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Reviews for Cat's Tales (Chapter 5 up!)

By : Elli
  • From ANON - lo on May 31, 2008
    It is ok to take your time. I would rather that than something that is rushed.
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  • From Rockyshores on May 31, 2008
    That pic did help, so cute!
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  • From ANON - Suzie Q on May 27, 2008
    Great story this is probably my favorite story, I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From MasterLenx on May 27, 2008
    I just have a quick question for you - are they cat-cats... like... just normal cats, or are they humanoid animals? In some of the chapters you switch off and on to me. Like one moment they'll have hands and then you say paws... O.o... And then in the bathtub scene they had skin like a human.. O.o
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  • From kocoum on May 25, 2008
    im very much in love with this story :D please doooo continue very, VERY sooon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2008
    QUESTION!! how big are the animals? 'cuz im a little confused. Kakashi and Iruka can hold them like real animals but the discription you give of naruto and sasuke make them seem normal size. also, do they whare cloths? just some little things that arent cleer to me. LOVE the story so far. its not offten that you see a Sasuke Neji rivlery.
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  • From Shivawn on May 23, 2008
    I absolutely love this story and your a/ns in each chapter. Eureka! lol That makes me giggle like you thinking of Sasuke preening his tail...:D

    Characterization feedback...well, I really think you're close to the characters. Naruto is just SO adorably innocent and so forgiving. I wish Sasuke wasn't so mean to him but he is in the anime so it works perfectly! Don't change the meanness until you absolutely HAVE to. I love Naruto being hurt...makes me get mad and then I throw a fit and cry for Naruto. ...Then I write my own story full of angst with a happy ending lol

    I love your story! The way you write makes me FEEL like a part of their lives. I love the idea you have for each of them, as well. Persians, moths, koalas!!! I love Koalas! I'm naming one of my kids Panda and/or Koala. Which is lame but whatevs! Anyways, back to characters. I love the way you write each character. :D Please don't change any part of your story (except adding more chapters...you can change the length ALL you want!)

    So yeah...ta ta!
    Shivawn Angel
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  • From ANON - Sangostar on May 22, 2008
    I love your story. It's very cute and I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work. ~SangoStar
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on May 20, 2008
    I don't mind a little reaction between Neji and Naruto but I want Sasuke to have Naruto...:P Good stuff so far...:)
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  • From ANON - kakera7 on May 20, 2008
    Yay yay yayz!!
    Competition into the mix!
    This is gonna be so much fun!!
    Violent war for love is always fun to watch!!

    Otanoshimimasu! (I look forward to it!)
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  • From lovelessjayson on May 19, 2008
    I love this story please please up date soon. This sounds to be interesting along with Angst fill. I'm glad you took the time to post this for us to enjoy thanks.
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  • From serenagold on May 18, 2008
    Haha... Neji is going to be trouble. ^^


    Although when Iruka finally isolates Naruto and has "the talk" with him... you just know the reactions are going to be hilarious.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - animelover on May 18, 2008
    i would agree that you did a good job on characterization (sp?), helping us to actually "see" the characters. i have to say my fave was the description of hinata, the shy Siamese; could picture in my mind as i read. when i can read and have visuals come to mind of what i'm reading, then it's a thumbs up read. ;-)
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  • From snnj11220 on May 18, 2008
    Oddly enough I wasn't thinking of FYEO when I made that comment its just that the way you described them in that scene they seemed like more like wild animals than cats it sort of reminded me of a Discovery Channel episode. I thought it was pretty cool!

    You asked for critique on characterization so here goes. I think everyone is pretty much in character except Kakashi. I am not sure if that was meant to be deliberate or not. Kakashi is not normally that much of an ass. Its like every sentence of his in this chapter was deliberately antagonistic towards Iruka, so instead of coming off as helpful or whatnot he came across as a prick who thinks he's better than thou. Whereas in the previous chapter he just came across as pretty informative, if not a tad bit boring. Like I said I am not sure if that was deliberate or not, so I just thought I'd mention it.

    In regards to this chapter though I liked how even though they are different animals the whole getting ready for dinner setting was so family-like. I thought it really said a lot about Iruka and the way he treats them, where some are setting the table, some help cooking, others calling people to the table, it was really nice! And Naruto was absolutely adorable during his conversation with Neji when he was talking about Sasuke trying to eat him. Its like you could just picture the conversation happening in your head especially Naruto and all the hand movements and stuff. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From NessSachiel on May 18, 2008
    I really like it :)
    and I like Neji, so I am glad he will not be a villian :)

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