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Reviews for What We Are

By : Elli
  • From ANON - Angel on December 09, 2008
    Hey! I read this the other day off fanfiction.net and was moved by it but I couldn't find the link to comment on afterwards - I copy stories to word so I could blow them up to better read you see :)

    There is only one fault with this - the time that it took for the whole scene and the whole admittance is rather short, knowing these two, and all their head issues lol but otherwise smack on with characterisation, angst, history, the whole schmackeroo!

    You did really well with the portayal of the battle and I could honestly sense, feel the electricity humming - in the air, the skies, their bodies etc... Well done!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on April 20, 2008
    This was really good...not graphic but heartfelt =)
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  • From Picspixie on April 19, 2008
    omg that was so beautiful, that's exactly what they are and the exchange between the two was so heartfelt it was amazing, keep up the awesome work :P
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on April 18, 2008
    I loved that I could feel the emotion of both Sasuke and Naruto. It was great!
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  • From ANON - swafford duh on March 16, 2008
    That was amazing! I loved the ending!
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  • From ANON - swafford duh on March 16, 2008
    That was amazing! I loved the ending!
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  • From anapana83 on March 15, 2008
    I liked it alot. I definitely felt the emotion there. Nice job. Wish you luck in your future writing.
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  • From ANON - animelover on March 15, 2008
    whoa, that was just ... wow! beautiful is a good word, but doesn't quite come close. sorry i can't say more but this was a delicious and moving fic to read.
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  • From roelyrodriguez1 on March 15, 2008
    very nice! well written, very in character! ur a great writer

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  • From Rymika on March 15, 2008
    Rymika: This... this was so good! *says with tears in her eyes* So much emotion and... and well! It was compleatly beautiful and utterly romantic! *almoust drowning in tears* I... I loved it! *colapses from emotional brake down*
    Naruto: Hey, I think she's dead!
    Sasuke: Baka, she's just couldn't handle that much emotion.
    Naruto: Oh, so it was that good eh?
    Sasuke: Hn
    Naruto: I take that as a yes, well then teme help me to plounder her pocets while she's still out.

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  • From despairs on March 15, 2008
    I loved Sasuke's answer to Naruto's question. I feel like they are Soulmates as well.

    My favorite line in the story...

    They nuzzle like affectionate kittens, mouths open, and Sasuke feels his disobedient lips twitch into a smile.

    “We’ll have this forever.”

    I'm a major sucker for a happy ending.
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  • From ANON - kris on March 15, 2008
    that was fan-fucking-tastic, it was soooo believable and HOT and sad and happy and everyTHING!
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  • From SuChAbAKa on March 15, 2008
    You asked, if this made me feel anything, to review. So I am. You made it so real.. I felt as if it could actually happen. As if that could actually happen in the real anime/manga. It almost made me cry..
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  • From Raelyn on March 15, 2008
    It was a good emotional piece, but it just didn't feel right at the end. I was with you right until the last line, cause it just didn't seem like Sasuke to abandon everything else that he had worked for. Or maybe that's not what he was doing. I don't know, it just felt like a weird place to end I guess.

    However, I very much liked the route you took to describe the emotions/feelings.

    I look forward to seeing more.
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