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Reviews for Slaves of the Maelstrom

By : Slyfer101
  • From SagashiIndustries on September 11, 2008
    I really hope to see you update soon, I really want to see more of this.
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  • From edelta88 on September 07, 2008
    “And now that pauper’s going to be a ‘knight in shining armor’…man, it feels like some cheezy romance novel.” She grinned. “Of course, with that slave-girl Naruto-kun has, it might just turn into a book worth reading.”-I'm going to have to agree with Anko this is deffinetly worth reading

    being small, a girl, and having the Byakugan would also make Hinata an excellent assasin if she ever got over some of her issues

    people just don't seem to learn Konoha ninja are good but you threaten their loved ones and shit happens, the 4th proved that

    Hinata trimmed a spiral into her pubic hair...well I can honestly say I didn't see that coming



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  • From edelta88 on September 07, 2008
    lol by the end of this all the guys are going to hate Naruto for setting the bar so high

    Kin smiled. “…and he’s good with his tongue too,” she whispered, blushing deeply when Falcon to burst out laughing.Eagle just sighed. “I said I didn’t want to know,” he groaned. -did I mention how much I love these Anbu

    “Masochist,” the purple haired woman replied.“Is that an offer?”“NO!”-well you've got Anko pegged





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  • From edelta88 on September 06, 2008
    ROTFWL I love these Anbu

    I'm going with Jiraiya on this one, torture by polka is just evil, brilliant, but evil

    using kin for shaving practice for when he gets older...nice

    AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA so Naruto fingering her was her most erotic memory oh that's great


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  • From jfitzgerald236 on August 27, 2008
    I am really enjoying this story. Please update again soon. thanks.
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  • From shingen on August 09, 2008
    Very good, I am glad that you are finally bringing Hinata and Naruto together. I am just eager to find out where you are taking this story. I eagerly await more. Chhers!
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  • From Anonymous7 on August 05, 2008
    For clarification's sake, I meant Yugito, not Yuugao. I don't know why, but I felt that I needed to clear that up.
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  • From KaelHyun on August 05, 2008
    No ofence but its about damn time that you updated this story!!

    Also I hope Yugito is added to the harem Real quick
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  • From Anonymous7 on August 04, 2008
    An amazing update! Sasame's been found, Yuugao's coming to Konoha, and Hinata and Naruto are finally together! I'm guessing Yuugao will be taken as Hinata's slave, since Naruto already hit the two-slave limit. Then their little harem will be complete. Granted, Sasame may make use of a few of them on her own, but I assume Naruto won't be involved whenever his "sister" is. How will Naruto handle Danzo and the others on the council who dislike him? And how will the Hyuuga react to Hinata's involvement with Naruto (not that she'll care at all)? I'm really looking forward to what comes next, as well as chapter two of Kouingan
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  • From Zetsumei on August 04, 2008
    Unique story. As far as I can tell, original plot, and good amount of lemons for this type of story. A very good story.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 03, 2008
    Oh before I forget, I hope you get the second chapter of Koreingan up tomorrow as well. I could use some good news... long story but still anything good to read I would love it. Thank you very much.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 03, 2008
    OH MY GOD!!! I WAS HOPEING!!!! PLEASE LET NARUTO AND HINATA INTEROGATE YUGITO PLEASE( AND PLEASE LET HINATA GET HER AS A SLAVE)!!!! I can't thank you enough for the great chapter of one of my favorite stories... I know how long it takes to write a good story especially when writers block hits so please take your time and keep up the great work cause I can't wait because it's just too good!
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  • From HentaiFox64 on August 03, 2008
    I can't wait to see what hinata plans for Yugito. And brother and sister meeting for the first time. Please update soon on this awesome fic. till then I'll just have to be happy with chap 2 of Kouingan when it comes out.
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  • From Cyraxr on August 03, 2008
    Yes Hinata and Naruto are together at last. Another wonderful chapter. Well with Hinata interrogating Yugito it looks like Naruto will soon have five girls sharing his bed. I bet Danzo's bodyguards were former ROOT members. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
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  • From DragonMan220 on August 03, 2008
    Is Hinata going to get a new kitty sex pet? If so I can't wait! I mean, she has Naruto, but her slave Temari is blonde... maybe she has a thing for blondes? I can't wait to see Naruto and Sasame's reunion and I also can't wait to see Naruto play politics.
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