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Reviews for Cat's Tales (Chapter 5 up!)

By : Elli
  • From Nigellica on May 17, 2008
    Sorry ^^; I'm still getting used to this website...

    My email is bubbles5166@hotmail.com

    I love how you have written Chouji :D And all the others but I have to say Chouji is my favourite non-main character XD
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  • From hisoka on May 17, 2008
    damn he needs to understand whats goin on so does sasuke before all hell breaks loose. hope you can update soon
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  • From alleycat88 on May 17, 2008
    I think you have all the characters nailed down to a T! although Iruka does seem alot more troubled here..haha but he does have a lot to be troubled about! This fic totally rules hun! And I cant wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Vile on May 17, 2008
    I love this story! I dislike Neji anyway (stupid ugly jerk XO) so it's no surprise that I hate him here to. I hope Sasuke will destroy him (lol XD) or better it'll be Naruto cuz boy he need to become a little more independent ><

    I love how you show Sasuke character, it was the best part, most writters can't do it this good ;)It was funny to read and at the same time it all made sense - respect for that! XD


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  • From Bastian on May 17, 2008
    I really, really love this story. I think, so far, you have kept a pretty good consistency with the characters. I like how Sasuke was in the bathroom and how he reacted to the whole situation, it seemed perfect to me. I also love that Naruto's reaction to the fact that Sasuke was still bleeding was I kicked your ass. That was very much in character for me. Because like Iruka pointed out Naruto doesn't realize he has really changed or anything like that so to see Naruto continue to act as he would have previously is nice. Iruka has stayed in character for me the whole time as well in that he seems constantly frazzled and rushed, which he would be with a house full of that many pets. And then to see Kakashi come in with his superior knowledge and ability to put just the right amount of information in at just the right time to make Iruka feel not only ignorant but irritated that this stranger would know more than he did about his own pets is wonderful.

    And I have to admit the thought of Sasuke spending time like that on his tail had my bursting into fits of laughter. Though I do wonder if the two tom cats are wanting to mate with Naruto why they wouldnt try to immobilize him first. Yeah Sasuke wouldnt realize maybe at first being the first rut but I would think Neji would, right?

    Anyway great job and looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From MichiTheThird on May 17, 2008
    GAH! aff.net ATE the rest of my review!! >
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  • From MichiTheThird on May 17, 2008
    OK...I am absolutely, positively...INSANELY late on reviewing. The biggest evidence of it is in the fact that this is chapter FOUR and not chapter THREE which was what I should have commented ON...

    So, I'll just do an overall comment on all four chapters and pray for the best! XD I vaguely remember earlier that you had mentioned something about not seeing Kakashi/Iruka as a pairing, but I always have and always will so if you pull through on that pairing, I will love you forever.
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  • From spooksies on May 17, 2008
    nicely written and your characters are coming along nicely, if a bit stiff in some places. but WAY WAY better than me!!!


    any ways have fun!

    love the story!
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  • From on May 17, 2008
    Okay, I admit, the whole vagina thing has me a little creeped out, but I'm trying to overlook it, lol. It also makes me a little sad that Naruto is obviously, obviously the uke - I kind of like them switching it up, but I will get over it.

    As for characterization, Neji is an ass. Lol. That whole mewling like a whore comment seemed ooc for him, too, since he doesn't seem crass like that. I can see him definitely wanting to get one over Sasuke and letting Naruto become a thing as opposed to a person in order to accomplish that, but crude sex statements seem a little weird to me.

    As for Naruto, obviously, he is very young, but he seems a bit too childish. The difference in his attitude versus Sasuke's or Neji's makes this almost seem like shota. I really liked it when he was getting all pissed off at Neji because it made him seem older. I know he and Sasuke are supposed to be young, but I think if Naruto was a little more mature, it would be better.

    Finally, as for Sasuke, he seems almost too cold. He's warming up a bit now that he's interested in Naruto, but he seems mean. I know he's an SOB in the manga, too, but he has those moments of warmth that come out of nowhere.

    Anyway, overall, it's very good and interesting, but those are my thoughts. I don't know if you'll agree with any of them, but I hope that helps.
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  • From ANON - Narukitty on May 10, 2008
    omg kawaii more need another chapter im hooked
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  • From ANON - Damp on May 09, 2008
    YES! VAGINA IS INVOLVED IN THE MAKING OF THE BABIES!!

    -Damp *Now this can almost qualify for sounding most realistic!!*
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 09, 2008
    aye, kakairu. although they haven't exchanged many words in the anime they do have the possibility of a relationship because of their students, so...it's really not that far off.
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  • From ANON - Ro-chan on May 08, 2008
    Agh! I need to read more! That is the most ingenius thing I have ever read, and I want to see what happens next. Also, how small all the 'pets' actually are is a little confusing. Are they slighty chibi so the can be held like real pets?
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  • From Rockyshores on May 08, 2008
    Oooo, I so love this. I feel bad for poor Naruto though.
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  • From Nigellica on May 07, 2008
    Hey this is a really awesome story. THe animal characteristics really suit all of them and I have to say that love KakaIru so if you were going to take it that way I would be quite happy :D Have I asked to be added to the updates list if you have one? I don't remember. In case I didn't could you please add me?
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