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Reviews for Uchiha-cest

By : DemyxsSitarGirl
  • From ANON - Belial on March 16, 2008
    Research wether you really are the first "Uchiha-cest" fic writer before you claim you are. I love Sasuke and Itachi and many others do too. The type of person that would click knows better. There has been plenty of "Uchiha-cest" here before. For example "Mile High Club" was an beautiful example of an AU story. Also (not as the main pairing) "D-s Naruto" was an very good story as well.

    And claiming that you have written the good stuff in your summary is very egotistical and does not in anyway make me want to click. Also your story was very short. Do you have a beta? If you would like a beta then please by any means email me.

    This review is NOT A FLAME! It may be a little harsh, but it is the truth, and I say all of this to be helpful.

    -Belial
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  • From EstherJolie on March 16, 2008
    for a first try it wasn't that bad but you should edit it and make pauses between sentenses and the like its to much loaded to read it peacefully I had some problems wit reading and seeing when something ended and where it began
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