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Reviews for Slaves of the Maelstrom

By : Slyfer101
  • From firelordeg on August 03, 2008
    omg you updated thank you for this wonderfull chapter please update again a.s.a.l.a.
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  • From thas on August 03, 2008
    please update soon.
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  • From UltimateFucker on August 03, 2008
    Nice job on the update, I'm hooking forward to reading Hinata's interrogation.
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  • From Chronostorm on August 03, 2008
    ahhh and here i was hoping for Naruto to get Yugito oh well now if only you could get Shion (from shippuuden movie) involved as slave some how i also look forward to Naruto meeting his sister a shame the mother is dead oh well i also look forward to the next chap from your other story about the seduction eye
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  • From NenshouMizu on August 02, 2008
    Ooh! New chapter for both? Jackpot! I should've realized Yugito-chan would be interrogated by Hinata-chan. Look forward to reading more of your work Slyfer.
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  • From oldman543 on July 22, 2008
    it's good and well written. even has a through plot. you have lots of original ideas and a keen mind. keep it up,
    oldman543
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  • From diadem15 on July 09, 2008
    OH MY GOSH, WOW, PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I CANT WAIT FOR MORE. ADD HINATA SOON PLEASE THANK YOU FOR YOU TIME AND ENERGY WRITING THESE STORIES.
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  • From Cyraxr on July 07, 2008
    Wow! I am glad I chose to read Slaves of Maelstrom after I read Kouingan - The Seduction Eye wow! Normally I'm not into slave fics but your's are very good and funny and I hope you continue both of these stories. The only bad thing I have to say is you need someone other then yourself to look at them to catch the minor letter glitches that appear from time to time. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
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  • From shingen on June 23, 2008
    This is a story I hope is updated on a regular basis. It is greatness.
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  • From deathwalker on June 23, 2008
    update soon please
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  • From straylight69 on June 21, 2008
    Definitely the best story on the site. Although it has been awhile since the story was updated this story. Can't wait til Yugito joins the action. You could also add Karin or even Konan. Now adding Konan will certainly be interesting. Talk about IRONY - converting the Akatsuki's (An organization hunting Jinchiruuki's) third in command to be a Jinchuuriki's (Naruto) slave. You could have Jiraiya be the one to capture her, considering not many can.
    Hope you to update soon.
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  • From DarthValgaav on June 11, 2008
    hey, are you ever going to update? i want to see Naruto with Hinata at least once. plz tell me if you are going to update again or not
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  • From carlos20dgm on June 05, 2008
    go history
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  • From sajuuk21 on May 26, 2008
    hellol lol !!!
    this story is fantastic
    please write the next chapter quickly and take it on the site
    a +
    sajuuk21
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  • From DarkHunter1 on May 21, 2008
    very great story. I'm not a big fan of bdsm but this has peaked my interests in trying it once again. Keep up the good work and I look forward to some more.
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