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Reviews for Sweet Sacrifice

By : NovaDiscord
  • From TrinityFromtheEraofBlood on January 09, 2010
    i really like the plot the ideas the details the love the hate wow its like a soap opera i love it thank you for posting so much but it has been years and i highly doubt you will post if i could i would bump your ratings up but the thousands... so its no so suspicious lol really great story later!!
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  • From CelestiCat on November 22, 2008
    Arashi's mate is Naruto's father, isn't it! Then you should bring him back from the dead!
    *needs this*
    ~CelestiCat
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  • From ANON - ellen hunter on April 11, 2008
    In the Naruto anime, Kakashi didn't seem to know who Naruto was when the team was first put together. It was only later that he acknowledged Naruto as his sensei's son. Like you, I initially wondered why he didn't know. Then I read Kakashi's back story in the manga. He would have been 12 years old when his mentor was killed. What 12 year old kid, after seeing his father suicide, his best friend killed and his mentor die is going to wonder what happened to his mentor's pregnant girlfriend?
    Hmm, so in your universe Obito lost an eye, but he did not die. Cool. Can I vote for Obito kidnapping Kakashi, frightning the man, then revealing his true name and intentions?
    I found this story late in the day, and now it's even later. I need to get to sleep so I can go to work.

    Good job on these characters. and good night.
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  • From filiasan on April 10, 2008
    I've read all your fanfictions, and now I'm sad. There isn't enough Gaara/Naruto in the world, to keep me satisfied. *goes to search for more*
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  • From OrochiGreel on April 03, 2008
    My God! I just had a shocking revelation: I believe that Minato is Arashi's mate. And I have a really bad feeling about Orochimaru, that has something to do with both Naruto and the villages. Plus, Arashi is in my option, right about both Sasuke and Sakura being the worst kind of whores, 'cause lets face it Sakura follows Sasuke around like a sick puppy and look at the outfit Sasuke wares in Shippûden.

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2008
    This should really have alot more reviews. I think it's a very interesting story and i can tell you put alot of time and thought into writing it. I like the close bond that Arashi has with Naruto,Gaara,Kankuro and Temari. It's a shame that Sasuke and Sakura have to be such asses in this story.
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  • From nm1716 on March 28, 2008
    I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From serenagold on March 28, 2008
    Its definately an interesting premise you have for this story... although if I may critique it, I would have to say the story has two main flaws: 1) the characters are kinda way too powerful. There was really no need to give Naruto every power and every skill under the sun. It hasn't really harmed the story in anyway, but generally speaking, its not really the best choice in character changes and takes away from your ability to develop the character. 2) You are too wordy. You give away too much information. Telling the reader what will happen down the line and over explaining everything takes away from the story and removes the reader from world they are reading. I often found my times losing focus and slightly bored at times while reading it.. which shouldn't be the case since your premise is an interesting one.


    Keep up the good work. I did not intend this review as a flaming or discouraging one; I hope you continue with this story and see it through to the end. Good luck!
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  • From ANON - kanaro on March 28, 2008
    Excellent story so far, I love Gaara/Naruto! I can't wait to see Sasuke's and Sakura's reactions to Naruto. Please update soon!
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  • From Raholea on March 27, 2008
    wow....
    this is the first time i read this story, and initially was kinda put off by the fact a lot of little details seemed changed but then i realized that yes, there really was a reason and it does make sense.
    i do like the appearance of several of the jinchurikis ( i know i prolly spelled that wrong) and that you were willing to play with them more than most stories i've read. normally writers only focus on naruto and gaara, but i like the fact you kinda have a broad glance into their world and the little details here and there into each character. i also love the way you put everyone back in their place. too good!

    would love to read more. :D
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  • From mrk33 on March 27, 2008
    I love the story. It is refreshing to read each character in a different light.
    I am looking forward to the next installment.:)
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  • From despairs on March 27, 2008
    Wow this story has alot of action and smexy lovin. I'm so hooked on it already. There are very few Gaara/Naruto stories that capture my attention like this one has. I'm usually a diehard SasuNaru/NaruSasu fan but i do like to read a really good GaaNaru sometimes (or even a NaruGaa, doesn't matter to me) I LOVE how strong and smart you made Naruto. And i really like all of the pairings you created such as ItachiPein and ZazubaHaku (i adore Haku!) One of my favorite characters in your story is Arashi (Karai) He is very interesting..i'm kind of worried about him though, he didn't seem well in chapter 6. I hope hes okay and eventually finds his mate. I'm really anxious to read more of this..please continue to work your magic :D
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  • From ANON - animelover on March 26, 2008
    question ... when you get this fic published, can you let me know so i can buy a copy? OMG!!!!! this was soooo perfect. thank you thank you thank you! one of the ultimate gaanaru stories of the century. sorry, didn't mean to gush .. yeah, i did. it was really wordy, but not overly so. the descriptions were very well done, and the part where arashi is giving sasusaku a verbal beating. YES!!!!!

    absolutely awesome .. can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve for this!
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