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Reviews for Unbearable

By : Aleusiu
  • From Lunar84 on April 06, 2008
    Wow! What a wonderful story so far. Everything looks really nice. Grammar and spelling are almost perfect. The only thing I would suggest is to space out your paragraphs. It can be difficult to read when it's all bunched together. I find myself losing my place every once in awhile. Other than that it looks beautiful. It's definately hard finding a well written Saku/Gaa fic.

    I'm liking where you're taking this one. Everyone seems to have perfect characterization. It seems Gaara is not an easy character to write and get right while doing it. I have seen many try and fail miserably. This story looks different though. I truly think he's acting just the way he should so far. I also enjoy the tiny quirks of humor thrown in as well. For example, when he said he ate small children and other mammals.

    I love that these two aren't thinking this is going to be some happy fairy tale, that will make all their dreams come true. For one Gaara didn't even know her name. Which as odd as it sounds, I really liked that part. It wasn't a "he's watched her from afar and secretly dreamed of her" kind of thing I see so often. I feel awful for her. She's finally gotten the man that she's wanted all of her life and now she can't have him.

    So far it's very good and I will be looking forward to more updates.
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  • From ANON - Meep on April 06, 2008
    Damnit, I actually cried! This makes me crave a sasusaku story...
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2008
    Love it! This is the kind of story I scour archives for endlessly, day after day. You make me so happy, I might just cry. :') Keep writing and posting, I'm always reading.

    ALWAYS. >.>
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