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Reviews for Children of Snakes and Foxes

By : DFoarile
  • From benrevell on July 07, 2011
    this is a really great story

    hope u update it soon
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  • From benrevell on June 13, 2011
    wow this is really great hope u update soon

    cart wait to c what happens and I hope the fight agains the sound village and there other enermys are good
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  • From squall5421 on November 19, 2009
    great stroy hopeful it will get finsh soon
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  • From nocontact on May 24, 2009
    Not to down on it or anything, I do like the story, (maybe if you would expand the sex scene's a little more, maybe add in something other then just plain old sex, it'd be a little better... Just saying), but you use Seductive, sly and loving tone, waaaaaaaaaaay too much. Seriously, just go through one chapter and look for those words, they pop up everywhere. Go to thesaurus.com or something.

    ..::(-)::..
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  • From Esotericstyle on June 20, 2008
    I, personally, do not understand how this story is in any way popular. This has to be among the least well-written stories in this section of the website, and yes, I realize that there is a LOT of shit on here. The flow, storyline, and inaccuracies are simply appalling. Not to mention the spelling. If not for the abundant use of lines and phrases taken from the English dub, I would be convinced that you had never spoken the English language before. I will grant that this is an AU, but honestly, I don't remember any universe of Naruto referring to "Chidori" as "Chordi," or "Pakkun" as "Puken." Anyone that considers themselves a fan of this show should be offended at the way it is handled in this story. You should be ashamed of yourself. I strongly recommend that you learn how to write before continuing this travesty.
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  • From Shadowfox32459 on June 17, 2008
    i have no life you need to back off and or shut the fuck up, I don't know if this is this persons first story but it's good. I agree that the sex scenes need to be worked on a little bit, but all and all this story is solid And for some one who hasn't even posted a story and has only been on the site a short time it's not your place to flame people like that grow up.

    And now to the author, your story is very good and has a good plot of to which I fully enjoy. As to the prementioned sex scene I have seen the improvement in your other story and I say good for you. An example I like and that I may add in my own story is where Hinata, who is shy by nature takes control in the bedroom and is more dominate in their lovemaking (And I'm not talking about BDS&M whips, chains and leather" like tying or Handcuffing Naruto to the bed with a blindfold and grinding him like a fresh cup of coffee. I know my girlfriend likes to do that. Have each girl have their own fetish or kink. Have one of the girls get pregnant and have Naruto screw her like that some women get more pleasure when their love fuck them when their knocked up.

    All in all these stories are get and need ed to be finished.
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  • From Chronostorm on June 08, 2008
    Well i certainly think this is interesting and fairly good all things considered which says something you have a decent plot that doesn't defer away from the lemons and can manage a Harem with out making it look really pathetic well anyways i am all for FemHaku but also could you include Shion from the Shippuuden movie and what will you do about the whole Uchiha thing that happened in the recent Manga chaps.
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  • From nm1716 on May 28, 2008
    It has been a while, PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From garsdal on May 22, 2008
    really good fic, when is the next chapter comming out?
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  • From nm1716 on April 17, 2008
    Still waiting. PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on April 14, 2008
    Great story can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Shadowfox32459 on April 14, 2008
    Update soon please
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  • From nm1716 on April 07, 2008
    I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.
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  • From darthme1011 on April 06, 2008
    the new about haku makes me happy and great chapter. A great Storyline with good smut in it are becoming harder to find
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  • From DragonMan220 on April 06, 2008
    Needs more spice. I like all the girls, but just plain sex gets a little booring. Throw in some lesbian lemons, some role-play, or some other sex practices to spice it up.
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