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Reviews for Show Me, Touch Me, Catch Me

By : ladygizarme
  • From ANON - Dag on September 26, 2013
    I loved it so much! Hope that you will continue... But it's been quite long time since it was written :( I like this idea of shoujo-ai/yuri with a hint naru/sasu in the backround. If you would developed that more and posted in yaoi section you would probobly have more readers. A few hot scenes would be nice, too. Anyways I got so interested that I almost regret reading it!!! because I have no chance of finding out what will happen next :((((
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  • From Labbess on July 22, 2009
    That was actually probably one of the most realistic AU stories I've ever read... aside from the sudden "OMG INO IS LEBIAN!!11!!" moment XD;; You expressed the characters as normal teenagers very well... and I actually think I liked Sakura. OMIGOSH, you are a miracle worker. (Also, thank you for sneaking in some KibaHina in there, whether you meant to or not ;) ) Good work!
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  • From garsdal on May 04, 2009
    well written, slow build up, secrecy and ignorance. DANM good yuri story.
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  • From MysteryCraze on April 19, 2009
    I am all aflutter. This is so good, a very enjoyable read, and I cannot wait for the next chapter! I have a soft spot in my heart for this pairing, even though I'm not a huge Sakura fan. But I adore Ino and I like the idea of the two of them together. I also like the subtlety of the Naru/Sasu-ness in the background, and I'm also curious as to what's going on there, even though I have some theories.

    And I'm not too sure about Mama Haruno . . . she seems to be scheming.

    But you got me on edge waiting for more, so good show!
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  • From RichardH on April 15, 2009
    I honestly can't wait for the next chapter, it seems like a GOOD high school drama. I like it
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  • From KyashiiRoku on April 14, 2009
    I LOVE IT!!! Please continue! I can't wait to see where this goes. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - surprise! on March 04, 2009
    i always smirk when i see you write 'the Uchiha' cause that is JUST how i feel about the little rat.

    Danzou....*growls* you prick
    Mr. Umino... the freshman teacher.. mwahaha

    i dont know why that amuses me.

    anyway... as usual, i love your descriptive prowess. i can literally visualize the classroom, and Ino standing outside the doorway. You have such a talent for that.
    OMG ino.. of course naruto is upset! -_-
    they are bestest friends till the end dont you know.
    PIG FETUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSESSSSSSSSSSS
    that WAS pretty damn nasty
    i cant say that i blame ino in the slightest for not liking it.

    i LOVE the P.E. scene. It makes me wanna look up Sakura pictures..smexy ones
    supersmexyprOn ones
    need i go on?
    also, for some reason, your writing of ino makes me like her much more. she seems so mature, and
    not the annoying bitch that most people write her as
    omg ino not wearing her school gym shirt is hilarious..

    Ino's jealousy is so super hot to me.
    bathroom.. so...much...lovely...fluff..i love you!

    hahaha naruto is a jackass... gods love him.

    awww awesome chapter! i love it! i cant wait until you put out another.
    you know i will always beta when i can, kid.
    love you
    sk



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  • From ANON - Magical Reality on February 28, 2009
    Oooh, I am really loving this story. XD Please, keep writing more! I want to see how Sakura and Ino's relationship works out!
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  • From Ffourteen on September 12, 2008
    Your writing is technically proficient, but the second chapter felt anti-climatic. Felt like there was a lot of information in there I was just skimming over to get back to the story itself. I think you did well building up the tension in the first one, and it just kind of fizzled out here.
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  • From ANON - sasukeskyuubi on September 07, 2008
    to Lee and Springtime of Youth-iness.. much love
    Sakura was just glad he would be too preoccupied with training to hang around professing his love and devotion to her with outrageous promises of physical feats that held dire consequences if he did not accomplish them......"cute!"

    nyahaha! Shino's one sided lecture questions... LOVE

    Naruto is adorable...and you write him well.
    "if I hadn’t already been melted into a pile of inert goo.” HAHAHA Sakura-san.. that was HILARIOUS!
    If only Sakura realized that when Naru said he was jealous..it wasnt being jealous of sasuke
    taping the American Idol to watch together even though they had already watched it and discussed it seperately sounds like us to me.

    Very good chapter, lg.. cant wait for the next one.. so hurry up.. and post.. on all 19 of your fics.. now..
    -sk.


    ok...seriously.. go write now.
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  • From ANON - sasukeskyuubi on September 07, 2008

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  • From ANON - sasukeskyuubi on September 07, 2008
    ok.. so here i am... feeding your review animal, even though i was going to make you wait this time.
    cause i am evil.

    but here we go.

    It lasted only a handful of seconds before she pulled away, the soft sound of kiss-moistened lips pulling apart accompanying the action.-this is cute.. and i like the "handful of seconds" thing.

    it is so infuriatingly cute...when sakura's POV starts, you just wanna be like.. KISS HER BACK dammit!
    you write their kiss so.. gently, and soft.. and pure.. it is nice.

    the dreams are pretty cool...they are fragmented just enough to seem realistic to me ^_^ the queen of odd dreams.

    I can totally see Sakura as a bed hog! haha that is pretty awesome.

    i want to know what kinda perfume ino wears... i dont know why...but it makes me curious because a small paragraph was put in JUST for her to find and spray herself with it.

    I like how you made it a condition of Mr. Hyuuga's for them to go to church if Hinata spent the night... its kinda.. a cool thing for him to do. Sakura zoning out during church is awesome! she TOTALLY would! inner sakura would be having a field day!


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  • From ANON - RandiRidiculous on June 20, 2008
    I thought it was really good. I think you should continue on with the story and maybe have them get together eventually. Maybe. :)
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  • From rxtechgirl on June 07, 2008
    Nice! I usually write and read het, but I ventured over to give a look. I've hinted a SakuIno in one of my fics. I should spin it off into it's own story. lmao Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Vevee on April 25, 2008
    I liked this peace, for a moment I thought it was going to be a one-shot for a second. I hope you finish it soon, I like your style.
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