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Reviews for Moving On

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From ANON - John Bedore on April 27, 2008
    I liked the story. It played well on human emotoins and let us relate to the main character. Hope you write another chapter will be looking forward to it
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  • From ANON - darnod on April 27, 2008
    enjoyed it. not a great start, but good. would like to see more tenten/naruto interaction, even if it is a naruto/temari. can go either way with sakura bashing, and this is a good start for bashing. liked the half assed apology. thought naruto/sasuke scene was a little off. naruto crying and sasuke wiping the tears? doesn't seem realistic to me, but it is fanfiction so okay. hope to see more of this story.
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  • From Assassin666 on April 27, 2008
    Hey, when are you gonna update? The First part seemed good, so please update soon!
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  • From ANON - zerotru on April 27, 2008
    hmm i liked it i hope you update soon
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  • From eksimenrol on April 27, 2008
    not bad, quite enjoying it and looking forward to more
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  • From Garbolo on April 27, 2008
    I see a lot of potential in this story and I'm loving it so far... please keep up the good work.
    I look forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From ANON - mike on April 27, 2008
    Its a great start. I hope the rest of this story turns out as good as your first chapter.
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  • From darthme1011 on April 27, 2008
    me like
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  • From Hinataishot on April 27, 2008
    Update soon can't wait to see what happens
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  • From Hinataishot on April 27, 2008
    Awesome
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  • From Naruto8246739150 on April 27, 2008
    Great story
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  • From will45123 on April 27, 2008
    Update soon please
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  • From narutou79 on April 27, 2008
    Good story.
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  • From MakeLovethewar on April 27, 2008
    Cant wait update soon
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  • From Rinnegan on April 27, 2008
    5 Stars Update soon.
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