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Reviews for The Choices Between Friends

By : drivven
  • From ANON - crazyforkakashi on August 24, 2008
    That is so hot. Please give me more smut.
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  • From ANON - countdown on August 24, 2008
    That was highlight of my internet experience of this week. You are yaoi goddess! That was the hottest foursome I have ever read (and I read a lot) I am proud of you.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 24, 2008
    That was unbelievably hott! Greatest lemon ever!
    I love Naruto's mischievous side! "Purple!"
    Great chapter!
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  • From sweetciel on August 16, 2008
    *protects you from angry reviewers threatening death and waving pitchforks and torches* I missed you! Though i'm sure you didn't realize my absence. Delicious! Looking forward to that sexy lemon....*off in smutty daze*...
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  • From jordash00 on August 16, 2008
    It'a almost that I don't know what to say about this entire story because it is not finished. I think that I've admonished enough, and I do not feel confortable giving constructive criticisms yet even though I really don't have any for this yet.

    I will say that I am on the edge of my seat. Not for the physical aspects of their relationship but more for the emotional and how it is all going to work out. I'm a bit worried here, it's like I want a happy ending which is so much cliched, but at the same time it's hard to imagine one for these four just because of thier differences in backgrounds, upbringings, and not to mention the emotional baggage that is evident in each character. I would assume that this is going to be a longer story because there is no much that we don't know about all of the boys, especially Neji. I'm also a bit on edge because of that. These three with the exception of maybe Nara are so bent on getting Neji that they have not considered the "issues" of jumping into bed without really knowing a person. Maybe they have - you did not reveal the specifics of their conversation.

    I was hoping that Neji and Nara can talk things out more - since they seem to be the ones that "think". Also, I was surprised about Nara's character in the car. He seemed a bit nervous and out of the character that you created in him. Is this a new side? Nervous, unassured, and intimidated.

    Ok, I written enough! It's your story and as I said before, I cannot wait to see how this all pans out. I guess that's what makes this an intriguing story - making us readers want more!
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  • From ANON - CkA on August 16, 2008
    tease~! ;)
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  • From Twiggies on August 16, 2008
    Awh, the sexyness. 8D
    The sexyness you interrupted! D8
    Hehe, can't wait to read the next chappie.. -drools already-

    Really good chapter once again!
    Now we know what the three hotties want from Neji. xDD
    For now that is. :D
    We almost got to the point.. But then the chapter ended.. XDD

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    Really good chapter once again!
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  • From snnj11220 on August 16, 2008
    Lol, at Nar making hickies on Shika's ass cheeks. The thought of Naruto paying homage to Shika's ass is too funny! I know you didn't mean it that way but when I read that all I could think about was Naruto worshiping Shika's ass. LMAO that was definitely the highlight for me of this chapter.

    And nope not mad at you, I think if you are going to make it a full blown lemon between them then it might have been too long to put in this chapter, so it does make sense. See you next chapter.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 16, 2008
    Worst cliffie EVER!!! Argh...
    Quick question: I thought Naru's nickname meant angel, nor darling. Which is it?
    Great chapter. Naruto is really too cute for words XD
    update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2008
    You are an evil evil woman! How could you stop right there, you lucky I was watching the Olympics while I was read this or I'll be even more upset. I know I will enjoy the foursome coming up but I'm more looking forward to the drama that you will write. So keep up the great work and update soon.
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  • From Shaylilin on August 15, 2008
    GAH!!!!!! *deep breaths* Oh you are a tease, cutting off there. It's all right though; I've done it to people before. I'm just excited for the next part. I can wait like a good girl. It'll be like Christmas morning when you update again, because I know what kind of present I'll be getting. *impish grin*
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  • From Twiggies on August 10, 2008
    Hehee, awesome chapter! xD From the beginning to the end.
    Playing/handling balls indeed!
    Neji really is good at everything..
    Except in resisting Kiba and the others. xD
    Meh, he is a man after all.

    And Kiba just keeps on teasing Neji.
    He and Naruto are evil when bored. xD
    Heh, I really hope Kiba finally gets his piece of Neji soon. xD
    Well, actually they all have been waiting long ebough already. xDD

    Poor Neji though. His bastard of an uncle surely didn't kiss his forehead when Neji was little.

    Hehe, I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    I can only guess what kind of plans Kiba has. xD
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2008
    The plot thickens! I am sort of sure that no full blown lemon will happen next, but at least some oral all around, right? Even if a foursome does happen I'll still be happy. And I'm kind of sad that it seems like no one in Neji's family care about him, what happen to Hinata. Anyway Keep up the good work, can't wait for more drama.
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  • From snnj11220 on August 09, 2008
    Lol, Kiba seems so desperate to get some of Neji. I don't know but the idea of Kiba topping Neji is so unappealing. It seems like he tries so hard to come across as seme but instead he comes across as 'bitchy uke.' You know those ukes that swear their seme so they go around ranting about how they are not an uke to everyone. Shikamaru on the other hand says he switches but he comes across as seme. I could see Shika bottoming to Kiba just to appeal to Kiba's need to be seme but I can't see Neji doing it.

    On another note I like the contrast with moms, with Kiba's personality you would think he would have the crazy mom, instead he has the yaoi fangirl-ish mom, lol! Naruto seems so shy and such a pushover, when Kiba was yelling at him to come play, (even though he wasn't trying to be mean) I wanted to tell Nar to yell at him to fuck off. I think one of my highlights in this story will be the day he grows into his own skin. And Neji seems so desperate to be with them that its like he'll go along with whatever. But everything is give and take, he should start taking more instead of just giving. Yeah things are new, but Shika and Kiba have no problem with telling Neji what they want and its like you find yourself thinking besides being in the relationship with them, what does Neji want?

    Anyway I have been pretty backed up on the chapters and just read the last 3 today so I am trying to condense my thoughts into this one review but I am forgetting somethings, oh well see you next chapter.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 09, 2008
    Ch. 18: Haha! That was so funny. Loved it! Especially Kiba's mom; she's great.
    I had a little tear over Neji when he thought that he had no one that was protective towards him. *sniff*
    Great chapter!
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