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Reviews for The Village Hidden by Tenshi's (Title change)

By : 198027
  • From ANON - solitare1 on October 03, 2014
    I do really llove this story. I hope you are still writing on it,, it would.be such a waste of a good story if you dropped it. Please come back.
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  • From ANON - Katlin Malfoy on February 19, 2013
    TENSHI!!!!! you best finish this story i love it ad i will be sorely disappointed and depressed if its not finished and i ave to fret and worry over what might happen or not happen
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  • From SIMHEAD75 on June 03, 2012
    Brilliant story looking forward to more, also love your other story that led to this one.
    good luck writing more chapters
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  • From ANON - Fayth on March 29, 2011
    You seem to be doubting your writing skills a lot, but you really shouldn't. I don't think I would have stay up all night to read a piece of junk and it's sequel.
    I really love your story. You write the characters so well, and I love how the children are. I didn't think there was too much angst at all, there was just enough to balance the story out and make it more serious. And I like the humour in this. I definitely wouldn't want to be around a pregnant Naruto.
    I think you stopped the story at the right place, it would have just been dragging on if you had written too much more. The sequel is like starting a new story. The last one was about them running from Konoha and then returning. (Basically the story centred around the village a lot) and this one seems to be about their journey in starting a new village of their own and the hurdles along the way (mainly Hiashi.)
    You can correct me if I've miss-interpreted anything and I'm really sorry if I have, but bottom line I love this story and have enjoyed reading it immensely.
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  • From ANON - -TDaL on June 14, 2009
    I know you haven't updated in a long time, but I really love this fic and I truely hope that you'll find the insperation to continue again soon!
    -ThoughDarknessandLight (ff.net)
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  • From hsosborne on June 12, 2009
    OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com

    btw when you were talking about the new headbands the first thing that popped up in my mind, instead of angels on them, was a wing like on this site I'm on...one of the avatar items is a forehead protector with a wing...btw your b-day is the day before mine ^_^
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  • From ANON - POHness on November 15, 2008
    i cant wait to see what else you have coming up for this story!! this last chapter was great!!!!!
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  • From ANON - XZanayu on October 02, 2008
    That Haishi will never learn and what does he think this rogue group will do against elite ninjas and two angels of death? Idiot! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From solitare1 on October 02, 2008
    I love this series but I have one question, What about the orphans in the village? Since everyone is gone, is Hiashi going to make use of them or are they going to be rescued. Just asking because Naruto has a special place in his heart for them and so does Iruka. But that could also be another story in your arc, ne?? Keep up the great work and I'll keep on reading!!
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  • From monrque on September 30, 2008
    I AM SO GLAD TO SEE YOU

    thought that well i don't know
    thank you for updating
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 30, 2008
    I'm sorry that things haven't been working out for you. Hopefully, things will get better.
    I like the title change. It suits the story better.
    I hope nothing bad happens to the people that chose to stay in the village; they are probably just afraid of what might happen to them if they try to leave.
    This neo-Akatsuki group... I wonder what is their ultimate goal besides just causing havoc.
    Great chapter! Keep going!


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  • From EzriCandy on September 30, 2008
    Wow, I'm not disappointed in the slightest! I love the fact that all of Naru and Sasuke's friends and 'family' are in the village of Tenshis. You're doing a great job on this and I hope things get better in real life.

    Please, if you need a beta, I can help you out with the spelling errors. I won't admit to being perfect because no one is, but I'd be happy to help with such great stories :)

    Ezzy
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  • From ANON - Avalon on August 19, 2008
    MORE MORE MORE darnit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! such a good story! i loved the Crimson Angel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more!!!!!
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  • From nyge98 on June 08, 2008
    The chapter was fine. I hope you get well soon and take good care of yourself. I'll be waiting for the next chapter when its ready
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  • From demona013 on May 27, 2008
    Woohoo new chapter. Cant wait for the next one.
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