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Reviews for Scored Sand

By : Hestia
  • From Raholea on April 18, 2008
    *drools*
    hestia, every fic of yours i read just keeps getting better, and juicy, and *whimpers*

    Can i just steal you and keep you for myself?? you're writing is just too nummy!!!!!


    (ok, not being serious on the stealing part, but yeah...)

    *smirks* and you should do a second chapter, maybe? gaara's gotta return the favor, ne? ~_^
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  • From Bookworm51485 on April 17, 2008
    I don't like Naruto being top but I loved that. It was so good and I was hoping for more. Now what I'd love to see is a continuation, with just what Naruto mentioned: a coming out with a boyfriend to introduce. And I wouldn't mind seeing a switch around (Gaara top, Naruto bottom) if you do decide to do one *hint hint* :D Anyways I really loved the story.
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  • From llyoung on April 17, 2008
    Lovely story. Fantastic sex. Loved the piercings and the masturbation. Loved clueless Naruto. And I love your sense of humor.
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  • From tasukigirl on April 17, 2008
    Haha, I like the bits of humor at the end. Not the most convincing fic I've read, but given the restrictions you listed, I'd say you pulled it off fairly well.

    In case you write about ramen in the future- you don't finish one bowl and order a new one. The bowls are huge. You eat all the noodles and ask for another order of noodles. They toss in the new noodles with some more soup into the same bowl. :)
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  • From sweetciel on April 17, 2008
    Wonderful! Gaara was so sexy!!!!!
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  • From Jien on April 17, 2008
    I wonder if Gaara will really get preggy XD that'd be fun~
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  • From DuosAngel on April 17, 2008
    Wow, I'm not much of a Naru/Gaara fan but this was great. I love Gaara's answer. I wonder what Naruto would say when he finds out what was really going on?
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  • From robyntalks on April 17, 2008
    Loved this lemon, almost as good as bachlor.
    HOT HOT HOT.
    But I want more Problem, more Anbu, more more more pleasse.
    I've read every thing you write and eagerly await any new posting.
    I have your profile on my fav list and check on you every time I log in.
    I'm sorry I haven't reviewed so far but I will from now on.

    Looking forward

    Love always Robyn
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  • From charmpit on April 17, 2008
    After reading this fic I have decided that a pierced, horny Naruto is as scary as it is sexy.

    Holy shit, he got to top Gaara!
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