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Reviews for Dumb Child Games

By : ForYourFantasy
  • From Sweetest_Sin on June 01, 2012
    i read this story a while back n have been waiting for some new chapters. im really loving it so far n really want to see more of this story so please add some new chapters x3 i never do reviews but yea i REALLY want to see more of this story :3
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  • From amnestria on July 05, 2009
    This story is really good ^^ Please don't abandon it and update soon ^^ I will wait impatiently for the next chapter. Again, great work ^^
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  • From UkeUsagi on June 09, 2008
    ooo please update this story i HAVE to see Sasuke potty train Naruto~! (that's somthing I though I would never say xD)
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  • From alleycat88 on May 28, 2008
    Sasuke is falling hard already....^.^ Please more!
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 28, 2008
    I'm shocked that no one mentioned it, then again... no I'm not. You actually have a decent plot, good for a humor story. But you could definitely use a beta. I'm guessing by the nature of the grammatical errors I'm seeing that english isn't first language. So your not doing a bad job, but the errors I've seen are noticeable and you should definitely get a beta to get them out so the story will be better.
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  • From LadyRonin on May 27, 2008
    that was cute a jello fight even though it was onesided. cqn't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From LumiiSol on May 27, 2008
    Aww, too adorable. Poor Sasuke, I've experienced those moments of absolute terror with my own younger sibling, those are some of the worst kinds ever. Naruto is so cute though. I can't wait for the next update; keep up the good work!
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  • From OrochiGreel on May 18, 2008
    Poor Sasuke!
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  • From LadyRonin on May 18, 2008
    ha ha ha you are the shit. imagining sasuke potty training naruto is going to make me laugh for the next week. can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From alleycat88 on May 18, 2008
    Hahaha! I love baby Naruto! he is sooooo CUTE! And Sasuke watching him is just hilarious! Please more!
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  • From LumiiSol on May 17, 2008
    Aww, that is so cute! Baby Naruto has to be one of the most adorable things ever. I hope he gives Sasuke a run for his money; nothing better than a toddler to loosen the heart strings. Can't wait for the next chapter; keep up the good work!
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  • From taiintatsu88 on April 24, 2008
    hey i like your story is a good chap. i also feel sorry for sasuke can't wait for the next chap
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  • From spoon10488 on April 24, 2008
    That's awesome! I can't wait to read more! Just a couple questions about how old is Naruto? If you mentioned it in the story I must have missed it. Another question is this going to be a shouta? Like sasuke and little boy Naru? I was just wandering, I would have a problem with that depending on how old naruto is. Has Naruto been turned both mentally and physical in to a child or is Naruto just acting like a child Well I guess I'll find out if I keep reading. I can't wait to read more.
    =)
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  • From DragonsDancers on April 24, 2008
    cant wait till the next ch
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  • From LadyRonin on April 24, 2008
    i can't wait to see the next chaptr. just the thought of that cute little naruto is giving me cavaties and the trouble i imagine he will get into especially with sasuke as his guardian.
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