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By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Ivy on June 07, 2008
    I really enjoyed this chapter! uber sweet ;-)
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  • From bluegenjutsu on June 07, 2008
    Thanks for the new chapter!! I wonder if Naruto and Sakura are already having marital problems? That would be a good thing for Sasuke! So the whiskers marks are going to be seen by everyone in the next chapter? Can't wait to see how Sasuke and Hinata explain that! :D
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  • From sweetciel on June 07, 2008
    It was sweet that sasuke cried tears of happiness. I probably would have too...actually...i probably am now ^_^ Wonderful!
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  • From alleycat88 on June 07, 2008
    Oooo! Whisker marks....how did they get them...this has to do with the kyuubi I know it! I cant wait to see how people will react to them though! How will this be explained away!? And when will they tell Sakura and Naruto that all four of them are married?! O.o I cant wait for more!
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  • From serenagold on June 07, 2008
    I don't know why everyone who does one of these baby fics always assumes some of the kids will have blonde hair! Blond is a recessive trait. Of course all four of them would have dark hair. Both "mothers" are a pair of blue highlighted ravens! ^^


    Keep up the great work. I'm truly excited to find out what the whisker marks might indicate. =o_o= Update soon! :D
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  • From mls1971 on June 07, 2008
    loved the new chapter!!! can't wait to read the next one!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on June 07, 2008
    Such a great chapter. Loved how much time Naruto is spending with Hinata and Sasuke and all the help he is giving to the kids. I agree with your idea not to give the children blond hair, besides isn't blond hair less common when one of the parents have dark hair? Lol, figures something would be passed that will give a clue that Naruto has some parentage with these children. Better be careful when it comes to people like Shikamaru seeing the children, that's something he'd pick up on. Hmm . . . just what are the marks then? If they are from the Kyuubi then has Naruto passed any of the Kyuubi on to the children? If they aren't are the marks from one of Naruto's family? I do have a question though. Being that Hinata married into the Uchiha family and left the Hyuugi why would they be interested in giving her children the caged bird seal? Couldn't Sasuke simply put that the children are Uchihas and not Hyuugi so wouldn't need the seal plus if only one child has the Hyuugi's eyes then that seal wouldn't be needed either would it? Will the fact they don't have Hyuugi eyes be an issue? Since it would seem to be a dominate gene. I guess they could pass it being the Uchiha eyes would be a dominate gene too. I guess it's a good thing that the babies eyes are a darker blue. Can't wait when the naming ceremony happens and they use all of the names Naruto came up with. Great story, thanks so much for the update. I so look forward to your updates. Have a great weekend.

    littleolmee
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  • From hpn827 on June 07, 2008
    I wonder what Hiashi is going to think when he finds that the babies have blue eyes.
    At the end there it seems like Sasuke is willing to share Naruto w/ Hinata.
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  • From ItaNarulover on June 07, 2008
    I love this fic. it's so cute yet weird (in a good way) =)
    So keep up with the good work, I can't wait 'til Naruto finds out about him being the father to the children as well as him and Sasuke getting together.
    So please don't take to long on the update. take care. hugs
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  • From bluegenjutsu on June 05, 2008
    Awww! It would be sweet if the girl baby was Sasuke's and Naruto's and the one that Naruto is holding, too! Sasuke should be allowed to have at least half the babies as his! :D Thanks for the new chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2008
    I really enjoy reading this story. Does Naruto know what's going on? Perhaps It seems almost as if his reactions are a bit too perfect. I'm assuming that there will be at least one blue eyed child. Given Hiashi's suspicions, that should lead to interesting confrontations. Perhaps, Hiashi has already discovered his ties to the future Hokage.
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    Even though I like her better in Shippuuden, I wouldn't mind Sakura being left out of the family picture. There's always Lee. ^_^
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  • From serenagold on June 04, 2008
    Nobody should ever tell Hiashi which baby came out first. Keep it as a secret to the death!
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  • From alleycat88 on June 04, 2008
    AWWWWWW!!!! I love babies! My friend just had a baby yesterday and they are so cute! She was all his eyes are blue! And I was like well yeah hes a baby! I cant wait to see who the babies will take after! If one will have blonde hair or blue eyes like Naruto! Her dad would really flip then! Thanks for updating!
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  • From sweetciel on June 03, 2008
    The babies are here! I was about as excited as naruto ^_^ I'm so happy for them
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  • From Allys on June 03, 2008
    Awwwwwwwww!!!!! XD XD XD Babies and drunken cuddly Naruto!!! XD XD XD LOL, This was such a sweet and happy chapter. Even with the mention of the seal at the end. Neither Naruto nor Sasuke would ever let it happen. Seriously *hugs u* Thank you so much for the update. I love that Naruto's all ridiculously excited, and I can't wait for the babies to open their eyes!!! *bouncing* XD. I hope saturdat comes soon!! ♥
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