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Reviews for Moving On

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From thas on August 30, 2008
    very good! please update again soon.
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  • From PandaGaara on August 06, 2008
    WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE!!! WAHHHHHH I'M DYING OVER HERE!!! PLEASE UPDATE!! JA =^_^=
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  • From moonlady9 on July 31, 2008
    i really want to read the next chapter. it seems like it has great potential! please update
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  • From Stormraven on July 16, 2008
    I would definitely love to see more of this fic. Great writing and good plot-work. Hope to see more in the future!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2008
    nice man
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  • From ANON - koneko-chan on June 30, 2008
    hey is a good story hopfor it e you update soon i have been waiting
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  • From thas on June 29, 2008
    good story. kind of waiting on the update though? really want to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 16, 2008
    good story.good development. please update soon.

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  • From thmanwithnoname on June 10, 2008
    I like this. The only issue I have is that it seems a bit rushed, but that's almost understandable considering the subject.
    I'm looking forward to mre.
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  • From spooksies on May 30, 2008
    oh i am soooooo looking forward to the next chappie!!!!!! please T.W. finish this one!!! i would love to see where this one goes to next!

    laters! ~_^
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  • From ANON - lonewolf3317 on May 28, 2008
    more i must have more!!!
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  • From Eurynomous on May 27, 2008
    Great start, I like the direction this story is headed. Please don't let this story end up like alot of the good stories...unfinished. Please update!
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  • From Firebullet19 on May 23, 2008
    I like this story please update soon.
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  • From Mikra on May 14, 2008
    I'd like to read more of this :)
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  • From ANON - Review lord on May 13, 2008
    yeah dude, you gotta continue this, you should make this a multiple pairing Naruto x OC and Temari cause naruto should change most of his ways like peter parker from spider-man 3 and be come like a big pimp (and make hinata PASS-OUT instead of just fainting) so give me an email or two if you need ideas I could come up with some if you need any
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