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By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Belle on May 31, 2008
    I know that's why I haven't been watching the manga.
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  • From kitsuko999 on May 29, 2008
    The passion you formed in this chapter was AMAZING!! Although, having Sasuke AND Naruto interacting together in foreplay (rather than having Sasuke use genjutsu on Naruto and create an illusion) would be so much hotter. Anyhoo, great chapter, Jelp! I’m looking forward to the babies (or baby) which will probably come into play within a few more chapters (and also looking forward to reading Naruto’s reaction when he finds out who the parents of the baby(ies)) are. Happy to hear you have your Microsoft Word back up and running. In fact, I did something like that a year ago, but instead I had somehow uninstalled my CD/DVD Hard drive. I panicked and was worried I’d never get it reinstalled (plus my computer wasn’t reading discs), but eventually minutes later I rummaged around my computer’s options and was able to reinstall my CD/DVD Hard drive. But what a scare! I know just how you felt in that sort of situation. In the meantime till Saturday, have a wonderful week! ^_^

    ~SasuNaru723~

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  • From ANON - Yuki on May 29, 2008
    Very interesting premise! Great read.
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  • From serenagold on May 29, 2008
    I'm glad Sasuke felt remorse by the end of this chapter. Although he's sure going to have some explaining to do when they break the news to him that Naruto will be a father. Hmm... I wonder if Naruto was partially aware during the experience?
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  • From ANON - Kang on May 29, 2008
    Hmm, I really like your stories, and your writing in general, but I don't think you give Sasuke enough credit. Sure, he's a little pyscho and (a lot) obsessive, but he has an admirable honor ingrained in his personality, don't you think? I didn't find it very believable that Sasuke decided to rape Naruto. If anything, I would think his pride wouldn't allow him let Naruto not remember their first time. Haha, maybe Sasuke would be better off putting Naruto in a genjutsu where Naruto kisses Sasuke, just to see if Naruto freaked when he woke up or was just embarrassed. Anyway, I look forward to your next update. :)
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  • From Dobe4Ever on May 28, 2008
    I don't necessarily like this interpretation of Sasuke (he's weird, but not that weird). I mean everyone's entitled to their opinion but I just couldn't see the real Sasuke acting that crazy but that's why it's called "creative" writing right! Well, all and all it's a pretty decent (ok not really) story. Keep up the good work! *I just hope this ends well*
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on May 28, 2008
    Yes I see where 'Mine' came from, but still I really love this story, and how great is it that it birthed another great story as well. I do like how in this story Sasuke doesn't want to keep doing this to Naruto cause he is more focused on getting Naruto to love him not just the physical want of their bodies. Where in 'Mine' the Sasuke doesn't have the ability to say no to the physical cause he has to save Naruto's life with the act. I do wonder what he'll do to make Naruto fall in love with him though? How will he get this done or does he have to do much? Sasuke saying something about how he'd practiced with his own bushins before got me thinking . . . just what did Naruto see with in the genjustsu? Was it really his own bushins or did Naruto practice with a bushin of someone else; like Sasuke perhaps? Thanks for the update, keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - lily on May 28, 2008
    love it! this was the best lemon that i have ever read! congra! great job!can't wait for the next one! lol

    hug&kisses

    lily
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  • From ANON - Kyle on May 28, 2008
    Thanks.
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  • From Allys on May 28, 2008
    Wow. Yeah this chapter was just... Pure love. It settled all my misgivings. And now I'm just back to wanting to hug Sasuke again. Poor baby. It's so sad, yet Hott XD. LOL. And I totally fell you on getting lost in Ladelle's stories. So easy to do XD. I hope you update this again soon. Is there a regular schedule? or is it just as you edit the chapters? These chapters are shorter than the chapters I'm accustomed to getting from you, so they go too fast!! LOL, I always want more at the end XD, but I guess that just means that they're really good and on the bright side I can squeeze them in to my day easier *huggles* thanks for the update sweetie!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on May 28, 2008
    Loved the lemon!! I feel so sorry for Sasuke though! He loves Naruto so much and Naruto has no clue. I wonder how Sasuke is going to explain any blond-haired and/or blue-eyed kids that Hinata gives birth to? :D
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  • From alleycat88 on May 28, 2008
    Awww...Sasuke is so cute. Im rooting for you mate! I know you can win Naruto over!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on May 26, 2008
    Thank you for the new chapter! I love stories where Sasuke is obsessed with Naruto! Sasuke just can't control himself where Naruto is concerned. :D
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  • From Allys on May 26, 2008
    I can't believe Sasuke. Silly boy. Even without seeing the title of the next chapter i could have told him that was going to back fire on him. His grip on sanity is tenuous at best. How will he feel after this... *sighs* I have to wait for the next one. This story is tearing at my moral fibre. I'm vacillating between wanting to hug and hit Sasuke. I mean seriously what's so wrong with opening your mouth and saying. Naruto, I like you. More than a friend. Please consider me?? What's so hard about that?? Nope he's got to rape the love of his life *smacks him* LOL, psychosis makes for great drama though *hugs*. Till next time.
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  • From Kalos on May 26, 2008
    I 'll have you know that you owe me $2.45 plus tax :: grabs yet another tissue:: no im serious ^.^;;; no really it was good keep typeing mean while im gonna have to make a trip to the store for more tissue paper.
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