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Reviews for The Choices Between Friends

By : drivven

From ANON - Yuki on July 05, 2010
Thank you!!! I was so happy to see that you updated. I was actually reading through this fic yesterday when i realized that it hadn't been updated recently and was a little sad. Anyway, i'm happy now! Looking forward to the next update!
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From FairyNiamh on July 04, 2010
Love the update... though I can hardly wait for more lemony goodness from you. *hugs* Keep up the good work sis!
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From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2010
ITs a good sorry my only problem is with the nar nara thing with the names as shikamaru seems to be the only one with a last name usage and shortening narutos name to nar makes me think nara and i think you also confused it a few times in using it most people would just call naruto naru makes a little more sence and shika for shikamaru. i think its really unfair to shikamaru to have him called by his last name. other then that i like the story alot and can wait for more. The above is just a suggestion :)
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From YamiCarol on January 17, 2010
Howdy! I'm kinda new here, and I have to say, I'm loving your fic so far! I'd love it even more if it were just NejiShika, but since I'm a sucker for moresomes, it pretty much nulls it out xP Just something I need to point out; in Chapter 18 and Chapter 21 you added a confusing 'a' to Nar, at some point; don't remember where, but you'll find it once you read them through.

Anyways, nice job to you and your beta's for this fic. It's a shame that you haven't continued in so long. Is there any possibility of it ever continuing? If so, please let me know, I'd love to read more of this.
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From NarutoVixin on October 23, 2009
now That is how you write a 4some and i will be waiting and holding my breath for the next chapter im just sorry it took me this long to read this tale now to move on to others
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From jordash00 on July 21, 2009
So, I really hate bothering writers about updates, but with such an amazing fic as this, you can't help but to expect avid fans! Anyway, I hope that all is well and I just wanted to let you know that I still go back and read this fic!
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From DejanaTalis on February 25, 2009
I apologize for the spammy review, but I haven't been able to find another way to get a message to you. This story, "The Choices Between Friends," has been nominated and seconded in the Works in Progress category of the 2008 .moon UFO Awards. Congratulations!

The UFO (Universal Fanfic Open) Awards are aimed at recognizing quality fanfiction across all the various fandoms on the internet. As a WIP nominee, your story is eligible to earn Honorable Mention recognition as one of the best fanfics currently being written. Once you complete your story, it will be eligible to be nominated again to compete for best story of its fandom! You do not have to be a member of .moon to participate, but you do need to give permission for your story to be included in the awards. Please send a message or email ASAP to let me know you would like to accept your nomination. You can find contact information and a link to the UFO Awards website in my profile. I look forward to hearing from you!
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From jordash00 on January 05, 2009
Just a loyal fan dropping a note. I regularly check to see if you have updated this fic. I have already said how much I love this fic. I don't want to be a bother b/c I know how "real" life can get. But..............

I anxiously await an update.

Again, I hope all is well!
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From Telpei on October 05, 2008
I've been waiting for a long time for this story to be updated!! *pouts* Where's the next chapter???

I'm in love with this story! It's definitely one of my favourites. NaruShikaNejiKiba (not necessarily in that order) is SOOO smexy! Thank you for writing this story! I'm in love with you for writing this story!! lol. *glompage* Your characterizations are fabulous, and the way you're developing their relationship is fabulous, and, well, the whole thing just rocks! It's like nothing I've ever read before! Very original. And I love it!! (have I mentioned that I love it? lol). Neji is so sexy! Ah, I love him. ^_^ (apparently I'm full of love today lol).

Please update soon!!! I check this story every day for updates. I can't wait to read the next chapter, so keep them coming!!! *begs shamelessly*
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From jordash00 on September 29, 2008
I've become an addict when it comes to this fic. I check the updates everyday! I hope that all is well!
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From jordash00 on September 08, 2008
Yea so, most of the time I have to read a chapter more than once before I review; this really goes for any story I read. I need time to digest and think about what I want to say. So in the last review I said that I had more to add later....

From the beginning of this story I was drawn in by the depiction of the characters. Each one is three dimensional and not flat which many authors seem to have problems with. It honestly wasn't the anticipation of the sex between the characters for me, it was more of the verbal, mental, and emotional interactions/struggles between these characters that has kept me reading. With that being said, and I don't know if I'm saying this correctly, but now that they have moved past that hurdle of sex, I find myself wanting more of that which first drew me in. Yes, the scenes were hot, but after I went back to read them and especially after the last chapter, I definetly prefer the other interactions.

I feel that this story is what it is because of how you have drawn these characters. As readers, we are truly able to "feel" what these boys are going through even without the sex. As a reader, I was more perplexed by the tension rather than the actions themselves. I hope you know what I mean here. I guess it's the same in a true relationship where its exciting because of the tension and the "what ifs" or "what happens next?" of sex. Then, after it happens, you can either be disappointed, eager for more, content, fulfilled, or just left with the feeling of "what's next?" I guess I fall into the category of small disappointment and "what's next?".

By all means, I am not disappointed with the story itself. I really don't know what it is though.

I know that I am not the only reader putting this much thought into this story. Wich is a compliment to you. A well written story keeps the readers thinking afterall!

I anxiously await the next chapter!

Oh, about this chapter - yea - a scene between the two geniuses! Oh and I can't wait for the next chapter with Nar - afterall, he was the one who wanted Neji in the first place!
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From ANON - qwerty on September 08, 2008
Loved it!
I'm glad we're slowly learning more about Neji's past and how he got that scar.
Lovely chapter!
update!
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From ANON - countdown on September 08, 2008
That was so informative and sweet. I like a good calming chapter after a hot intense one. You are da bomb diggity!
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From ANON - Tyra on September 08, 2008
Awh. Sweet chapter! :D
Poor guys, they are a little sore now, eh? xD Except for Kiba though.
Heh, the snuggling at the end was so cute. xD
And breakfast in bed? Ah, must be nice. Naruto really likes to coddle his boys, hmm? ;D

Meh, now I really want to know about that scar and more about Neji. xD More about all of them!
Well, I'm not so sure about my scar theary anymore. At first I thought that Hiashi must have done something, but then again, I don't think he dislikes Neji that much? Neji sure as hell would hate Hiashi. xD (more than now?)
What I think now is that Neji got that scar when he was young, in an car accident. xD Or in other accident. OR in an accident, that wasn't really an accident.. Now I'm really just wildly guessing nonsense. xDD
Oh and, then his mother died in that accident too. I have no idea actually, that is just my guess. xDD

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Awesome chapter once again!
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From ANON - hollowed_self on September 08, 2008
Awww. I'm feeling a little Nar withdrawal. (Btw why Nar? I've been waiting for someone to say 'Ruto for a while now...:P but nvm) Maybe it's just me...but Naruto, I think anyways, seems be getting a little 2D recently. I don't think you've yet to develop Ruto-chan (Hey! I'm trying to make it work! even if it's just meh T_T ) into his own character sans the protectiveness and cover of Shikamaru and Kiba. I don't think you've accidentally looked over that fact and maybe it's intentional? You're a good author so maybe you've got some dastardly awesome plan in the future (and you're awful for making us rabid readers wait! T_T jk jk) and is just waiting for the right time to pounce it on us?

But we'll be waiting...patiently...(meaning our pitchforks are at the ready)...for your next update...muah-hahax10

Anywhoose thanx for the update!!
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