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Reviews for The Agreement

By : Jelp
  • From alleycat88 on June 18, 2008
    Awww...Naruto cares for Hinata! ^.^ I knew it! Sakura is such a bitch! What the hell is her problem!? Awesome chapter! Update soon!
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  • From mls1971 on June 18, 2008
    loved the new chapter!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!
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  • From lexjamandme on June 18, 2008
    I liked how open Sasuke and Hinata are toward each other. It makes sense, I mean, the secrets wouldn't work if they didn't, but even something like the letter and Sasuke still presented it to Hinata for her opinion. I'm glad.
    I kinda missed Naruto in this one. Little ray of sunshine that he is. Thanks for the update.

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  • From kitsuko999 on June 18, 2008
    At first I thought this was going to be some set-up letter written by Neji to pull off as Naruto flattering her (so that Sakura will break off with Naruto and possibly venture toward being a part of Hinata’s family which in kind of words is as close to being with Hinata despite everyone believing she’s only married to Sasuke). But then it was clear that Naruto had written it a long time ago and I do understand what Sasuke was talking about, that Naruto wasn’t saying he loved Hinata, but greatly appreciated her support and friendship with him through all these passing years. Oh and the little moment between Seiryuu and Kitsu was funny as well to me. I love it how Sasuke’s acting all maternal toward his babies, always desiring to hold his children as would any first-time parent that becomes overly possessive of what is clearly theirs. The next chapter does sound very intriguing and I have a feeling it has to do with Sakura and Naruto’s relationship. Plus, I guess chapter 15 of Mine will be coming out anytime this week, huh? You left it on such an intense cliff hanger! Even though you said it will be an okay happy ending in a way, I am fearful just a bit of what will happen. Poor Sasuke. I really like the kind of character you give Sasuke in all your stories –not out of character at all and an interesting view of what he would be like when older and finally living a happy life. Thanks for the update, Jelp!

    ~SasuNaru~

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  • From Picspixie on June 17, 2008
    i really like where this story is going and i luv the constant updates but i really can't wait for some sasunaru action again, hopefully with some feeling, hope we get to see the letter naruto wrote to sasuke and sakura :P
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  • From ANON - Vixenia on June 17, 2008
    gah i just love this story so much. i never know what will happen next and that's what makes all your stories so damn awesome. please update soon. can't wait!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on June 16, 2008
    Thanks for the new chapter! It was funny how Sasuke thought up an idea on where the whisker marks came from and Sakura bought it, even though it was lame. :D
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  • From serenagold on June 16, 2008
    Hmm.... Sakura's got a keen eye. Good thing Sasuke's a crafty bastard when it comes to quick lies.


    Although offering Sakura the opportunity to be part of their actual marriage was very generous of him.
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  • From ANON - Qinni on June 15, 2008
    i agree with sasuke being a bit out of character xD;;~ he's a bit...too mental @_@;;~ xD;; but...MOAR (sasunaru) SEX PLZ? lol, xDDD~ it's good though, will be back to check every week to see how it goes =3~ very interesting read
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  • From alleycat88 on June 15, 2008
    I hope no one else notices the babies resemblance to Naruto! When will everything start to come together?! Like the fact that they are all married?! Please more soon!
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  • From on June 15, 2008
    Ah, this is getting so good. I can't even guess anymore what you have planned next!
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  • From KibaNaru on June 15, 2008
    He thinks he's in trouble? I know he's in trouble! Lol. I can't wait to read more. This story is very interesting. Though I did find Sasuke's excuse for the whiskers rather bad ... Anyway, UPDATE SOON!!! X3
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  • From ItaNarulover on June 15, 2008
    This chapter was awesome, I loved it! This fic is now one of my favorite ones, and that makes you one of my favorite authors! So keep up with the good work! Take care. Hugs
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  • From Allys on June 15, 2008
    Awww *huggles Naruto*. He's so freaking cute XD. And I love how Sasuke is getting all defensive of all the babies. I really do want them to all be happy together. It was really sweet and big of him to extend the invitation to Sakura as well (I'm so proud XD). Lol, they're all adorable. I can't wait until the babies are old enough to have personalities XD. I think it'll be great fun. But really did Sakura have to hit him :s... *grumbles*. Still trying not to hate her. Still somewhat failing. *sighs and Loves on you for updating* Thank you. I love that you got it out despite real world intervention. I know how that can be *hugs u*.
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  • From lexjamandme on June 15, 2008
    Seriously... you are killing me.
    I adore Sasuke to pieces. And Naruto... sighs contently. And even little Hinata... whom I secretly love. But, why can't you choose! Sakura... bitch? Not so bitch?
    Each chapter I start out with the benefit of the doubt. Maybe she can work herself into the family although honestly, even though I love Hinata... We are talking about Sasuke and Naruto... SASUKE and NARUTO... the hearts in my eyes make typing damn near impossible. Shakes head... FOCUS! Okay, so I'm thinking they could all be one big happy family (with certain amounts of 'special' alone time for my boys) and then she goes all freaky Jason on Sasuke... and yes, I get that she is right, but she doesn't know that... anyway... Then you have her soften up... then you have her HIT Naruto... damn, she is abusive! I can see why Sasuke gets all angry. And even while I'm sharpening my pitch fork you make her talk all sweet about Naruto and how he knows she can't have kids... And then, as I'm putting the pitch fork back into the shed you have her mention her obsession with Sasuke.
    That's it... I don't even know what the hell I'm doing with the pitch fork anymore. So dizzy... feeling light headed... ALL YOUR FAULT!
    That said... loving the story, loving you (in a non-stalkerish, but I do carry a pitchfork kinda way.)
    Looking forward to the next.
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