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Reviews for The Choices Between Friends

By : drivven
  • From Shaylilin on September 07, 2008
    aww, so sweet. I wouldn't mind waking up in that sandwich.
    *pushes dirty thoughts back down*
    I wonder what Shikamaru and Neji are going to do with Kiba and Naruto at work...

    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Prism0467 on September 07, 2008
    OMFG if only.
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  • From sweetciel on September 02, 2008
    That had to be the sexiest two parted lemon Ever!!! *blood from nose spurts all over the place* I love you!!! Please marry me
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  • From LIGHTNINGNARUTO on August 31, 2008
    LOVE
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 30, 2008
    Hott smex and then the lovely fluffy ending... loved it!
    Best line: "...there was no doubt in Neji's mind that this was definitely the best way he'd ever seen to put on a condom."
    Great chapter!
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  • From snnj11220 on August 30, 2008
    Ok no funny acrobatics, this one! I thought the lemon was really great here and I loved the emotional play going on during it. So yeah I give it three thumbs up, lol!

    And oh no you have misunderstood. I never said anything with Nar and Kiba together, you had made it abundantly clear throughout that they don't see each other that way, and its not happening. I had said that Nar and Nara could be doing something while Kiba screws Neji, but its okay even though you misunderstood, ironically enough you managed to get the gist of what I was saying this chapter, as implied by the positions.

    As far as the other thing I must have explained it wrong, sorry here's clarification. To 'top from the bottom' has nothing to do with who's penetrating who, who's uke or who's seme, its not something you take literally, its more of a saying. You would probably hear it used a lot in yaoi fanfiction and/or in the gay community. It means what you implied last chapter in regards to Naruto, and what you shown this chapter. You see how Naruto was pretty agressive when riding Nara or being screwed by Neji, to 'top from the bottom' refers to an uke (bottom) who doesn't really play the role of a typical 'uke' in bed, they are aggressive, they give as much as or more than they take, etc. Bottom and top are just positions in reference to gay sex, just because someone is the uke doesn't mean they can't be the one in control and essentially that's where the phrase comes from. I am not sure if I explained it good enough but I hope that clarified some things. But on another note, looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From KatrinaCarter on August 30, 2008
    WAII!!!!!

    Now that was hot!!! *eyes gleam* I wonder what will happen when Neji learns that Kiba can't fuck Nar...... *cackles softly*

    Great job hon! *dances* that was like one of the hottest things ever!!!! *waits for more*
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  • From Prism0467 on August 30, 2008
    You should at least offer us cigarettes before you spring a chapter like that one on us! OMG I thought I was going to have a heart attack!

    Fuck that was hot.
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  • From ANON - countdown on August 30, 2008
    OMG! Do you have degree in writing high class porn? That was so hot that I wish I was a gay man! You are now forever known as Yaoi Goddess to me.
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  • From jordash00 on August 30, 2008
    Oh! It was definetly a compliment. As is for this chapter. I think that now that the boys have gotten to know one another, I hope that they slow it down a bit. I know that all four were anxious to explore, but I think that it is time that the boys talked a bit (this time with Neji) and got some one on one time with Neji as well.

    I also can't wait to see when they meet the "college" boys. I hope Sasuke has a coronary.

    I have more to say. But I will save it for after the next chapter. Until then...
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  • From Twiggies on August 30, 2008
    Ohhh, and the hot foursome continues!
    Super hot. 8D
    Heh, finallt they all got their release. And a good nights sleep, I bet.

    I just love their positions. xDD
    I know they propably switch places and stuff, but I can't help but to love uke Neji. xD
    And Naruto was so hot too! All of them were!
    Shika and Neji were hotly seme and uke at the same time. 8DD -drools-
    I love 'em all!
    You write them so well!
    And you really managed to write that hot foursome again. xD

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    But.. I'm still wondering where Neji has gotten that scar that was mentioned in one of the previous chapter..
    Actually, in a chapter named ''Scars''. xD
    I think I have a small guess, but you can never be sure, right? xD

    I hope you update soon again!
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  • From Twiggies on August 25, 2008
    Hott!
    It was definitel great!

    Heh, Kiba finally got Neji and Naruto got to be Neji's uke. xD
    And Shika got his treatment as well. :D
    It really must've been hard to write foursome, at least I think it would be.
    But you did it really great!
    Lovint it! And it continues in the next chapter? Shika's will get his release. xD

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    Awesome chapter and awesome story!
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  • From snnj11220 on August 25, 2008
    Ok so here's the real deal! It wasn't that it was bad per say... I think the problem that I had with it was it was too unrealistic. I mean in the beginning of the lemon Neji somehow managed to suck Nara off and then finger both Nar and Kiba simultaneously without breaking speed. And then when they were getting into the act Naruto somehow managed to thrust back against Neji, while thrusting his cock into Nara's mouth while fingering Nara. Not that its impossible its just that you know when people are in the moment and its really good concentration is lacking.

    I think what happened is that obviously this is a foursome and you didn't want to leave anyone out, but it would have come out better if say instead of the beginning part where Neji is performing 'acrobatics,' while he was sucking Nara off Kiba prepared Nar. Or like when they got into the act Kiba screwed Neji and while that was going on Nar and Nara are doing their thing together and you alternate povs's between the two couples. Or you could have kept it how you had it before but while Neji screws Nar and Kiba screws Neji, Nara screws himself with the vibrator while watching them. Anyway these are just some examples, really though they are going to be with Neji forever???, there is no rule that says he has to get his 'licks' off of them all at the same time or something like that. What I did like about this chapter (which is despite the fact that out of the three of them he gets way too much of Neji's attention already)is how Neji 'worshipped' Nara in the shower . I think it would have been better if Neji paid each of them that same worship. So yeah there you have it, and hopefully in the next one there will be no more 'acrobatics,' unless its something like Nar being really flexible or something like that, which I can totally picture.

    p.s. just a little correction, at one point you say Naruto bottoms from the top, it should be switched around to tops from the bottom.
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  • From jordash00 on August 24, 2008
    HOLY HANNAH!

    Sensory Overload! I can't even say anything else!
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  • From Shaylilin on August 24, 2008
    Oh it's getting good! I can't wait for the next one.
    I promise no killing though.
    Neji really likes all three of them, doesn't he?
    It's such a strange situation that works so well.

    *waiting as patiently as possible*
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