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Reviews for In the Mountains

By : Ljiljana
  • From ANON - Skogstroll on July 25, 2008
    Yay for Naruto seminess!

    There is waaay too little of that
    and way too much Sasuke-seme smex
    ._.
    which I really dont understand cause Sasuke doesnt feel like the guy who would do ANYTHING productive at all in a relationship - start it, take it to the next level, be the initiative guy and actually control it at all
    :d
    really, its not his style
    so seeing him being the seme disturbs me a lot v.v

    hurray for non seme Sasukes! Besides, its in his name too! :D SasUke :d As if that wasnt obvious enough!
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  • From ANON - Heather on July 24, 2008
    I LOVE this story. I'm not sure if i will be able to catch the next chapters but i will do my best. Keep writing it, you keep the characters in their respective character quite well and you have creative ideas. Great work, keep it up! =D
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  • From Aikotina on July 24, 2008
    mah! i don't know what's wrong with people! sasUKE is amazing! naruto rulz as seme! I love your story! OMG! is something going to happen to Hinata?! NOO! she's so sweet!! Neji is an asshole! please update as soon as you can!
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on July 24, 2008

    I completely COMPLETELY agree with your choice of seme/uke. NaruSasu for life!

    Plus, I can't say the story wasn't leading up to that. Naruto, in whatever sexual situation he was in with Sasuke, was always taking the lead. Anyways, definitely a dramatic and hott chapter. The sex scene was done perfectly. I like that there were arguments and fights in the chapter, it kept the characters in character and made Sasuke and Naruto's realationship more believable.

    I positively love your writing style. All the descriptions are so vivid. The story is original and refreshing. Please please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Keitorin on July 21, 2008
    I'm going to copy+paste from my rec site because I'm lazy like that XD;;

    I think I clicked the link on a whim, not paying much attention to the implied pairing because the summary looked kind of interesting. I do like SasuNaru, but I don't read much fic for it anymore, if any. I spent hours reading most of this, went to bed, got up and finished the rest. I couldn't have put it down if I tried, and the only reason I did once was because I was falling asleep at my keyboard in the wee hours of the morning. And by wee hours, I mean 6 A.M. This fic is one of those phenomenons were it seems absolutely in character and with perfect characterization, but when you think about the situation outside of the fic, you get confused that this fic is not the canon. Even when I thought Sakura and Ino should have been more worried after the accident in the first chapter, it was impossible to let it jar me. I love Sasuke's characterization. I love pretty much everyone's, actually, but his is well done for someone with his personality. I love Naruto and Sasuke's past history, and how Sasuke reacted to Naruto when he woke up. I fell hard for this story and didn't climb out of the hole until I realized I needed sleep, or soon I wouldn't even be able to comprehend the words I was reading. If my enthusiasm doesn't rouse you into trying it out, then I can only feel sorry for the person missing out on it.
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  • From crazychemgeek on July 18, 2008
    Neji is indeed a big poopyhead bastard. And now that he's been a jerk and gone Naruto & Sasuke can sex it up?!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on July 18, 2008
    grrrrr u know i had one thought at the end of the last chapter: 'nooo!! you bitch!' lol i'm sorry for calling u the b word dwl but seriously, naruto drops to his knees to work for his dinner and u end it there?! eeeeeeevil!
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  • From dolphina23 on July 18, 2008
    So, I'm hooked on this story and have been from the beginning, especially since you keep me coming back to check it because of the awful cliffhangers in the last few chapters. AWFUL! How could you end it there? Although, I would like to ask whether or not English is your first laguage beause the tenses, grammar and sentence structure in some places is WAY off. I can correct it in my head as I go; although it's irksome to do, the story is worth it. But, if you'd like help with it, I've been told I'm quite the editor. Definitely one of the few fanfictions out of thousands I've read that is worth reading, again . . .and again. . .and again. . . . I can even put up with Iruka, the mother hen, as I often find him that way in stories just because Naruto and Sasuke and Gaara are so well portrayed. I'm wating. . .cough, cough. . . more, plaese.
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  • From ANON - raienn on July 17, 2008
    ok. this is my very first review at aff, an I'm reading this more than a year - that cliffhanger just about killed me!!!!! you're evil. I mean that. Howgh.
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  • From lexjamandme on July 17, 2008
    The name of this chapter should have been "When Neji was revealed to be a big poopyhead bastard". Yeah, a little long I suppose, but true!
    Another amazing update, of course. I love Naruto's internal takes on the situation. He is so funny. And when he refuses Sasuke offer for a drink.
    So much came out this chapter. Little Hinata is adorable! What a good friend. And Sasuke handled Neji perfectly.
    Beautiful, as always. Until the next.

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  • From charmpit on July 16, 2008
    So...is Naruto going to ungoof himself long enough to get it on with Sasuke finally? This teasing is driving me insane!

    So, an Uchiha/Hyuuga bitchfest. Saw it coming, but didn't, you know? Nice job on this chapter.

    Characters who need to get laid:

    Neji (most of all, I should say)
    Sasuke
    Naruto
    Iruka (he's had to endure Naruto's nonsense for how long?)


    Please hook one or all four of them up with someone before this fic is over.

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  • From crazychemgeek on July 16, 2008
    I love it. I totally don't believe the two would cave all the way just yet, but you gave us a nice taste of what might happen :)
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  • From ANON - SamruaiSaaya on July 09, 2008

    Another exciting chapter. So full of drama and smexiness, I loved it!

    I especially like the intimate conversation Sasuke and Naruto had. It seems that they trust eachother more.

    Please please update soon :)
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  • From Management on July 09, 2008
    Oh... That is mean. Really mean. Seriously. I WANT TO HEAR THE CONVERSATION TOO!!!
    And I want to know who it was. Tch. Seriously!!!!
    Anyway... Poor Hinata. She seems to know what she is doing though... So, go HINATA!!!
    Well, I can't wait for the next update! So let it be soon!!!
    XD LANE
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  • From lexjamandme on July 09, 2008
    It just keeps getting more and more brilliant, doesn't it.
    Hmmm... Naruto will want to hear this conversation? I wonder...
    I guess I have to wait though...
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