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By : Raholea
  • From Twiggies on July 29, 2008
    Heh, Naruto (Or Kyuubi) was so ''worried'' if Kimi hurt his prey.
    That's only natural though... Neji IS his meal. XDD

    Mm, a black swan. Rare. But the weakest of kind. Not pleasing Neji much? XD
    But thankfully Neji's naturally strong.

    Meh, I wonder if Neji's gonna tell about Naruto.
    It would be like betraying a friend, but on the other hand it would help Neji.
    Tricky. XD

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again.
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  • From Twiggies on July 22, 2008
    Oh yay!
    A black swan? So cool.
    Beautiful. Finally it's revealed! xD
    No wonder the Kyuubi considers Neji as his meal. xDD

    Kimi and Neji are really good fighters, and you wrote the scene well.

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    I can't wait to read more!
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  • From serenagold on July 20, 2008
    Woo hoo!! Black swan = yes!!! =^^= hehehe

    The last two chapters were pretty awesome. I loved the peak within Naruto's mindscape. The fact that the fox rejected him by openly admiting they were using each other was sort of like a slap in the face, but the practicality of it is a lot more cannon the the usual fox-treating-Naruto-like-its-actual-kit stories. Naruto needs a hug.

    Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
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  • From Twiggies on July 01, 2008
    Mm, I'm really liking this Kimi.
    Heh, some sort of shape-shifter she said? Bird and human's DNA.
    Is Neji like that too? Seems like it. But he can't really ''transform'' yet, can he? Not without passing out. xD

    And poor Naruto. Well, we all have those moments.
    At first Kyuubi and Naruto were so adorable, the blond cuddling with one of his tails...
    But then they started talking about using and tools. xDDD
    I hope everything will be alright.

    Keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From serenagold on July 01, 2008
    Ahh! I've been given props! hehehe (Review props is like, my cup of tea. Awesome!)


    Anyway, another great chapter. ^^ A somewhat depressed merged Naruto is always a welcome thing in my book. I love the fact you took the time to explore Naruto's feelings in this chapter. I think its the first time we've really gotten to see inside his head (no pun intended) in this story. I'm still interested in finding out more about Kimi and what kind of freaky bird-person-type-thing that Neji's turned into. Keep up the great work! :D
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  • From Aini on June 30, 2008
    Aw, poor Neji. Unable to control his Hyuuga smugness. XD lol Oh well. I'm sure all parties will survive the hurt and insult later. *snickers* I feel bad for Naruto though. Poor boy. He's got so much going on now. He really does need help from someone. *hugs Naruto* Anyhow, great chapter and I can't wait to read the next one. :) You've got me hooked, that's for sure. ^_^
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  • From serenagold on June 18, 2008
    I never suggest pairings, only wait for the surprise. ^^


    Very good chapter. I did not expect the bird lady, although having her be a shape shifter certainly has my thoughts towards the bird-Neji ideas from before. hehehe

    Keep up the good work. :D
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  • From serenagold on June 12, 2008
    omg... are you insinuating that this could end in a M/M/F threesome??? =O_O= Thats my favorite kind! :D


    ooo..ooo...ooo.... pick that ! pick that ! =^^= hehehehehehe
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  • From Twiggies on June 11, 2008
    Yay!
    Good chapter!
    Naruto surely has a lot of energy in him. xD

    Make it M/M all the way through!
    It would be soo hot! xD
    And Neji uke is just the best! ..isn't it? xDD Only if he is with a ONE guy though..
    But anyway, they don't need any girls.
    Sasuke and Naruto are perfect, because they have to keep an eye on each other.

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    I wanna see how that vacation of theirs is going to work out, now that they have arrived to Suna. :D
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  • From Twiggies on June 08, 2008
    I really like this story!
    And I want to know more about Neji's.. mm, situation? xD
    You know what I mean.

    Oh gosh, Naruto killed a swan?
    Poor Neji. xD
    I hope he didn't hurt his head.

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    Well, as soon as you have the time. xD
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  • From serenagold on June 08, 2008
    The chapters don't disappoint me. I always enjoy it when I can not predict what happens in a story. I like attempting to predict them (and am pretty good at it most of the time), but that doesn't mean I'm disappointed when I'm wrong. ^^


    Anyway, this was an awesome chapter! Neji's looking a little green around the edges, he turning into a black swan and Naruto's prey just hits a little too close to home? Man... swans are freaking huge sometimes! The ones in the pond by me are pretty goose-sized, but once I ran into a pack of massive ones! I was like wtf?!>!!>!>! It was crazy. O_O

    I love the idea of Naruto becoming a bird hunter. Perhaps he should just take Kyuubi's need to hunt as his own as that he can control and manage it. I dunno. Just keep writing and keep up the good work! :D
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  • From Aini on June 07, 2008
    Hahaha, poor Neji! And, of course, Naruto has no idea what it is that he's done. Poor guy. I'm sure he'll understand...eventually. *snickers* Can't wait for more. :)
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  • From valencia on June 07, 2008
    hey, just read your story, really interesting idea, I can't wait for the next chapters.
    I worked my beta charms on your story thus far, how can I get it to you?
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 12, 2008
    Very interesting story. Does Neji has some secret demon blood in him or something? Does he has black feathered wings now?
    Curious to see how well Sasuke will hold up underneath Kyuubi's playing...
    update
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  • From serenagold on April 12, 2008
    Whoa! Sasuke's in trouble!!



    Somehow I don't quite believe that Naruto negotiated those conditions with the fox. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!


    Btw.. what do you do, erase all of your story every time you have a new chapter to post and repost everything? How else can you be back to no reviews and no hits?
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