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Reviews for Slaves of the Maelstrom

By : Slyfer101
  • From DarkMachine on May 07, 2010
    So...we ever gonna see this continued man? It's one of the hottest stories on the site and one of the best naruto lemons around. It'd be a shame to see it not finished. Plus I wanna see Temari give her ass to Naruto. After all, if Naru and Hina are getting married, then all the slaves can bear his kids ne?
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  • From zamrok55 on April 16, 2010
    You've got to update man. please!
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  • From zamrok55 on April 01, 2010
    i love this story... but why isn't there more!?! there must be more!!!
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  • From naruto4all on February 01, 2010
    wow. i 'm loving this fic, is there an update soon?
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  • From kylekatarn77 on November 08, 2009
    As always, this story is absolutely incredible. How is the next chapter coming along? kylekatarn77@aol.com
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  • From EJMartinez on October 30, 2009
    Damn.......Hot and crazy stuff in this one lol LOVE It!
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  • From guillermo on October 26, 2009
    you should try not make the prisoners break so easily.
    and why did orochimaru tell kin about the invasion when she was supposed to be killed by sasuke in the forests of death.
    And why would the kunoichi rather be with the persons that tortured them instead of dying.




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  • From nm1716 on October 06, 2009
    I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON!!!
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on September 16, 2009
    Please update really soon!!!! It has been a long time since the last one!!!!
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  • From garsdal on May 11, 2009
    this slave fic is so fucking awesome its breaking down reality
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  • From theimpacientone on May 06, 2009
    love the story! and I hope you update soon!
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on April 28, 2009
    Please update one of your Naruto stories soon please!!!! It has been far too long since you have updated!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on March 25, 2009
    Please update one of your Naruto stories really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on February 14, 2009
    Please update really soon!!!!
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  • From Takai153 on February 12, 2009
    Nice chapter. Liked the Naruto/Sasame interaction. Is there going to be any incest? I think that'd be pretty hot! And the dinner with Hiashi was pretty funny. Tayuya is such a masochist!:) And when Naruto talk to Hiashi in private, I was torn between worrying for Naruto's safty or to laugh a his plight! Glad to see he's okay with Hinata being with Naruto. Liked the songs that Hinata played while torchering Yugito. Can't wait for a sex scene with Yugito! Speaking of sex scenes, I liked your use of vocalizations in Naruto and Hinata's quickie scene. Thought it was a bit short, but I understand this chapter was more for plot develpment, so thats fine. After all, this story does have a good plot and I don't want this to become a PWP story! Keep up the good work and please update as soon as you can!(both this and Kouingan)
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