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Reviews for Slaves of the Maelstrom

By : Slyfer101
  • From kylekatarn77 on January 10, 2009
    As always, an excellent chapter. Sex aside, the story itself is progressing quite nicely. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Any idea when that might be?
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on January 01, 2009
    Update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From SagashiIndustries on December 22, 2008
    I really hope we get to see the next chapter soon.
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on December 11, 2008
    Please update soon!!!!!! It has been 4 months and 9 days!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on December 11, 2008
    Please update soon!!!!!!
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on December 04, 2008
    I just thought of something, wouldn't Sasame be Naruto's slave as she is the daughter of Naruto's dad's slave???
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on December 04, 2008
    Please update soon!!!! It has been a long time!!!!!!! Either this one or your other one please!!!!!! (Can't wait for another Haku scene in the other though!!!)
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  • From jakdude5 on November 09, 2008
    Woot! Hinata gets another slave yay!
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on November 07, 2008
    I think that Naruto should interigate Yugito personally because they are both jinchuuriki...and I just want Naruto to have her because it would allow him to train to control the Kyuubi's chakra better without anyone finding out about it. I know you already said it will be Hinata and have a 3 month head start into it but please make it where she says that the only way she sumbits to anyone is if they had the power of the Kyuubi itself at there call because she doesn't know about the Kyuubi. Please update soon and respond to this aswell.
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  • From MartialWolf on November 06, 2008
    Can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on November 01, 2008
    Wow, great writing! I don't usually read het but this was so good! Fantastic!
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  • From Inferno05 on October 23, 2008
    I don't know when your last update was, but you should definitely update this again. The plot is original and of a high quality, your grammar has few if any errors, and the chapter length is phenomenal. I hope to see this story going farther ^_^.
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  • From darkxellos on September 23, 2008
    The last lemon in this chapter was A-WE-SO-ME. You really have a way with words. I hope you keep writing this fic because it's one of my favorites.
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  • From DarkHunter1 on September 21, 2008
    I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter of this story. It's been a great story to read thus far.
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  • From edelta88 on September 11, 2008
    lol "that poker game when we were kids" seems to be a fairly common theme


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