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Reviews for The Agreement

By : Jelp
  • From Allys on May 20, 2008
    Awww, I love this business of speedy updates! *HUGS* XD. This chapter was filled with sweetness. I like this new dreamy version of Sasuke. It's incredibly adorable. And Hinata reminding him of his mum is perfect. Shhe is a lot like his mummy, or at least what we saw of her. I don't want Naruto to sleep with Sakura either *wails* But I suppose that would just be way too good to be true :(. I'm curious to see how Hinata handles the mind control aspect of the smex. Babies XD. *flails happily* I'm so excited!!, except what are they gonna do on the off chance that one of them has blue eyes or blond hair?? Thank god for those being recessive genes ne? XD *Mwah* Thanks for the update sweetie ;).
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  • From lovelessjayson on May 20, 2008
    Smut is good, I can deal with smut. I love the chapter I can't wait for more.
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  • From Nikana on May 20, 2008
    You know? people like Sasuke do exist, I mean, am not stating the obvious(well yes I was) but this is turning into a more type of sickening obsession and if I could pity someone it will be not Sasuke, but Naruto. The object of the obsession is often the only one damaged enough to believe that they "even" provoqued said compulsion,and if "Mine" its any indication...are you going to dismiss Sakura to a better life? or even Hinata? Well if dear Sasuke continues his "quest" to be Naru-chan only and truly owner, he will end killing his own shadow ^^
    Awsome chapter as usual ^^
    bye
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  • From Akaatje on May 20, 2008
    It took me a little while to read every chapter that I've missed (had no time akshually (lolz)) en I have to say that I am impressed and you are doing well:P

    It pleases meeeeeeee (squeaz!)

    So please update update update (Im sugar HIgh)
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  • From serenagold on May 20, 2008
    Oh my! :x What could possibly happen next chapter that involves Naruto in some non-consensual sex?! O_O
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  • From Allys on May 20, 2008
    Oh man... you can't make me like Sakura. Trust me a lot of people have tried and while she as a person can be seen to have some redeeming qualities the thought of her with Naruto skeeves me the fuck out! I hate it *pouts and grumbles* But I do wish Sasuke had spent a little more time with Hinata at the wedding. I love the idea of them being really good friends. Sasuke needs someone gentle. Neither Naruto nor Sakura could ever be that for him. I think the idea of SasuNaruHina is fantastic, now to just get rid of Sakura! *Pulls Neji aside to recommence the plotting*. About Sakura being the mastermind. BLAH!! Why couldn't she just pull Naruto aside and freaking humble herself to him?? And why does she have to be so damn bossy in the first place *grumps* LOL sorry I know I'm just being difficult XD. *Huggles u* I was so upset when I saw that there were no more chapters!! But hey, you said twice a week right?? I'm looking forward to it :D.
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  • From Allys on May 20, 2008
    LOL, What the... XD What is going on??? XD can't stay will review next chapter, I've got to see what this attack is about!
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  • From Allys on May 20, 2008
    Wow. I loved Sasuke's whole impassioned speech, that's exactly how I freaking feel about Naruto.He's such a beautiful person. And I love how it shows up Sasuke's personality. Even though he would do anything for Naruto and he loves him dearly, he's still a pro-active person, and the thought of just standing by and doing nothing would kill him. Or drive him mad *cou-Mine-gh*. :D I still can't believe how psycho he is in that story. Hinata is still as adorable as ever here and *snickers* for a second there I couldn't help but feel maybe Neji wanted in on this marriage too. XD I really enjoy the fact thart Neji and hiashi are being so supportive of Hinata's feelings :). That had always irked me about them *hugs u*
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  • From Allys on May 19, 2008
    OMG I have no idea what is going on in that boy's mind O.O;; Or your mind! XD. But I'm sure I eill enjoy it immensely. Gods you almost killed me with the imagery at the end there *drool*. And a bachelor party!! *happy dances* Will there be drunkenness at this lovely event?? LOL, I'm so excited but I'm also exhausted! I'm gonna crash and continue this tomorrow *hugs u*. it's kind of nice having multiple chapters to go through, but I still want to catch up!

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  • From Allys on May 19, 2008
    Hmmm... Yeah Naruto and Sakura's situation is just getting more and more fishy :s... But hey they're gonna be married!!! All of them together! Loves that idea! Now if only they could figure out a way fo just the three of them to be married. Hmmm... XD. *huggles u* To excited to write much more. Loved the scene in the sex shop ;). Onward to the next chappie :D.
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  • From Allys on May 19, 2008
    What is going through that boys head!? LOL, I don't know if to be worried or excited XD. I'm really enjoying this, but *sighs* I hate Naruto going on about love when he's thinking about Sakura :(. I HATE NaruSaku with such a burning and thriving passion. It is my least favourite pairing. *grumps* Thank god for Sasuke and Hinata ♥
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  • From Allys on May 19, 2008
    Oh Man... LOL, you crazy genius you! WTF?? XD. I'm loving this already. Especially after your little authors note. i was kind of worrying that Hinata would just get used and hurt in all of this, but if she and Sasuke become good friends then the answer to that is no. But seriously I ADORE this idea. And am ALL in Favour of SasuNaruHina!!! XD I LOVE Hinata! *glomps you* Have you worked out the whole Byakugan/Sharingan thing if the baby is oging to be from all three of them that might pose a problem. LOL, maybe if Sasuke is good enough at his jutsu he can alternate and have at least 2 kids, one with the byakugan adn one with the sharingan. *huggles u* I'm off to chappie 2.
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  • From faerygoddyss on May 19, 2008
    Took me some time but I finally finished reading this story up until now and I cant wait for more!
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  • From serenagold on May 18, 2008
    I can't wait for the next chapter. =^^=


    Although Sakura is making amends... I still can't see her being a helpful member of their little four part spousal agreement. Hmm... I'm just going to have to wait for the next chapter, eh? :D
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - SasuNaru723 on May 18, 2008
    Ahh, I love the way how you write Sasuke to be so damn possessive of Naruto. It's this that makes your SasuNaru stories so interesting along with many twists and cliff-hangers in the plot. Great chapter, Jelp!
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