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Reviews for In the Mountains

By : Ljiljana
  • From ANON - Nanin on July 08, 2008
    I love your type of writing.
    Makes me want to read more.
    But the cliffhanger at the end made me want to cry, because I wanted to see how it ended ;_;
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on July 08, 2008
    hahahahaha i loved when naruto told sas he would be uncomfortable in the kitchen lol sasu baby didnt like that! naruto knows just how to push his buttons and in the end it got him what he wanted! Bed time! whoo!
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  • From charmpit on July 07, 2008
    Aw, damn! I need a visual!

    Quick, someone draw fanart of a shirtless Naruto standing at the foot of Sasuke's bed facing Sasuke with a come-hither expression on that beautiful face! OMFG that scene rocks!
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  • From roro237 on July 07, 2008
    Did you hear the moaning from my house went I got to the end:) It was getting so good and B A M! cliffy:( I was thinking Sasuke had pictures of Naruto in his room he didn't want him to see or he didn't want Naruto to know he doesn't sleep with his wife huh?? But it was a cliffy and a damm good one too:) Can't wait to see what you have in store next time ^_^
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  • From lexjamandme on July 07, 2008
    Best chapter ever... Can't wait for more. And to end it there... cruel and unusual, I tell you.
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  • From Management on June 28, 2008
    Good chapter. Gaara is smart enough. And poor Naruto and Sasuke. Mostly poor Naruto. He is definitely going to have a heart attack one day.
    Sad thing Sasuke is the only doctor in... the mountains.
    Well, can't wait for the next chapter. You left us expecting some... Interesting happenings...
    Well, update soon!!!
    XD LANE
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on June 27, 2008
    oh yea!! the cat's away, let the mice play! looking forward to that :D

    on a different note, i felt bad for gaara.. i know it had to happen for the sake of the sasunaru buutt :( he's been really cool and it sucked to 'hear' him realise he was only wasting his time *hugs gaara*
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  • From lexjamandme on June 27, 2008
    Excellent update. I loved Naruto's thoughts while he was trying to get out of breakfast. So funny.
    And damn, everytime you get Naruto and Sasuke is a room alone I swear, I stopped breathing. Its a good thing you had Sasuke tell Naruto to breathe because I was like... 'huh, that's a good idea!'
    Until the next.
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  • From Management on June 21, 2008
    Wow. Naruto is a little sun... Well, that was slightly unexpected. About the girls I meaN
    And that line about wearing orange was hilarious!!!
    Great job. And for not putting another chapter up for a long time, that's just mean.
    Poor poor Suke. And Naruto. Will he be able to resist?
    Suspense suspense suspense. Is the circus 'date' for soon? It sounds like it's going to be awquard as hell.
    And poor Naruto, everyone wants him, but apparently, the only people he can stand touching his is Sakura, Ino, Iruka and Suke-chan.
    Well, please update earlier than you said you would. It would be... Nice.
    XD LANE
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  • From ANON - Lepon on June 19, 2008
    Wow, it was so emotionally true! *_*
    And I can't wait to see how Naruto will act in the morning after these words ^_^
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  • From charmpit on June 18, 2008
    Aaah...

    Naruto the sun god, a man for whom hearts are beating wildly all around him, a man who could have anyone he wanted, was so affected by a moment he shared with Sasuke that he uttered these words in reaction:

    “Worth the firing.” I whispered, not daring to open my eyes, afraid I could lose those memories forever if I do. “Worth repeating. Over and over again.”

    Isn't Sasuke the luckiest bastard schmuck on cloud nine?

    Too bad Sasuke is married, and unavailable...

    I'm on the edge of my seat now, waiting for the next interlude to happen between them.

    “Sakura,” I said, desperate for her to take me seriously, to offer some help. “I’m almost glad Neji will fire me, I don’t think I can stay away from him.”

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  • From fujinakaheero on June 18, 2008
    hello!
    I just finished your latest chapter and now I am reviewing.
    I am a new reader to this story, but I must say I really like the plot so far.
    I think this story is progressing quite well, so I am just here to say keep up the wonderful work.
    Perhaps could be beta'd a bit more though, other then that I have no other complaints.
    I hope to see another chapter posted some time in the next few days though, cause I can see this story being on my top 3 best stories to read.
    So, again until your next chapter,
    ja ne!
    fujinakaheero
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  • From lexjamandme on June 18, 2008
    That was the best chapter ever... poor clueless Sasuke.
    Itachi was brilliant, taking bastard to a whole different level.
    Sadly, it all seems so hopeless,huh? Like no one will ever really be happy. Sniffs.
    I really hope that's not true.
    Until the next...
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  • From ANON - IvvyMoon on June 18, 2008
    Oh, I loved this chapter! I love that Naruto is wanted by people and that he's completely oblivious to it. Can we have some serious competition for his heart? More Gaara, more Gaara! I'm a huge NaruSasu fan, but Sasuke's married, and I really don't want Naruto to become a home-wrecker. It's one thing if Sasuke decides on his own to get out of the marriage, but he shouldn't do it for Naruto. After all, does that mean that if someone else came along, he would leave Naruto, too? And I loved the "bathroom looks like a gazebo" line. Throw in some ItaNaru, too, lol.
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  • From ItaNarulover on June 18, 2008
    Oh, thank you!!! I love you!! You just made my day. This chapter was amazing, I really loved Itachi in this fic...he's so evilly funny ;P
    Yay, the ItaNaru-craving in me has been sated! Thank you for listening to me! XD I'm not sad, I'm so happy!! =)
    I have to say it again but this fic is so awesome, I want more!!! I feel so sorry for Naruto because he for one thing always screw things up, and that he can't really be with Sasuke, since he's married. Awww...but hopefully everything will end well.
    Keep up with the good work, and I'll be there reading and reviewing it.
    Take care. Hugs
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