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By : Jelp
  • From serenagold on May 26, 2008
    I always knew Sasuke would be a twisted little rapist eventually.... hehe.. Keep up the good work!


    Also, sucks to hear about your surgery. I hope it was nothing serious.
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  • From kitsuko999 on May 25, 2008
    First of all, excellent chapter! Love the medical description you’ve put in here, although I was just a tad bit confused when you were saying Sasuke was going to implant his eggs turned from his sperm as well as use Hinata’s eggs (because I guess I thought Sasuke was going to just medically inject both his sperm and Naruto’s sperm in each of Hinata’s eggs). And if Sasuke wanted kids with Naruto but knew he needed a sergeant mother, I would have assumed Sasuke would only used Sasuke’s eggs with Naruto’s sperm and just implant them into Hinata for her to carry. Oh, well. I’m sure I’ll get the jest of it through the next few chapters as the eggs begin to grow within Hinata. I have to say, I like the whole idea of Hinata being the sergeant mother of Sasuke and Naruto’s children. I’ve always thought Hinata would be a really good mother and its cute how Sasuke’s affection for Hinata is similar to that of what affections he once had for his mother. I can’t wait to see Naruto’s shocked face when he finds out he’s the biological parent of Sasuke and Hinata’s children which happen to be Naruto’s children as well. I wonder how many they’ll have… Well, I’ll just have to find out later in the chapters, ne?

    ~SasuNaru723~

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  • From ANON - Dalli on May 25, 2008
    I giggled the whole time I imagined Sasuke humping Naruto's leg like a horny Chihuahua XD He's really starting to scare me, it's about time he realizes he's acting like a nutty fanboy (not that I blame him =D).
    Now, don't take this as a flame or an insult - I could never dream of doing something like that 'cause you're one of my favorite authors! - but I noticed that you often repeat the subject (i.e. Sasuke, Naruto) many times in the same paragraph. I know sometimes it can't be helped so to avoid misunderstandings as to who does what or what belongs to whom, but there are times in which you can easily replace the noun with a pronoun or something else (without exaggerating, of course!).
    I've noticed this especially in the 9th chapter, but you said you've taken those meds, so I guess that explains the slip.
    Besides that I'm looking forward to what's going to happen next (I have question, though I think it's a stupid one: does Hinata know and/or accept that Sasuke will most likely have his wicked way with Naruto at every given opportunity?)

    Woah, I hope I didn't bore you with this long review :) Hope you get well soon!

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  • From ItaNarulover on May 25, 2008
    I loved it! This fic is amazing, and so is you're other story called Mine. You're an extremly talented author, so keep up with the good work. And I can't wait to read the next chapter. take care. hugs
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on May 25, 2008
    yes sasuke is crazed but we all like him that way. and did you that your title for this chap is a wicked song by avenged sevenfold that has been trapped in my mind for the past week ever since i saw the vid on youtube? there's some non-con action plus some going on in there, too. creepy. anyway, looking forward to the next update.

    ~Devious
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  • From sweetciel on May 25, 2008
    Possessive, crazed, obsessive sasu is the sexiest thing EVER!!! I LOVE the way you write him ^_^
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  • From ANON - Cals on May 24, 2008
    I don't know why but I love it when Sasuke is obsessed.
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  • From ANON - Cals on May 24, 2008
    I don't know why but I love it when Sasuke is obsessed.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on May 24, 2008
    Wonderful chapter, loved the beginning of this lemon. Hmm Sasuke's impatience is going to come back to bite him in the ass isn't it? I can see the similarities between this one and your other story. I can see where you drew it from. Nicely done. You poor dear! What happened to you? I hope you are off the crutches soon and the surgery took care of whatever was ailing you. Ah med's . . . well yes I have lots of experience of trying to write and taking med's that do strange things to you. I'll say you do a hell of a lot better job than I do! I usually just pass out on the keyboard and have lots of strange letters and symbols left behind.
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  • From mls on May 22, 2008
    loved this chapter!! can't wait to read the next one!!!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on May 21, 2008
    Yay! Sasuke's not going to waste time in making babies with Naruto!! I love mini Naruto's and Sasuke's! :D Thanks for the new chapter!
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  • From sweetciel on May 21, 2008
    I'm really really looking forward to seeing how the children's appearences turn out. I think people would be suspicious if hinata gave birth to blonde haired babies. And yay to m/m smut that will be seen in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lily on May 21, 2008
    Thanks for the e-mail! sorry it takes me soo long to review! you actually update more fast than what I can read lol. I really like that about you! anyway I agree with Sasuke, eww sakura and naruto in bed! Hinata is really sweet. you are making it so dificult. cuz' am kind of starting for hinata to end with sasuke or naruto. It just that she desever it, she has been good to them! I can't wait to know if naruto did it with sakura. I'm kind of hoping that naruto was so nervous that he couldn't get up and they end up doing nothing! lol looking forward to the next chap. great chapter!!

    hug&kisses

    lily
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  • From alleycat88 on May 21, 2008
    Sasuke and hinata are sooooo bad! but its genius! I cant wait for the next chapter! ^^
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  • From ANON - Lanie12777 on May 21, 2008
    Your story just gets better with every chapter. I absolutely love this story, and I look forward to Tuesdays and Saturdays because of updates! It's one of my favorite stories(top 3). Can't wait for the next chapter!^_^
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