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Reviews for The Bachelor Party

By : Hestia
  • From DuosAngel on March 25, 2008
    That was the best oneshot of yours by far! It was so hot and that ending made me tear up! This is my new favorite oneshot and I doubt it'll be replaced.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 23, 2008
    once again i should have known hestia - the best
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  • From ANON - Ivy on March 23, 2008
    This was such a great oneshot! It was too hot for words ;-) Could you write a side fic with Shino/Kiba? You had pretty much every male character and one of my favorite scences was the one with Iruka...who knew he had it in him to be a seme ^_^ I'm glad Neji and Shika got to be together and his speech at the end was really moving. How crafty of him to have that planned all along. It would also be cool if you wrote about the honeymoon, but perhaps that's asking too much...all your fics are fantastic!
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  • From animelovergirl on March 23, 2008
    *looking at the screen, totally stunned*................OH MY FUCKING GOD!!! That had to be the hottest, most amazing, most awesome, most intense, most...whatever...piece of smuttiness I've EVER had the pleasure of reading!!! I sooooo do hope that you'll write e sequel about Neji's and Shika's wedding night! Please, please, pretty please!!!
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  • From kenshinjunkie03 on March 22, 2008
    two words: hot damn! wow-zas! i somehow knew neji might marry shika, but the bachelor party was the best one i've ever heard of (you rock^_^V)
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  • From sweetciel on March 22, 2008
    Oh mercy...there is no way that could have been any hotter. You are like THE yaoi goddess. This fangirl is thoroughly worked up. I think i need a cold bath. Wonderful story! I need to go change my undies ^_^
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 22, 2008
    That was INSANE!!!!!!! Good lord, I don't think I've read that much sex in one one-shot, or any other fanfic EVER!
    Jesus Christ....
    Great job. Loved the twist ending.
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  • From charmpit on March 22, 2008
    No fair! Shino should have been packing the most equipment. Why did it have to be Sai?

    And why wasn't Jiraiya invited to the bachelor party?
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  • From ANON - R on March 22, 2008
    OMG! So hot! Great story. :D
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  • From Nanaka on March 22, 2008
    wow, that was really go~od. Definately adding this to my favorites!
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  • From Mignonne422 on March 22, 2008
    *is puddle of goo*

    DEAR GOD GODDESS! You ARE trying to kill me!!!!

    *flails*
    Fuck. That was so insanely, absurdly HOT that words defy me!! OMG! OMFG!! It had everything!!! Absolutely everything and anything! The DPs and the rimming and the fisting and oh gods Kakashi!! WOW! He is one dangerously sexy jounin! *drool*
    Aiiiee! And Shino! And Kiba!! And oh, heavens, Sai!!
    And ngghhh! Possesive Sasuke rocks my world and apparently Naruto's too XD

    There was like a nuclear explosion,a level five hurricane and an 8.0 earthquake of HOTNESS all rolled into one!!!

    And the lovemaking...I melted. I absolutely and completely melted at end with Shika's requet for Neji's hand and his proposal, Goddess. Shika is such pure, brilliant, unadultered, genius win! I'm soo so happy they get each other, cause they so obviously adore each other to pieces. I mean, a white, milky stone to match Neji's eyes? *dreamy sigh*

    PERFECT!! LOVE IT!!! I can't give you enough stars for this. Stars to nth degree for you!!! And then some!

    Muah!

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  • From Raholea on March 22, 2008
    .....
    *faints*


    that ended perfectly... damn, but that was hot, wild, steamy..
    you know this already. my words couldn't do it justice...
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  • From llyoung on March 22, 2008
    Love that Shika had everything planned from the beginning. Wonderful bachelor party and I'm sure that Neji and Shika will have an absolutely wonderful honeymoon.
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