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Reviews for Slaves of the Maelstrom

By : Slyfer101
  • From GhostwriterMO on February 01, 2009
    Now that is a heck of a way to get a kitty to purr. One question is Kirabi (eight tails) going to make an appearance in this story? Oh boy I can't wait to see what happens next. Ass-assins, jinruki sex slave, horny Hinata, and shadow clone Narutos Oh Boy!!! More soon!
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  • From AnselaJonla on January 24, 2009
    I love this fic. It's rare these days to see a good, well-written story with original elements and solid world-building like yours, especially in the threesomes category. Smut is all well and good, but plot just makes it even better. Keep it up!

    You seem to have a small problem with grammar though, especially they're, there and their, your and you're and other homophones, as well as apostrophes and pluralisation. It can be jarring in some scenes to see tiny, easily fixed mistakes like that.
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  • From jaxlax21 on January 24, 2009
    This is so good, really like this story and I love the concept. Only thing that bugs me is the amount to time it takesto update it. If it was quicker to update, then things would be perfect.
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  • From 12snowman on January 23, 2009
    Great work
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  • From DarkLordTaker on January 21, 2009
    Very hot. Please continue.
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on January 21, 2009
    Please update your Haku story! I LOVE Haku!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From fenrir7139 on January 21, 2009
    I'm glad to see this story come back! It was one of the first Naruto stories I read on this site, so it's a nice nostalgia trip. I hope you continue to update, and I rated this witha a 5/5. Great job!
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  • From Anttolas on January 20, 2009
    GReat Chapter As the rerast of them, not good with words so can't really say much more, but i'll be waiting for the next chapter to come see ya then:)
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on January 20, 2009
    Awesome chapter update soon.
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  • From Yamizenchou on January 20, 2009
    No isn't that interesting? I wonder how many people actaully think to use pleasutr for torture/brain-washing. It'd probably be more effective than the stick method though maybe not as effective as the stick and carrot method.
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on January 20, 2009
    Awesome!!!!!!! An update please update again soon!!!!
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  • From DragonMan220 on January 20, 2009
    I can totally see Yugito dressed in a cute kitty outfit as a little tease from Hinata, especially if she includes gloves that keep Yugito from using her hands with full dexterity. I can also see Yugito curled up by Hinata's side napping in a sun beam as Hinata reads a scroll while Temari plays some music or makes tea. And Hanabi giggling as her sister's new cat chases her around to help her train her agility. I hope Koto can be freed from Orochimaru and Kabuto's control, I can see her gladly becoming Naruto's slave to save her sanity.
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  • From holyknight on January 19, 2009
    Slyfer, when you're going to start writing again, huh?
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  • From Takai153 on January 17, 2009
    This is story is so incredibly HOT!! The sex scenes are marvelous and it has a really good plot too. I can't wait to see what is going to come from Naruto's sister. Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can.
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on January 13, 2009
    PLEASE UPDATE BEFORE I GO FUCKING MAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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