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Reviews for Cupcake Queen

By : kocoum
  • From serenagold on May 05, 2008
    Well damn. Haku's a promiscuous little thing, isn't he? ^^


    hehe. Keep up the good work!
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  • From Lakshimata on May 05, 2008
    Well, I think this was amazing -- to be quite frank. Your sense of humour rocks (there are so many lines here that made me roar with laughter) and your characterization is spot-on. I don't think I've ever seen such a well-written Naruto before; he's rude, hot-headed and perfect. I love how he and Sasuke just fight and can't keep their hands off each other -- the tension is thick and I think I'll die when they get together in this fic.

    Your Sasuke is love as well. He's just as bitchy, prissy and stuck up like I expected him to be. The Itachi-Sasuke interactions were priceless, so far. I can't even begin to tell you how much your Itachi amused me.

    You also have a very nice way of writing; your style is easy and pleasant to read, but also paints a clear picture. Your writing flows too and overall, I'm just in love with how enjoyable this fic is.
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  • From ANON - lindsey on April 24, 2008
    Haha! This story is great! So many good things could happen. Can't wait for the next chapter.
    BTW, if your still in need of a BETA, I'm available. I'm a total english grammar spazz.
    masquerade1015450@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Ramen_Lover_Forever on April 22, 2008
    man naruto and sasukes parents are nice if i wou;d've gotten suspended from school for 5 days becuase of i fight i would've died......lucky people.....
    i can't wait to find out what happens to them at the library metting.....
    and what was up with sasuke waking up with mornign wood....was that a natural thing or did he have it cause of someone?
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on April 22, 2008
    How could you leave it there?!

    Please continue!
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  • From charmpit on April 22, 2008
    So...are they going to take their celebrity death match to the library this time?

    Please update.
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on April 22, 2008
    well, shit is right. lol. looking foward to your next update.
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  • From Infek on April 22, 2008
    Oh, this is going to turn out to be a very fun story!

    I'll be waiting for an update.
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  • From shadowsonata on April 21, 2008
    *Laughing hard* And this is the awesomeness of Kocoum! I absolutely love the way you end your chapters. Good work on chapter two....Now where is three! LOL. Just joking. I do look forward to reading your next update though. *Snickers* "Well, shit."
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  • From SasUke28 on April 21, 2008
    I won't mind becoming your beta! XD, email me-

    ally82894@aol.com

    -if you decide to take up the offer!
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  • From Elli on April 21, 2008
    This needs SO much more love than it's gotten.

    Seriously. The amount of side splitting one liners in the first chapter alone should have told me something. But the second one clinched it. "Maybe a good walk and some fresh air would do some good rather than sitting on my ass, watching porn, eating and destroying my godly physique." THAT! THAT RIGHT THERE. Pure genius is what I've deemed it.

    And I still can't get "he'll have your nipples for dessert" out of my mind. Nyehhehe...

    Uhm. But yeah. Other than that, I love the flow you've got going and your Naruto characterization is spot on (though I was a bit surprised to see Minato-baby was still kickin'...) and the title! The title makes me gush like a schoolgirl. Don't ask me why, I'm a bit demented like that.

    And I'd love to beta for you. I usually don't accept beta requests, but um, this time... I just want to be able to read the chapter first. (I know, sneaky, right? Prolly would've been sneakier if I hadn't told you though...) So if you're still looking, you can check out my stories to see if I'm worthy. :P My email is bleepbloopbanana at gmail.

    Much love, and looking forward to mooooaaaar!

    Ella
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  • From gaara89 on April 21, 2008
    I really am interested in where this is going. Please do update soon!
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on April 21, 2008
    This story has an adorable feeling to it. I hope that you continue this story and update soon.
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  • From ANON - ChaliceOfBlood on April 16, 2008
    CONTINUE, please. :]
    I really enjoyed the dialogue throughout your story, it pretty much flowed.
    Yaay.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2008
    PLease Update soon or on a regular basis that last line was priceless. thanks for writting this.
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