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By : Jelp
  • From serenagold on June 27, 2008
    Wow. Naruto and Sakura seem to be at an end. o_o Sakura was really getting out of hand. The pressure of knowing (or thinking she knows) that her 2nd prize husband was sleeping with the person she gave up her one true love for must have made her snap!

    Of course, if Sasuke and Hinata tell Naruto now that Sakura was half right and the children were really his all along... that might not go well either. The two of them would be indirectly responsible for breaking up his marriage! (Not that that wasn't what they intended eventually, but still!) Although things might get interesting when Sakura goes to file for a divorce and finds she's got an additional husband and wife. :x


    Keep up the great work! :D
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  • From ANON - TFizzle on June 27, 2008
    All I have to say to Sakura is Yaaah-Bitch-Yaaah!!!!
    This is turning into the best soap opera fic that
    I have ever read and I love it!!!!!!Keep it coming
    Jelp,you are a true master of storytelling......
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  • From ANON - Lily on June 25, 2008
    OMG!WOW I honestely didn't expect that at all!!! At the begining I was really mad a Sakura for 1) brought up the conversation like that to poor Hinata, 2) She was fighting in front of the babies.(They are kids and should be present that type of conversations)3) she SLAP! Hinata!! for no reason!!!, 4) She almost HIT one of the KIDS!!! I was really grateful that someone hit her at the time, but I went on shock mode when I notice it had been NARUTO!! I was like WHAT? WHAT JUST HAPPEN!? I think i looked the same or worse than Sasuke and Hinata lol. Can't difenetely wait 'til saturday!!! it gone be soooo goood!!! this was the greatess chapter so far! I really love it(Now I understand what you meant that this and the next one are one of you favorites chap!) awesome job! ^_^

    hug&kisses

    Lily
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  • From ANON - Lily on June 25, 2008
    poor naruto, that sakura is soo mean to him. I t was really sad that he miss the birthday party of the quads(his kids) it was all sakura's fault! For what? if later on she went to drink and left naruto all along! The letter that naruto wrote to sasuke really confuse me. what does it mean? does he loves him or not? I dying of curiousity! I defenetely hate sakura! thanks for the update! I think you are doing a great job, so if you are 1 or 3 day late, that would really matter, because I know that you will update sooner or later. You have been really good to us (readers)and I love this fic. I would be ok with waiting. ^_^ great chap.

    hug&kisses

    Lily ^_^
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  • From ANON - Lily on June 25, 2008
    Why Sakura is sooo jealous! I mean she has a reason, but she should be jealous of Sasuke not hinata. I
    wonder what would she do if she gets to know that naru almost kiss Sasuke twice! she would be sooo angry! I'm so happy for hinata. she got that cute letter, but at the same time i'm sad for sasuke because you could tell that naruto really liked (or still does) hinata. this was a good chap! great job!

    hug&kisses

    Lily
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  • From ANON - lily on June 25, 2008
    hi! I have taken a long time to review, but here I'm!! OMG! Sakura finally notice the marks. She was really being a ***ch poor Hinata, she has to put out with her. I gets me made every time Sakura hits Naru-chan. She sooo mean. I want her dead* lol great chap!

    hug&kisses

    lily

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  • From bluegenjutsu on June 25, 2008
    Thanks for the new chapter!! Poor Naruto is so hurt and it's too bad that it's Sasuke's fault. But Naruto and Sakura aren't right together so I guess it's better that Naruto had to learn this the hard way. I can't wait until the next chapter, that according to the title is about Naruto learning the truth, right? It's going to be a sad chapter though, isn't it?
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  • From mls1971 on June 25, 2008
    Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - mango on June 25, 2008
    wow that was good~! you always have appropriate titles lol
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  • From Allys on June 24, 2008
    YES!!! I almost kinda wish that Naruto had hit her for hitting on him... but we both know that would have never happened. But damn that bitch seriously lost her mind. First off, she hit Hinata. Hinata. Then she tried to hit the baby. Yeah I saw that punch coming from a mile away but I seriously thought it was gonna be Sasuke. I'm so freaking happy it was Naruto. And the hugs and baby pile afterward was adorable. It was like solace. I love that his babies sooth his soul. And omg XD. Sasuke made me want to glomp him all through this chapter ('and this one is Naato' XD). Not to mention his reaction to Sakura hitting his wife. That was priceless. I'm so happy he's warming up to Hinata, LOL, I'm just so happy right now. Gods *HUGS U* XD. And the name of the next chapter is just adding to my joy XD. AT LAST!!!! (cue the violins) ~My love has come along, my lonely days are over and life is like a song ~XD I'm so freaking happy!! I can't wait!!! LOL, Saturday Hurry the hell up!!!
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  • From Gwyllion on June 24, 2008
    OH MAN!!! Sakura deserved that puch so bad! And much more in my own opinion. She def needed to be shown her place. I'm kind of glad this happened, but now the tension is rising. Hope all will come out alright. Especially with Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. Great job in this. I was on the edge of my seat! :D
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  • From ANON - k on June 24, 2008
    That should be the last straw for Naruto when Sakura tried to hit 1 of the baby.
    When Naruto hit her I was jumping for joy. I hope we don't have to wait too long to see Naruto chuck her out.

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  • From ANON - Akiko on June 24, 2008
    Aahhhh the tension!! I just realised that I was holding my breath when I finished the last sentence. Keep going! Can't wait for what is about to happen next!

    Greetings from Germany
    Aki
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on June 24, 2008
    Well thank you Jelp's friend for lending her the use of your computer so she could post. First reaction to the latest chapter is: What the hell is wrong with that bitch? I can see Naruto standing up for the babies, I mean he is with them so much plus his character is one to protect others; especially those who can't protect themselves. How much more can Naruto and Sakura's relationship survive? I mean I can tell he is really sorry about hitting her but really it's like they are at a crossroad in how things will be. I can understand the pain Sakura is feeling thinking her husband has cheated on her. But either she has to give up on that pain and accept her husband at his word or their relationship is over. I'm not sure how this obvious choosing of sides by Naruto will affect Sakura and their relationship. Being they are ninjas I don't know how much the idea of him striking her will be a problem; being they spar and would hit one another, but I would think it would be probably seen as a defection in a way; Naruto defecting from the special relationship she and he would share as husband and wife, Naruto has basically made the choice that the babies, Sasuke, and Hinata was more important than she was. That has to hurt her and make her want to end the relationship. In a way it helps Sasuke in his want to be with Naruto, if Sakura is out of the picture making some progress on him and Naruto being together if he can convince him that Hinata doesn't mind . . . or including him in their marriage . I can't wait to see what happens. Will Naruto have a depression from this? How will he react? I'm sure he will try to salvage things with Sakura but what will she do to him in return? He might end up in the hospital. In the previous chapter it was said that Sakura had been spending a lot of time with Ino. Does this have anything to do with her not given up on that the babies aren't Sasuke's? Has Sakura been looking for another person to be with since she and Naruto have had problems since basically they got married? Well the story is really coming a long wonderfully. Can't wait to read more as always. Thank you for the update. Take care.

    littleolmee
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  • From ANON - Ivy on June 24, 2008
    Very dramatic. This chapter rocked! Sakura deserved that hit...too bad Naruto feels guilty for it. Can't wait for the next chapter :-)
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