vote Sasuke since I love Sasu with Naru but Gaara is ok too, still prefer it to be Sasu though, and will they EVER find out that Naruto is innocent?? aaacckkk you must update, I have to read more, please, ty for the read, it was really good yet sad and I just want to scream at the injustice of it all, and will we find out who the real rapist is??? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija....:-)
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  • From GirlFromHell on June 30, 2008
    Garra Garra Garra
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  • From on June 24, 2008
    Sasuke! Poor Naruto, I was crying some when I read this...*snif* Really good, by the way.

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  • From Shaquana on June 09, 2008
    Although it would be cool if Itachi was the one to rescue Naruto!!!! That would be awsome!!!!!! No, what would be better if both Sasuke and Itachi rescues Naruto. JUST UPDATE SOON
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  • From Shaquana on June 09, 2008
    plz update soon!!!!! I want........both but if I have to choose I'd choose Gaara. Not too many Gaara/Naruto fics.
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  • From snnj11220 on June 07, 2008
    Wow this situation smells like a setup it really does. And some friends they are turning on him at the drop of a hat. Sasuke or Gaara it really doesn't matter to me either way there is going to be hot sex involved. The pervert in me wants to say Sasuke because I picture him with a bigger cock than Gaara, but I think Gaara would be best here. I mean Gaara is more sadistic so if he decided to get revenge for Naruto it would be better, and I could just see him threatening war or something with Konoha over this so my vote is for Gaara. Either way though I would still read, can't wait to see what happens next!
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