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Reviews for The Agreement

By : Jelp
  • From kitsuko999 on June 03, 2008
    Three boys and one girl! How CUTE!!! Oooo! What color is their hair? Is it black? Dark violet? Orange? Blonde? And I wonder what color their eyes will be as they get older? Besides the babies, my favorite part out of this chapter has to be Sasuke helping Naruto in the bathroom. I loved the chemistry in there even though Naruto was drunk and peeing. Wonderful -wonderful chapter, Jelp!

    ~SasuNaru723~

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  • From ANON - littleolmee on June 03, 2008
    Hey I don't mind you skipped to the birth. I was happy too see it anyway. Sasuke's interaction with Naruto in the bar was great and what Sasuke was thinking is right really. No one would put up with Naruto being physically abusive to Sakura so it shouldn't be alright for her to do it to Naruto. Will Sasuke ever call her on this? Or will Hinata, cause I doubt she likes seeing Naruto hurt like that either. Will you show any of Hinata's POV in how she feels about also being married to Naruto and having his children or more of her feelings on how she sees Naruto and Sakura's marriage compared to how she would have treated Naruto? I thought it was really interesting that Naruto came almost everyday to visit Hinata and Sasuke but there was no mention of Sakura visiting. I wonder how Sakura sees the birth of these children? Is she jealous? Will Naruto continue to visit almost daily now the kids are born and I can't wait to see how he interacts with them. He comes across as having a soft spot for kids. I wonder how Sakura will feel about that? Will she feel jealous and or angry about Naruto visiting with the babies and how will she react towards Naruto because of that? I wonder if Sasuke and Hinata will she Sakura showing her bad side towards Naruto or just the aftermath and how they will react? There is some much that can happen with this. Also when will they find out that the children are really Naruto's, Hinata's, and Sasuke's? What will happen when it all comes out? Can't wait to see what happens, thanks for the update. Take care.


    littleolmee
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  • From ANON - Amber on June 03, 2008
    Yeah, that ROCKED~!
    Makes me so curious to see how the babies are gonna look like! ^.~
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  • From ANON - lily on June 03, 2008
    awwww! that wa fast! the babies are here!! yeah. sakura shouldn't be holding one at all, after all the real parents are naruxsasuxhinata. no sakura! yeah. (I don't like sakura that much lol)
    this was so great! now i can't wait for naruto to know the truth! OMG the first thing that i thought about when all the babies were born was the same as sasuke. I want to know to who they are gone look alike. lol keep the great job! looking forward to next chap.


    hug&kisses

    lily
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  • From mls1971 on June 03, 2008
    loved it!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!
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  • From lexjamandme on June 03, 2008
    I just can't say enough about this story. A celebrating Naruto was perfect.
    And the babies! How exciting. The end with Sasuke and Naruto standing up to protect them... beautiful.
    And Sakura... I can never decide if I am suppose to love her, hate her... what? What do you want me to do???
    As always, looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Kang on June 02, 2008
    Hahaha I'm awesome and I know all your secrets! *insert evil laughter* Well, not really of course. But it isn't *that* hard to guess the course of most fanfics. It was nice to see Sasuke being less of an inconsiderate stalker ass here. *snort* And the genjutsu of cuddling? It made me laugh. I want to see Sasuke x Naruto x Hinata! Is the story progressing in that direction, I wonder? I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - lily on June 01, 2008
    I can't believe that hinata is pregnant!! this chap was really interesting. I wasn't even breathing when naruto lean in to kind of kiss sasuke.!! I couldn't believe that he was gone do it! I hope next chap naruto do something with sasuke while he is drunk!! yeah! great job!

    hug&kisses

    lily
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  • From ANON - mango on June 01, 2008
    i'm really happy with the non-m-preg lol
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  • From mls1971 on June 01, 2008
    can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!
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  • From alleycat88 on May 31, 2008
    YAY! BABIES! *squees* I love babies. Chibi Sasukes and Narutos! And Hinatas of course.. And NO Sakuras ^.^ I cant wait for the next chapter. Although...Im wondering whether or not Hinata is going to tell her father and Neiji that they are Naruto's babies...
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  • From Allys on May 31, 2008
    BABIES!!!! FOUR OF THEM!!! *squees and runs around like a happy crazy person* Naruto's reaction was the BEST I loved it! This chapter made me so happy!! I'm a little suspicious of Hiashi though. He seems to know too much :(. I'm a little worried. Thanks for the update days *hugs* and well LOL the update XD. I can't wait to see these babies!! I'm dying to know what they'll look like and if any of them are gonna shock the hell out of people and pop out with blond hair or blue eyes XD XD XD. Sooooooooo EXCITED!!!! Tuesday will not come fast enough. *loves all over you* ♥♥
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  • From ANON - Kurai Kisu on May 31, 2008
    ARGH!!!! You have me on pin and needles. How in the world are you going to make this circle whole? I have a feeling that I should get comfy for the long haul. WHICH I WILL. I WANNA SEE THOSE TO MEN GET TOGETHER!! I am just extremely confused as to how you are going to make it happen. How does Sakura really feel? You're starting to make me not like her in this story. She seems sneaky. Poor Hinata I can't help but feel shes got the short end of the stick in this. And Sasuke, is he gonna go off the depend or will there but a miraculous save by the dear blond. SASUNARU!!! *falls over foaming at the mouth from the anticipation* UPDATE @.@
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  • From serenagold on May 31, 2008
    I loved the chapter!~
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  • From kitsuko999 on May 31, 2008
    //nods head vigorously// Absolutely agree. Sasuke is a run-way-train set to flames in an unknown course going at 100 mph. When Naruto and him clash… god, its going to be soooo ugly (and I’m talking about the manga too)!!. Besides the turmoil going on in the manga, I was excited to see there’s going to be four babies and most of all at least one is Sasuke and Naruto’s. But I suppose we won’t really know whose babies are whose until they’re born, ne? As in, two of the babies could be Sasuke and Naruto’s while the other two are Hinata and Naruto’s –or maybe only one of them is Hinata and Naruto’s and the rest is Sasuke and Naruto’s? There’s no telling till they’re born and we see what features they have. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter with the babies! Thanks for the lovely update and have a wonderful weekend, Jelp!
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