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Reviews for Moving On

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From taiintatsu88 on April 29, 2008
    is a good story hope you up date soon good job :)
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  • From Blizzardfang on April 29, 2008
    pretty nice
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  • From ANON - Skeith on April 29, 2008
    Now this is the kind of story that this site needs more of. While not a lot of pervertedness there is a very good story. Please keep up the good work when ever you can.
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  • From ANON - Talthar on April 29, 2008
    To tell you the truth I found this story rather enlightening. I've never liked how Sakura always treated Naruto, and I think this is how he should have handled it. So far its a great story, and Im looking forward to more chapters.
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  • From biggie55 on April 29, 2008
    it is good. But space out the events a little you know. I mean he just all these morning practices in one day

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  • From 1upmushroom on April 29, 2008
    Really good, I mean that. But there's a problem... Only one chapter to read so far. Please fix that asap, hehe...
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  • From ANON - review lord on April 29, 2008
    Very nice start I'm REALLY INTERESTED to see how this will turn out, you should make naruto the NEW "green beast" but not with the jump suit, ten ten gave him 4 outfits one should be green cause that works with orange
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 28, 2008
    Very good story. I rarely see Sakura as the bitch she is and it makes me smile. Keep up the good work and update soon please.
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  • From serenagold on April 28, 2008
    Yay!!! I loved this chapter. I can't wait for the next one. This story actually has a believeable reason for Naruto to move on and improve himself without resorting to anything extreme. Its a nice change of pace to read and honestly, I think it makes for a better story. Great worK! Keep it up. ^^
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  • From zero12789 on April 28, 2008
    as you stated in the start, this will be a naruxtemari fic. so far you have outlined the changes he will go through. due to the fact that he is a ninjutsu aficianado, his taijutsu and genjutsu are weak by comparison. that is great. i was freaked hearing that he just gave up on sakura, but every fic i read can't just be about them. it is a fresh start and i can't wait to read more. write on my wayward author
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  • From LadyLaran on April 28, 2008
    I like this! Great character interactions, development is moving at the right pace. I like the interplay between Naruto and Sasuke too.
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  • From Shadowfox32459 on April 28, 2008
    It's pretty good can't wait to see the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Raver7 on April 28, 2008
    Nice this first chapter was vary well done and I have to say the consecpt of this story has me interestid in seeing how this will work out.

    Well I hope that you update soon, because I'll really like to see what will happen next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Moiira on April 28, 2008
    Loved It! Like everything else i've read of yours ^^ Can't wait for the rest ^^
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  • From ANON - lanier on April 28, 2008
    YOu are off to a great start. I cant wait to see where this goes.
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