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Reviews for When music melts the heart

By : Deandraquin
  • From shadowkat83 on July 15, 2009
    so far i've read 11 chapters and they are beautiful work. i love it when an author takes the time to make a romantic story. i love a story that had a good plot with emotions between the caracters. Please let me know when you updat or post another story. my email address is babyblue_orca@hotmail.com
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  • From biboy91 on May 13, 2009
    So yeah, amazing story. I really like the interactions between Itachi, Naruto, and Hiroki. They give me the warm fuzzies ^_^
    But seriously though, great job. The only thing I'd say is to keep up the good work.
    I am a musician and this last chapter reminded me of a piece I have played. Its called "Watchman, Tell Us of the Night" by Mark Camphouse. I'd like to share it with you if you don't mind.
    http://kjos.vo.llnwd.net/o28/audio/mp3/wb156.mp3

    And here's the story behind the piece.
    A hymn for all children, Watchman, Tell Us of the Night portrays the loneliness, loss of innocence and yet enduring hope of the survivor of child abuse. The work is a musical tribute to survivors, often dreamlike in nature, as seen through the eyes of the child. With this work, Mr. Camphouse responds to the shockingly widespread national tragedy of child abuse. Victims often suffer life-long effects mentally, physically, and socially. This shameful societal illness must be faced openly, honestly, and compassionately.

    The title, taken from John Bowring's 1825 text setting of George Elvey's church hymn, "Watchman, Tell Us of the Night", is also known as the Thanksgiving hymn, "Come Ye Thankful People Come". Watchman, Tell Us of the Night was commissioned by the St. Louis Youth Wind Ensemble, Milton, Allen, Conductor and is dedicated to the composer's twin daughters, Beth and Briton.

    Again keep up the good work!
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  • From tawanawelch on April 27, 2009
    That was such a powerful chapter. It was emotion-filled and very captivating. I cried so hard toward the end that was so beautifully done with all of them together comforting one another. I really looooved how Sasuke made everyone think again what had to be done for the good of the uncle as well as Hiroki. It made such good sense and judgement for the well-being of a positive outcome. Man, u really put a lot into this story and i love it. I really believe his uncle will come back around because he was grieving too. :)

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  • From butterflies1974 on April 24, 2009
    Wow, I can't wait to see the next chapter when they meet the uncle. I am sorry to say that I would not be as forgiving. Truely this story is very good. Your writing style makes the characters come alive. Thank you for a great story.
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  • From tawanawelch on April 11, 2009
    I'm so happy u got ur muse back!!XD im so afraid of the news they'll receive. I just hope they can work it out that everyone is happy.:)
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  • From Gwyllion on April 05, 2009
    AH! An update! Thank you! I'm really curious to see what's going on. Perhaps Hiroki's dad wanted to see them? I love how supportive and caring Itachiis to Naruto. They make such an adorable couple. Keep up the great work! :D
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  • From butterflies1974 on April 04, 2009
    Really like this story and can'[t wait to find out what is going to happen. Thank you for a great and adorable read.
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  • From Gwyllion on February 09, 2009
    Yay! An update! I adore this pairing very much. Thanks so much for continuing this piece. can't wait to read more! :D
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  • From tawanawelch on February 06, 2009
    Hi! I'm so glad to see this chapter after so long.XD Everything in their lives seems to be moving along nicely. Everythings so comfortable. Will Karin be a possible love interest for Sasuke or is she already paired as I may've forgotten from earlier on. Well anyway, I can't wait to see the wedding plans and how elaborate or not that they may be. Glad to see ur back!!XDD
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  • From Leeana69 on January 19, 2009
    Psh, That's totally Itachi. :p
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  • From Auroawinter on October 14, 2008
    *sighs in contenment* I love these kinda stories.. specially with Itachi.. There are just not enough Itachi/Naru stories.. I should write one.. on second thought I have a bad habit of starting things and never finishing *mumbles about stupid muses*

    Though I would like to point out one small word correction that I notice alot of authors make.. Instead of excepted it should actually be accepted.. ie ( This quote is directly from your story)

    'Hinata had offered to make the cake, which he gladly
    excepted.'

    this should actually read

    Hinata had offered to make the cake, which he gladly
    accepted.

    I hope this helps in your writing, as I said Ive noticed quite a few stories Ive read make that same mistake and since I really never read reviews for stories Im not sure if anyone else ever points that out.

    Anyway Good luck and happy writing ^_^

    Ja ne
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  • From Gwyllion on October 13, 2008
    OH!!! HOW I LOVE THIS FIC! It's so sweet and tender and beautiful that I enjoyed every moment of it. It's so hard to find good ItaNaru fics lately, so yours was a great treat. Thanks so much for sharing. can't wait to read more. :D
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  • From tawanawelch on October 10, 2008
    WOW!!!! The party was a success and Naruto was gifted with rings in triplicate for Hiroki and his lover as well. Then Sasuke gave another surprise which was so caring and then took Hiroki into his wing for the night so Hiroki could have his own special night. Lastly, the wonderful lemon you gifted us with. Rather Naruto was gifted with.:)
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  • From tawanawelch on October 10, 2008
    Awww, it's going to be such a surprise when Naruto comes home to his birthday celebration with all his precious people. Later to have his son and boyfriend to play his favorite piece for him as well, will be the best treat of all for Naruto. I'm so excited. I can't wait for Naruto's reaction.:)
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  • From tawanawelch on October 10, 2008
    Oh I'm so glad you updated again. I thought you forgot about this. This was such a sweet chapter. Everyone's all moved in and now they can live as a family for real. Hiroki's so sweet and now he's also talking regularly to them. That's wonderful.
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