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Reviews for In the Mountains

By : Ljiljana
  • From TrinityFromtheEraofBlood on December 05, 2009
    i love the plot and can't wait to read the rest!!!
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  • From Paradox13 on August 21, 2009
    No other author makes Naruto/Sasuke this interesting. Wonderful story.
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  • From sweetangel23 on April 12, 2009
    i know that its been a while since you wrote this story...ive just reread it and i started to think...i think that you should rewrite this story except write it from sasukes side..u know? i read the story and i kept thinkin i wonder what sasukes thinkin bout...so..its just a suggestion..but it would be cool..this story was awesome..and one of my favs...think about it?
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  • From sonotgoingthere on November 20, 2008
    I resisted reading this story when I read the summary. Something about the summary made me not want to read it. Then I started reading Life Before, Life After - I enjoyed each update that much I went to your author's page to see what other stories you'd written, and finally gave this one a chance.

    I'm glad I did. You built the tension beautifully, and I really like how you laid out the plot and character development. I'm just sorry I didn't read it sooner.
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  • From ANON - Shingo the Pest on August 19, 2008
    Watching Naruto and Sakura filled my heart, and broke it too.
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  • From ChibiJubjub on August 14, 2008
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! its finnished? SOBS!
    it so good, i just read it all as i found it a few whours ago. it was so compelling and so many twists and turns.
    I LOVED Chapter 4 with haku i wish he was in it more, i love au stories where haku is alive and buds with naru,
    please if the bunnie strikes you write a one shot smexy piece or add it to this as we havent got our dr sasuke in the white coat and naru turning to mush, i'm such a pervert :D lol but i think it would be fun.
    thank you for the wonderfl stroy,
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  • From ANON - dolphina23 on August 11, 2008
    Oh, that ending was just right! I'm still kind of sad about it because the whole story was so good and I did want to hear more about Naruto's past that you wrote earlier in the story, but it was good, very good. As I mentioned earlier, if you want help editing, I'm all in. Hope to see more stories from you!
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  • From Airen on August 11, 2008
    Your English is quite good considering it's your second language. I did, however, notice spelling and grammatical errors, so you might want to track those down and correct them before you post the final version on fanfiction.net. Also, like Kimra said in an earlier review, you're missing some small words in some places -- "the" and "on", for example. Those are the only corrections I can think of that would improve this fic. :D Everything else is quite good. You drew me in and hooked me right away!

    I enjoyed this story a lot -- plot-wise, it was really well done. I loved the pairing (I don't understand why NaruSasu is so rare), loved the characterization, loved the description and setting. Very good work! I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.
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  • From ANON - dolphina23 on August 04, 2008
    You know how I feel about this story. I can't believe you're ending it after only one more chapter! I was hoping Naruto, at least, would have some semblance of a happy ending. Sasuke, too, for all he seems like an ass didn't desevr all that! I can't wait to read the last of it!
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  • From ANON - Leponier on August 04, 2008
    Oh, it was really unexpected! Why did she do it I wonder? What for? Silly girl...


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  • From tovah on August 04, 2008
    I started reading this awesome story yesterday, I a glad you added a new chapter. I really like this story and I can't wait to see how it ends.
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  • From Kimra on August 04, 2008
    Nothing bugging me. I'm enjoying this story immensely. Can't wait to read the rest! :D
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  • From Kimra on August 02, 2008
    Awesome story. You said somewhere English wasn't your first language. But aside from a few missing words here and there (i.e. the, on, and) this story is brilliant. No scratch that it's brilliant anyway, but the only thing that indicates that English isn't your first language are those few missing words... and even they can be set aside as typos.

    Anyway. The story - I love it. I hope things work out well for everyone (except neji). Cheers! Kimra
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  • From ANON - Nami on July 29, 2008
    *inner Sakura victory pose of 'He** yeah!'*

    I have no objection what-so-ever to seme/uke choices. To me it fits. So when Sasuke was lying there doing Nothing At All beyond getting it up the arse and eyeball sexing, I laughed and said 'that's very Sasuke'. I do so love a sneering bottom (who unconsciously does nice things) and a laughing seme (who is sometimes a bit of an uncertain moron, but still cute and loud and honest).

    And I do very much love your story. I love it to BITS. And Hinata, you awesome girl(though I'm worried now about the phone thing e_e)! *hugs her* And Neji, you uptight b-tard! *hugs him* And everyone in general! *hugs them all* ...and I kind of want to see more Chouji and all the other kids. You made him so cute.

    Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From tawanawelch on July 26, 2008
    This is such a funny story! I love how we can hear every little thing Naruto is thinking. You've really got an awesome sense of humor and I love the plot twist. Who'd have ever thought Neji was like that and Sakura and everyone else got Sasuke's story WRONG!!! Oh well. Sorry I haven't been Reviewing but I've been transferring your story to read on my computer having to share my daughter's computer which has internet access, mine doesn't.
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