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By : Jelp
  • From pumbaaaa on July 03, 2008
    Once again, great chapter. Thanks for the Thursday update. The only negative for me, personally, is the Hinata involvement. I read this for SasuNaru, and I obviously understand your intentions as the writer, but I just would prefer Hinata to not really be involved romantically..., but whatever. I'll still love it.
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  • From Allys on July 03, 2008
    ;_;... This was so... *cries*. It's heartbreaking, but wonderful at the same time. I really don't know what else to say everyone made me so happy and so sad all at once. It's just heartbreaking ;_; ♥.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on July 03, 2008
    Thanks for the new chapter! It's too bad that Naruto doesn't realize yet that he has a true family with Sasuke, Hinata and their babies, instead of with Sakura, who doesn't love him the way his real family does. I really wish she would just leave Naruto and go with Lee so that she is out of the picture. :D
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  • From pumbaaaa on July 01, 2008
    Ah! I totally thought Sakura was cheating this whole time. I knew it. This chapter was great, you wrote everything out so perfect. It must have been hard to write Naruto's reaction (or not, what do I know about writing, heh), but it was spot on. Oh, and you should update before Saturday, since we only got one chapter this week ^^ please? :(
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  • From KibaNaru on July 01, 2008
    FINALLY!!! I hope Naruto sees that sasuke did it for him and his children; even if sasukes a little nuts. I want more! X3
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  • From Madamdragon on July 01, 2008
    Hope everything works out for them Boo to Sakura...Update soon please!
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  • From kyuubifreak on July 01, 2008
    this story is one of my favorite now!! i cannot wait for more
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  • From ItaNarulover on July 01, 2008
    OMG, I love this fic so much. These two recent chapters were amazing, and so has every chapter been so far. I can't even express how much I love this fic in words, because it's so incredible. This is by far one of my favorite fics here at AFF, thank you so much for writing it! I love you! ^/-^
    This chapter was exactly how I imagined it, everything was flawless and very exciting. The way of your writing makes you get sucked inside of the fic, and you can't nor want to get out. You get addicted to it and can't stop reading. (that's how I feel anyway ;P )
    So keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs




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  • From lexjamandme on July 01, 2008
    Finally the truth is out and I STILL can't decide if I should hate Sakura or not. This morning I'm going with 'yes', mostly because I can.
    I know that Naruto hasn't even begun to process everything and my chest hurts just thinking about how he is going to handle it all. I liked how Sasuke told him, thought. To the point and yet supportive of whatever reaction Naruto might have. You can tell that he and Hinata really do care about Naruto. I hope he sees that.
    Another chapter from an awesome writer. I love you.
    Michele
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  • From Allys on July 01, 2008
    Spoil us! Update again today XD. LOL, yeah I'm not so subtle in my efforts to get Moooooorrrreee!!! XD I love this story!! And this was fantastic. I want to say Poor Sasuke, but it really is his own fault *huggles him anyway*. It's good though, it's really good that Naruto finally knows the truth. Now that everything's out in the open maybe they can actually move forward XD. He has every right to be angry, but it'll pass. Naruto loves them both back after all :D. I'm so happy!! And I knew it!!!! Stupid Sakura *sighs*. All it would have taken is trust and faith. That shouldn't be too much to ask when talking about someone who has never let you down before. But I suppose her own guilt tampered with her judgement. She didn't love him enough. And he knew, so I suppose I can't really blame her, just call her a baka. I'm so happy he knows XD. *gives a little happiness dance*. Thank you so much for the update ♥ and i'm glad you enjoyed your visit :).
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  • From wpriest696 on July 01, 2008
    I love this story! I practically have my week revolving around when the next update will be out. I'm so glad you finally got this chapter out and it was well worth the wait. I've been dying to see how you would handle the revelation and it was perfect. Please, please update by Thursday with chocolate chocolate-chip cookies with chocolate icing on top!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on July 01, 2008
    Thanks for the new chapter!! I'm glad that Sasuke finally told Naruto the truth. I also loved how intimate Sasuke was with Naruto, it was hot despite the fact that Naruto was in shock. Looks like Naruto has a lot of thinking to do. Too bad that he thinks Sakura is the only one that was true to him. She doesn't deserve it.
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  • From ANON - lily on July 01, 2008
    I think is a wonderful idea to update again before saturday(Can't wait for next chap!!) Let me tell you, in my head I have been thinking how was Sasuke gone tell naruto. I hadn't come out with a good scenario, but this! this was perfect! Sasuke finally kiss him!!!! and he almost get naturo right then and there!!! I knew it!!!! Sakura was sheating on him.(I just though that it was with Ino) I love naruto's reaction "They are mine!" it was so cute. Now what is missing in he reaction when finally process that Sasuke is in love with him! That's why I can't wait for the next chap! so please if you can update before saturday, you would make me the happies girl in the world!(along with the other readers reading this)lol Excelent work! ^_^

    hug&kisses

    Lily
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  • From susanna on July 01, 2008
    Poor Lee! Eventually he will suffer from Sakura's violence as much as Naruto, as she will probably not stop thinking that she is perfectly in the right to beat her partner when he does not behave according to her wishes.

    I read your profile and wondered what you meant by the different attitude towards infidelity in Europe and America, but now I think I understand. I think that violence is far more dangerous and, yes, evil, than infidelity. A husband or wife who is cheating on their partner will be divorced from their partner - at the worst. There are people who put up with it. A husband or wife who is beating their partner however is comitting a crime and should be put to trial. The most heart-breaking parts of your stories are all those "I deserve it" moments from Naruto, when Sakura is beating him. They are all too realistic, and Sasuke's anger is justified.

    Ah, Sasuke. I cannot help like him in your story, just as much as in "Mine", even though raping Naruto under a genjutsu is really not okay. But at least he learnt from it and did not continue it. He is a brave ninja, and yet such a coward when it comes to confessing his love to Naruto.


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  • From serenagold on July 01, 2008
    Ah!!! It came out! The truth! What's going to happen next! i have no idea!!!! Gah!!!


    Yeah... if you can, I support the early Thursday update. Please? 0:)

    Pretty please?


    With sugar on top??





    Eeee!!
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