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Reviews for When music melts the heart

By : Deandraquin
  • From Shaylilin on October 08, 2008
    Itachi's so sneaky. I'm glad he's making a big fuss over Naruto's birthday.
    Hopefully Naruto appreciates it a lot.
    I thought it was cute how ready Hiroki was to do the extra practice to play for his 'momma'.
    I can't wait for more.
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  • From yeagerbomb on October 07, 2008
    okay. after reading your reply to my review, i reread my review and then the reply again. thank you for responding, it made me feel special. i understand a bit better your reasons now. i think i was a bit used to the writing styles of other, usually younger, writers, whose stories are shorterish. like, fifteen chapters and down. however, this last chapter showed me some of what i'd been curious about and i think i've realized what's going on. so thanks. as far as i can tell, and perhaps i'm misreading some signal of some sort, most of the story has been about them becoming close to each other and hiroki, the cuteset oc in naruto history, and a little bit of foreshadowing and set-up for what's to come once they're becoming a family. so. good story. i saw it on the page and went 'hey, didn't i read that?'. i thought i'd missed an update at some point, but i hadn't. which is quite the surprise, as i haven't been checking on naruto for a couple weeks now. anyway, i'll shut up now. great job and i'm looking forward to more!~
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  • From HikariAi on September 07, 2008
    Awwww, this one is sooooooo cute, it almost got me to tears at the end..... PLEASE update soon, ne....!!!! ^_^
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  • From bloodstone on September 05, 2008
    This story is fantastic! It took me two day to read but I've loved every mint of it. Please update as soon as you can. Great Work!!^__^
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  • From yeagerbomb on September 05, 2008
    glarg. this is JUST great. two a.m. and i have class at nine. and i need a shower. perfect. anyway, i was really drawn to your story (obviously, since i didn't stop until the end at two in the morning). however, as it went on, i was bothered by some flaws. usually i look over errors, such as spelling and grammar when it doesn't interfere too much, which is still the case here. my problems are a bit more detailed-oriented. such as:
    iruka thought something about itachi being the heir and 'what would naruto think?' but we never had that answered. and what happened to itachi and sasuke's family? that was mentioned as the 'family tragedy', but never addressed afterwards. and what exactly happened with that gold-digging kitsuna-bitch? and sasuke was worried about the possibility of naruto being another gold digger, however when they met he liked him immediately. i was really hoping for a bit more conflict there. i could just picture sasuke confronting naruto about his intentions, and naruto finding out how filthy rich they were that way. now i'm dying for itachi to propose to naruto.
    the lemon was good, and i do like the plotline, if only it were developed a little better. also, some more description, like the rooms and objects around them, would be very helpful. i remember one point thinking that the only thing i knew about the room in that scene was that there was a table near the door, even though naruto went through four different rooms. it's okay to have detailed description. in fact, it's better to be too detailed than not detailed enough (in my opinion, not that i'm good at it). these are just some thoughts for you to consider.
    anyway, it's mostly hiroki holding me glued to this fic because the storyline was starting to drag with the lack of adventure and drama. it's all just...perfect. maybe TOO perfect? *raised brow* somehow, i doubt that. darn. remember to keep things interesting, and a little crazy never hurt anybody. please keep writing, because you have potential and i'd like to continue to read this.
    one more thing. i definately thought it was sasuke right up until he said his own name. it was crazy. and even then i contemplated the possibility of sasuke using his brother's name, though it wasn't likely. itachi crossed my mind when it said his hair was in a ponytail, but so did neji.
    ANYWAY!!!! enough rambling! i must sleep now! goodnight, and have a pleasant evening!!!~
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2008
    OMG!! update!! I love this story soooo so so much XD I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on September 04, 2008
    I'm in love with this story. I've waiting and waiting for you to update. I'm so happy they're going to be able to have Hiroki with no problem.
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  • From CanadianGinger on August 08, 2008
    This story is amazing for so many reasons. First of all, as a violin player I love being able to identify with not only the characters but their hobbies as well. Also, you added in an original character who is VERY unique, a major plus in my opinion. Oh, and of course you have awesome fluff between Itachi and Naruto. :)

    I can't wait for your next update!
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  • From Shaylilin on August 07, 2008
    Wow. Very moving story. I cried, and why is Itachi leaving? Business or not, damn it. I know it's all for the good of the story. I had been meaning to get around to this story for a while now, but I got lucky and two of my kids are sleeping and one is sick, so they've been quiet. This is so touching. I love Itachi (even if my muse doesn't). Ah, so sweet. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm hopelessly addicted now.
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  • From HikariAi on August 07, 2008
    YAY, a new chapter... This one is very good... I hope Hiroki gets better, with his nightmares.... PLEASE update soon, ne, I NEED MORE, lol.... ^_^
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  • From nm1716 on July 30, 2008
    This story is only getting better. I still can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON!!!
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  • From HikariAi on July 29, 2008
    A very good chapter.... I feel so sorry for Hiroki, with all his nightmares... BUT its still totally awesome.... PLEASE update soon... ^_^
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  • From tawanawelch on July 20, 2008
    OMG!!!!!!!!!! That was THE most tender, sensual, graceful way EVER!!! to portray a 'first time'. Never have I read such tenderness in a fanfic. I'm in love with this story of yours and it is clearly my favorite. It reminds me of The Way Things Are fanfic my second favorite. This is very touching!!!!!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on July 20, 2008
    Well, that was alot of fun seeing both Uchiha's warm up to Hiroki and Naruto. They really do seem like a 'Happy Family'.

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  • From tawanawelch on July 19, 2008
    This story is getting sweeter and sweeter. I can't help but wonder when you were going to lower the boom on us. I really hate to think that way but what can I say?! But just because this is such a sweet story, doesn't mean it can't stay sweet. Like a Hallmark movie. I really love everyone's personality in this as well. I wish I could read more fanfics like this. Keep up the GREAT! work.
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