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Reviews for Moving On

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From ANON - Review Lord on September 01, 2008
    LOL, love the ranting but thank you for continuing this story, cause the sakura bashing is not something that comes along this good, and besides I like heavy naruto character changes, very nice I might be able come up with some ideas so hit me up if you need some ideas, cause I love where this is going
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  • From ANON - shagnasty on September 01, 2008
    I really like this. I can hardly wait to read the rest. Don't worry about the haters, people have different tastes. Some peoples are just much worse than others. Anyway, please hurry with the rest, i really want to read it.
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  • From PandaGaara on August 31, 2008
    YOU.ARE.A.FANFIC.GOD!!
    I'm so happy you updated! I love how Hinata suddenly got all serious with Naruto.
    And Sakura....HAHAHA! I laugh at your pain...(god I sounded so evil lol X3)
    I love stories where Sakura gets put in her place...(insert evil laugh)
    Tough noodles for her because Naruto's not gonna take her back!!
    Love the pairing! Can't wait for another update!

    Ja =^_^=
    (>'.')>


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  • From ANON - Skeeve on August 31, 2008
    AN excellent story! Your version of Naruto's charachter is quite captavating and I can not wait to see where you take it. I'am saddened though with the path you have chosen for the Naruto/Hinata pairing. Since I first started watching the series I have been captavated by the possibilty of those two geting together.
    Thanks for sharing your story with us.
    Skeeve
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  • From ANON - Ruben Burrell on August 31, 2008
    I'm a little confused. The summary says Temari is paired with Naruto but if anything it looks like he's getting close to Tenten. I'm not suggesting a pairing change. I'm Just curious. By the way a very well written story. I like the way it switches point of view. The only thing i might change would be adding a little more information regarding what Naruto is doing for training drop me a line back
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  • From ANON - Drake on August 31, 2008
    in my personal opinion, this is very well written. its much more involved than some fics i've read lately. i cant wait to see this updated
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  • From ANON - Unkown One on August 31, 2008
    I personally like your story and believe that it is your story. If I don't like something I dont read it, that done. I hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - wolfsilverflame on August 30, 2008
    i really enjoyed your story it was a pleasure to read thank you
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  • From eksimenrol on August 30, 2008
    wow, this is really good stuff. i can't wait to read more, please keep up the good work
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  • From serenagold on August 30, 2008
    Great chapter! I loved this one possibly even more than the first one!

    Sakura's shocking realization was very well handled. I also like how he went about getting Hinata to train Sasuke. (Hmm.. should I start imagining Hinata/Sasuke pairings down the line? >:D) lol
    Great job. Keep up the kick ass work. ^^




    (Also, I highly agree with your rant. I read the reviews after I post mine and I've always noticed those ones containing "Eww, this is not yaoi." or "This pairing doesn't work, only my personal favorite pairing is legitimate!" I read these comments and I always think to myself "wow.. what an idiot." I mean really. Wth?)
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  • From ANON - Annie-chan on August 30, 2008
    I think Sakura was just very badly portrayed. Sakura when she was twelve and at the start of the series, probably yeah (although this one is more annoying) but the portrayal completely ignores her growth as a character throughout 400 chapters of the manga, so that's kind of disappointing. Character bashing for no reason isn't fun to read.
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  • From thas on August 30, 2008
    Usuratonkachi? sasake always calls naruto that what does it mean? and in your story you say naruto told sakura he wouldn't give her a second chance i just reread your story and that wasn't in the story. not critsism just pointing it out.
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  • From ANON - blaquekitsune on August 30, 2008
    luv it to dead. update soon.
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  • From ANON - WhatIsAName on August 30, 2008
    Damn! This is good! Love the way you describe the characters, their behaviour, your style of writing... yeah, I guess I love pretty much everything about this story! Keep it up!
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  • From LadyLaran on August 30, 2008
    Great job! I'm glad Naruto managed to give Ero-sennin a piece of his mind like that. Sasuke's sentence is a good one..heavy but not too bad. I wonder who is going to catch his eye. I like the Temari pairing. *giggles* Sakura is going to get a major wake up call!
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