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Reviews for The Return

By : Kurokit
  • From spoon10488 on May 05, 2008
    Awesome chapter. Sooo hot! I can't wait to see what happens next.
    =)
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  • From EstherJolie on May 04, 2008
    ah the lemon was quite good but you could've included more detail of the sex part of it and I can't wait wait to see ita/sasu sex scenes or moments
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on May 04, 2008
    I think the lemon was good and I can't wait to see what happens next! Please just don't make sakura tell the brothers about the pills!
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  • From ANON - dyessie on May 03, 2008
    watda??!!?! why did you stop in the middle of everything? please continue?

    oh and one thing.. i got the idea about the birds and the bees.. but just like sasuke.. no one ever explained or told me what is that exactly.. so.. uhmm. would you mind telling me? please? >.
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  • From ANON - nb on May 03, 2008
    I would have loved to read your story, sadly the format(too wide) was so bad I couldn't.
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on April 30, 2008
    I hope you get to write really soon because you got me curius!!! I can't wait for the threesome lemon, nor can I wait for what happens when naruto takes the pills in secret I can't wait! For example that gets me thinking of what will happen when naruto runs out of pills since he has only a botle and if the brothers are gonna find out before that that something is up since he wouldn't be getting pregnant, right?
    See! Youget me here wondering I hope you WRITESOON PLEASE!!!
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  • From spoon10488 on April 30, 2008
    I gulped. I laughed so hard! Oh, dear poor Naru-Chan. I have a feeling his back side is going to get a lot of lovin. Lol.
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on April 27, 2008
    definitely an interesting twist. wonder where you're going with some of this, but it's gonna be an interesting ride, i'd imagine. good luck with the fic!
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  • From spoon10488 on April 26, 2008
    I love this story and I don't find it depressing. If anything I find it has a little bit of twisted humor in it. I really enjoy reading this. I hope you keep this story.
    =)
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  • From alleycat88 on April 26, 2008
    I think they think its depressing because everyone is dead. But I think its awesome! Its a twist I have never seen before! you could make it a little more detailed like maybe someone telling Naruto exactly what happened? Please continue to update!
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  • From JessicaHayes02 on April 26, 2008
    what happened to chapter three?
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  • From Halskr on April 26, 2008
    Ok, kinda interesting and well wierd. I cant picture the brothers sharing, but it could make for some interesting situations. Just please dont make naruto a girl! Its just not the same when that gets done. Thanks for sharing this.
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  • From DragonsDancers on April 26, 2008
    i think its very hot and cant wait until the next ch
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  • From SDRR on April 26, 2008
    I don't see how anybody can see this as depressing. Itachi and Sasuke are a little mean, but they wouldn't be Uchihas if they were nice.
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on April 24, 2008
    Wow! What a story! Is good, even though I don't particulary like when the "evil" wins. But even so I really like the plot and am really curius about the jutsu!!! I also liked how they still make naruto important even without kyuubi because sometimes it seems like that is the center of everything, even though I don't know if you will relate it to something else later on
    anyway: WRITESOON PLEASE!!!
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