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Reviews for The Return

By : Kurokit
  • From ANON - anomuyous on January 12, 2013
    Please write a sequel! I wanna know the twins names and a maybe pregnant Gaara?! I also loved your story Saviors! I really like mommy Naruto and his relationships with his kits. Also double peneration is hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ArabPrincess on April 26, 2011

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  • From OrochiGreel on July 22, 2008
    Please write an epilogue with lots and lots of lemony goodness inside!
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on July 22, 2008
    Yaaaaaaaay I really really like this story more more and more with each chapter! Thats for sure!I hope you make an epilogue!!!No I will be more clear: PLEEAAAASEEEE Make An Epilogue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!With lots of lemons!!!YAAAAAAY
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  • From ANON - lacquer on July 22, 2008
    Sweet!!!!! I just love what you've done with the whole thing. *grin* Would it too much to ask for an epilogue w/ 'lemony goodness' in it? Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2008
    I'm so glad Naruto had he's twins and that both are healthy. Please continue!!!
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  • From YuukoUchiha on July 22, 2008
    yeah! I want a epilogue full of lemons!!!
    XD
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  • From ANON - Timberfox on July 22, 2008
    I really enjoyed this series and would love an epilogue (or a sequel). Maybe we could learn more about how well people have adjusted to the Akatsuki's rule. Seeing the visit from Gaara would be nice too.
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  • From bloodhill on June 10, 2008
    Great story, I've never read anything like it so it's an absolute thrill to read.
    Can't wait to see what comes next. ^_^

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  • From ANON - dyessie on May 26, 2008
    yes. we are happy. Ü
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  • From ANON - UnseeliePhairie on May 25, 2008
    Wow, amazing...I'm afraid I don't really know what to say other then I hope to see more soon ^.^
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on May 24, 2008
    WHAT?!?!? THE LAST ONE?!?!?! ARE YOU SURE????
    Well if you are ok, but I think to understand it all it would be good to at least have two chapters more, to see how naruto is until the babies birth, then there birth, and maybe a little epilogue to show how everything goes from there(since it is a weird situation having three fathers and what will naruto do after having them(besides taking care of them)
    WRITE SOON!!!

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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2008
    Ding, dong, the bitch is dead!!! HOORAY!!!!!!!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From mrk33 on May 16, 2008
    Itachi is clever.....he knows more than he let's on. He does not trust
    Sakura that is clear. Just wanted to mention a flaw in this chapter.
    You explained in the previous chapter why Naruto had the pills, so
    why did Itachi say he did not understand Narutos' desire to since he
    was an orphan. If I remember correctly his reason's were choice, and
    love. Which, he explained to both brothers.

    Chow
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on May 15, 2008
    I can't wait !!! this is getting better and better! I just hope the brothers realize how sakura really is SOON!
    write soon please!!
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